A Stone Tablet Was Erected to Help My Family Cultivate Immortality!

Now that I have read Chapter 17, this book gives me the feeling that the shadow of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan is too heavy. But when I saw the fourth son of the Zhou family, I thought of the fourth son of the Li family, but my overall feeling was good. Here I would like to give the author some advice. I hope the author will not imitate the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, especially the Sword Man, because firstly, the author, your writing style is not as good as that of Ji Yueren, after all, Ji Yueren was the one who wrote articles in his early years. Secondly, if you, the author, blindly imitate As for Xuanjian Xianzu, this book is destined to hit the street, because most of the people on Tomato are students. They originally wanted to read cool articles due to high academic pressure, so this is the reason for Sanjiu's success. But Sanjiu cannot reach his current height in terms of ideas and writing skills. Finally, I hope you, the author, will not be a mess! ! ! !

A very good book on family cultivation. The four brothers start as mortals, brothers, friends and brothers, united and loving. The Golden Finger Stone, after being charged every few years, can give mortals spiritual roots, exercises and spells to cultivate immortality. It is suspected that it can also strengthen spiritual roots and enhance spell talents. In short, the stone tablet can ensure that the family inheritance continues and becomes stronger and stronger. The boss, who is suspected to be the protagonist, is responsible for wisdom and strength, but there is not much focus on it. The second head of the family is responsible for handling the family's miscellaneous items. The third sister felt sorry for herself because of her poor five-lingen talent, so she chose to search mountains and farm. The fourth and third spiritual geniuses joined the sect to open up a new path. Overall, there aren't too many disturbances. The family is farming and cultivating immortality. There isn't much hostility. It's not like there are so many disputes in other novels. The author's writing style is good, so even if the plot does not advance quickly, there is still a touch of family warmth and a feeling of working hard together.

The writing is good, but it is obviously imitated and borrowed from "Xuanjian Xianzu". If nothing else happens, the fourth brother will die. Although there are many imitations, I think this is a good family story written in Tomato. Others are either time travel or pseudo-group portraits. I recommend the author to read a novel called "Mortal Immortals", which is also in Tomato. Thanks.

Not bad, really good, come on, author!

The description is detailed and feels good.

What does this stone tablet rely on to charge?

It's good to read. It's really good. I really like this style of novel.

It can be said that it is a good replacement for Xuanjian. The author also has his own ideas. Compared with Xuanjian, it is a little less sharp. I hope the author will do more. [Sending my heart]

Oh, it's quite beautiful, although I also want to see that, some ancestors. But you have to spend money, so forget it, Tomato novels are pretty good too.

It's well written. Beast control should be developed further.

So far it's pretty good, I'm looking forward to the next episode. Author update soon [laughing]

The writing is pretty good, I hope I can stick with it. [Working on draft]

It's good to watch🤩, this movie is pretty good, the subject matter is novel

It's pretty good. Come on.

Cool Kaka is totally fine

Family stories are very appetizing

It's pretty good. I'm chasing it every day now.

It's pretty good, but it's a little lacking. Good luck to the author.

It has great potential and is worth exploring [Thinking][Thinking][Cool]

Although there are indirect aspects, there are no major poisonous points so far. I think it is well written. Well worth reading for both new and old bookworms

Give yourself an evaluation [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

So will Lingran die? [Wronged]

Overall it's okay, but it doesn't have an accurate protagonist The author still has to work hard [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon]