Honkai Impact: Herrscher's Star Rail Journey

I have been playing Honkai Impact III since the server was launched until now. This novel allowed me to see the faded elf lady change from a twisted Ellie chef to a normal Ellie chef. Although the author's writing is really good, I still dare not live in the promised land [facepalm][facepalm]

I am very curious about the expressions of the Golden Descendants and Xi Lian when I arrived at the Omphalos Meeting. If this book can be written that far, you, the author, will definitely write about it, right? [Smile]

Lift the blanket of memory and take away the ripples of the past. Abduct the saint of destiny and capture the stray cat. The weaver who teases the holy city, the miracle doctor who carries the morning light. Defeat the chess-playing monarch and capture the fish swimming in the abyss. The maid who embraces life and death, listens to the sighs of the arguer. Caress the necessary pain and wipe away the tears of the burning sun. Embrace your immortal companions and write a new ending. [Cover face][cover face]

In the middle and later stages of the book, there is a faint shift to semi-group portraits, and the protagonist is directly dominated by Ellie, so it is a bit subtle to bring the body feeling of herself as the main character. The development of the plot is okay. Although it is never frustrated, it is not completely satisfying. It is like the awkward feeling of having to borrow someone else's nuclear bomb when something happens when you clearly have a nuclear bomb but the button is welded shut. Maybe I am not used to it because I have read too many harem stories. The depth of the content is not enough for my personal experience, but it doesn't hurt. The author has a comprehensive understanding of the text of the game, which allowed me to fully understand the world. However, the rhythm of some branches is slightly stiff. Other than that it's pretty good

To be honest, it's not as beautiful as I imagined. This kind of running story follows the plot of the original work, but it is still difficult to write your own plot and style. I have seen some other works, such as "Capture the Black Tower or Be Captured by Her", which are works with many private settings. I really like this kind of work. I would rather see "a lot of things I don't know", rather than follow the plot of the original work without even changing the nodes. (Although the Belloberg chapter does have its own private settings and changes), but it has eroded the Herrscher, and it also follows the plot. As a genius, can you create some backup plans? After all, it's two souls, and it's still Ellie, so I think it can be improved. I gave up the game when I saw Belloberg. It's not that it doesn't look good, the points are definitely given to me. If this was the first story I read that followed the plot, I would probably follow it to the end. But since I saw the works of authors who truly wrote about what the characters in my heart experienced, believed in, and cared about, I still chose to give up. I hope the author can get better and better, because until half of the plot of Beloberg, it feels like a complete backwater with no ups and downs. What if you encounter a problem that the three little ones can't solve? I admit her belief and passion to protect her companions and the world, but I don't feel like she has expressed it at all. If you have described it in subsequent chapters, just pretend I didn't say it. Okay, that's it, I'm very happy to leave you a book review

I have read Chapter 53 so far, and what makes me most satisfied is that Xiao Eclipse, as a genius, does have his own research, unlike some, where genius is just a title. In addition, this book contains many of the author's ingenious ideas about energy and the evolution of small eclipses (can you say that?). And the most important point is that there is really no OOC in this book. It's really fun, so cool!

By the way, what is Bengtie's definition of "nothingness"? If it is described as a special "existence" or "state" rather than pure "nothing" as in "existentialism" and some literary settings, then I think the protagonist can "erode" the "empty state" of "nothingness." The "products" of "erosion" may be "existence", "laws", "definitions" or derived from the "sea of ​​definitions". If these "products" are "eroded", then the protagonist can be regarded as a "creator god" in a certain sense; conversely, if the protagonist "erodes" "existence", it will be classified as "nothingness". In this way, the protagonist is both the "ultimate weapon" and the "source of all things". And we know that the protagonist and Ellie are in the same body, so can the protagonist be the "ultimate weapon" and Ellie the "source of all things" [Thinking]

It's good to watch, but there's a problem. The quarrel between Heita and Screw is actually a play for Silver Wolf.

I chase and chase, I chase with all my heart, I hope to see a better work than the last one 😀 Come on, author

I just finished the plot today and found out that Ompharos is a world of data, so Ino was no longer a one-shot [laughter]

The plot is quite interesting, but the protagonist's abilities have been reduced a lot compared to the original erosion, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to watch. But I still hope the author can add more, it's not enough.

Long live erosion, long live, ten thousand, ten thousand, ten thousand, ten thousand, ten thousand!

Next is the main event of Ompharos. I hope the author can not rush and polish it carefully. The transitional chapter in the middle can be longer to wait for the decisive battle of 3.7 Iron Curtain. It will not be too late to write in detail after everything has settled.

It's very good from the previous book. The author's writing style is not bad. And it's always improving.

I've followed it all the way from the first chapter, so let me briefly share my evaluation. This fanfic is well written. From the various details in the article, it can be seen that the author really has a deep understanding of Star Iron's world view. As the reborn Ino, he has also opened up a new path. The character design is very full, and the integration into the main plot is not obtrusive. I hope the author can continue his efforts and polish the plot line of Omphalos, and look forward to future updates.

The characters are online, the plot is relaxed and relaxed, the heroine is the eroding Herrscher of modern civilization, and she is not OOC at all.

The Lily article about erosion is quite good.

I really like the character of the protagonist, it's really nice [Adoration]

Couldn't we Ino easily save Ompharos?

It is a very, very delicious book. It is so delicious that I can spend a week chewing it slowly and thinking about it again and again. The author's writing is great. I don't care if the story is full, but I hope this journey can be perfect. Best wishes~

Reading the author's big book is like tasting honey. The scene where Ino and Ellie stick together is something I didn't see in Paradise, but I saw it in Bengtie [Sending Hearts] By the way, will Ellie die later? What we are talking about here is fake death, but Ino thought she was dead, so she turned into a yandere. Later, she found Ellie again and imprisoned her~(*^ω^*)~

It looks good, I hope it won't look like Poria cocos.

Always there, come on

I like this part about the genius better. Can the author add some drama to the identity of the genius? [Like] [Laughs]

It suits my taste. At least there is nothing unreasonable in the plot (there are too many that I can't tell).

Combining the plot of Beng 3, HE and Beng Tie fans, the connection is very smooth.

Cocolia is dead?

Come and learn how to elbow Bo Shi Zun

Looking forward to Ompharos later [laughing evilly]

I like to see the friendly interaction between Wei Bao and Ai Li.