Magical Girl Seniors Can't Be Wives.

This book is so good, I hope the author will update it more often. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss] I hope you can give me more suggestions and I will try my best to modify them.

Emmmm, this game has to end. I'm curious if the protagonist can bring this game's template with him to the next game.

Move towards the other side! Take your hand. Toward a place that only the heart knows. Flying mysteriously. Just like what I saw in this star dream. The shining sky. Calling you from afar. There are still echoes of longing. Let the sadness spread. Rushing towards the roadless future. Turn over a new page. The world is waiting for you. If you can have a bright heart. If you go through all the time. Always believe in it. You'll always get somewhere. The sky is blue and bright. The breeze sparkled. Like a small silver bell. The incredible song of the unknown. At the end of that long night. Wake the dawn to ringing harmonies. No matter how fleeting it is. It also announces the starting moment. Because the world is still here for you. Hide the joy. Flying mysteriously. Towards the other side of the tears that I pursue closely. Toward. A dazzling tomorrow.

After reading it, it's actually not that good, but I think the new author can be considered supportive. The novels reviewed by the author are all not that good. None of them are good or popular. The technique is very poor. I have some good ones in my bookshelf. If there are more basic updates, there are some that you can read and learn from.

(Purely my own subjective opinion. If you think what I said is wrong, please express it properly and don't attack me [crying]) Currently, 99 chapters have been updated and I have read them all. How can I put it, the author's writing is still good so far, and the characters are also impressive. But some places may still seem thin. For example, the two important plots of the nightingale's sacrifice and the protagonist's sacrifice of himself to purify the world do not feel separated enough from other plots. That is to say, the knife is not fast enough and does not meet my personal psychological expectations. I even feel that Nightingale's offline is too hasty, and the emotion and atmosphere are gone before they can be set off. Of course, it could also be caused by me being in a trance while reading a book in the middle of the night. But having said that, I am still willing to give it five stars, and I am also looking forward to the subsequent development of the plot and the author's performance. I hope the whole book will get better and better and the ratings will get higher and higher [laughs]

Quite a novel time-travel setting Only after reading later did I realize that the words in parentheses at the beginning meant this... It is not such a way to suppress when you want to promote! The last time I saw such a desperate situation was in The Naming Technique of the Night...

This book is okay. The author has read the book by Chief, so the plots may be somewhat similar.

The writing is good, the story line is clear, and the emotional line is natural. Is it just that the heroine in each world is the same? Why is the scoring mechanism of 🍅 so strange? Obviously many people give it five stars, but the rating still can't go up? 🤔Also, the May Day holiday is about to pass. Author, I beg you [crying][crying][crying] Don't stop, you must keep going😭😭😭

Yes, come on, author

It's very beautiful, the emotions are portrayed delicately, and it feels like you're following an anime. Although many words have been heard, the author arranged these appropriate words at the right time, making it difficult not to be moved by the plot. And I also agree with the author's views on family love, but no matter what the final result is, for me it is better to be together. After all, life is already very uncomfortable, and the virtual world is still a happy ending.

Beautiful, well written

Personally, it's pretty good

Want to kill me? Then I'll wait until you finish writing The Knife before I read it [Smile] Then there's You. One chapter has more than 4,000 words. When I was reading it, I saw that it only had more than 120 chapters. I thought the author was going to stop updating it. Then I saw that the word count was 400,000. [Smile] If I changed it to another book with 400,000 words, I could write 180 or 200.

Five stars, the author is great, can Xiaoxin please stop writing to death (I'm afraid the author will learn how to roast chicken)

It's a great book, but I read it as a Baiwen. I don't know if there will be any plot about Jiang Xin later. If not, then I would like to ask the author why he chose a title like Baiwen? I was deceived into this book because of the title. But there is no doubt that this is indeed a good book. Even if there is no plot of Jiang Xin in the back, I will continue reading it, but I hope the author can give an explanation.

I like the author's description very much, the writing style is very good. I like the emotions of the characters in the book, they are more than just a simple character. They have their own feelings, such as Jiang Xin. But the label of this book also indicates that there will be many worlds. Judging from the protagonist's current performance, the protagonist is a person who values ​​emotions. I wonder what will happen if he goes back? What will happen to the characters in this world? Looking forward to it[laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

When I watched it, it gave me a feeling like BlackSouls (Reincarnation of Despair), Beng San (God of Disaster), Lobe (Cut Off the Cycle), Enshen, etc., But it was pretty good. The hope in despair was well expressed (but the feeling relied on Fanhua). Fanhua's death at the end reflected the despicability of human nature very well, which was very good, but the emotional line was flawed, but it was still very good.

Very pretty. It's just where did the system go?

It's great, the bursts of emotions are very delicate, and the inner conflicts of the characters are well portrayed.

The quality of the book is quite high. After all, it is the author's first book. Although there are some minor flaws in the plot, the flaws are not outweighed. Anyway, good luck, author. I will keep pursuing this book. The main reason is that I still admire people like the author. I hope the author can succeed as soon as possible.

The back looks better than the front

Very good. I like it very much "Send to the Author Who Will Not Update in May" Fantasy dreams become chapters, stars serve as guides, and colorful clothes move the world. It is said that the story is about to begin, but the time has not yet returned. I browsed through the old articles without any words to explain them, but I could only find the wind on the side pages. You said, "I will wait for the day to come." May has been deleted with the spring scenery. (Emphasis on the last two sentences) May has gone, has the author thought about it? Let me tell you more. If you want to update it, you can give it some time.

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A hopeless man meets a world filled with hope

When I have time, I will summarize it and then write a book review. The main thing is to improve my work habits.

The overall feeling is good, the author will continue to work hard

It's a very good book, but the details are too rushed and some parts look strange.

The story has ups and downs, and the unity and friendship of the magical girls, but the first world is too long, I hope the author can end this story as soon as possible [Blow kiss]

Nice looking, For cp, I hope I don't want a harem and everything else is fine.

Meets all my imagination of magical girls