The Immortal Villain's Road to Another World

The writing style is above average, not particularly bad, and it's quite comfortable to read. The author's writing pace should be slow. Chapter 60 only talks about a few scenes and a few things. Especially the first 40 chapters, I think it can only be regarded as foreshadowing. The main plot of the story begins after Chapter 40. The plot is not particularly exciting, the protagonist is not Long Aotian, and the beginning is still very sad. However, the story becomes more exciting after Chapter 40, and a lot of daily life is added as the main plot progresses, so it is suitable for fun. . . And the author really likes to play with memes. I don't really watch anime, I only know that there are jokes about Jojo and Arnold in it. All in all, I think it has a lot of potential. Although it has its problems, the flaws should not be outweighed. The first 60 chapters are still very interesting. I saw the end of Lakeside City in Chapter 100, and the heroine was well portrayed.

It's good to watch, and it brings me back to the feeling I had when I watched Another World: Riqing a few years ago. The dialogue and plot arrangements are very powerful. The author is competent. It's just too short [face covering], and I don't know why the rating is so low.

(Western Fantasy + Anti-routine Growth + Evil God's Authority + Dark Redemption) Su Yun traveled to another world with the "Dream of the Brave", but became the successor to the evil god's authority. After being tricked into joining the Witch Cult, he was forced to put on the mask of a villain and struggle to survive between destruction and redemption. ——Saving the innocent is the cry from the bottom of my heart. His immortality allowed him to tear a ray of life out of the darkness. Slow-burn plot warning: This is not an invincible cool novel Reading tips: 1. No system, no harem. 2. The foreshadowing is recycled in the long term, and the world view unfolds layer by layer; 3. No knife (laughing) [grass has been planted]

It's an interesting story, and the author doesn't have any cliché ideas. It deserves 5 points. [Like] The more I read, the more comfortable I become. The story and world view gradually unfold. It depends on how the author writes later and whether he can describe the characteristics of the demons and humans in the world view. From the current description, there is no need for the demons and humans to be "defeated". What is written on the back? The more you write, the narrower it becomes. If you change the map just for the sake of changing the map, just write it hard. The readers are not happy, and the protagonist is not happy either, so what are we looking at?

The writing is quite good, the plot design is very smooth, the relationships and emotions between the characters are very detailed, and the characters are well-developed. Although the subject matter is ordinary, the performance is excellent. Except that the writing skills need to be improved and the writing style has a Japanese comic flavor, it is already at the ration level.

Looking for a unique novel in a pile of novels like Tomato with homogeneous plots and routines is like looking for a needle in a haystack. I have only read twenty chapters now. I personally feel that it is quite good. The writing and plot are very good. I hope more people can see this work

It's good to read, and the writing is very humorous. I like the kind-hearted character of the protagonist. Are there any similar books? It seems like he's watching Today's novels are all about killing decisively, being awesome and coaxing, and not attacking others until others attack them. They give people a feeling of an indifferent world, and the world they depict is just like this. The books are very exciting to read but very empty. After watching too much, I feel the same, which is very refreshing but also very tiring. So now I'm looking for an entertainment-oriented novel with a kind-hearted protagonist and a relaxed and interesting writing style. This book is like that. It feels so good to not feel tired after reading it, and to still have a smile on my lips. But after reading the latest chapter, I feel so uncomfortable waiting for the update. Do you have any other book recommendations?

To be honest, the writing is good, but the publicity is not good enough. If the author is willing to finish the book, he can send the book to the "Book Desert Square" and litter it everywhere. It should attract a lot of people. However, if too many people read it, some of the contents of this book will lead to the death of the book.

This novel is very good, especially the emotional dispute between Claire and the protagonist. I hope the author can write more and more details, including the dialogue between the two of them and the plot [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I came for a massage with my friends after get off work. The environment of this shop is so comfortable😌. The decoration is fashionable, the space is spacious and clean, and the privacy is good. As soon as you enter, you feel relaxed physically and mentally. The technician's technique is very professional and the intensity is moderate. The massage is completely smooth and there is no feeling of fatigue at all. And the price is reasonable and the price-performance ratio is super high. It's money well spent👏! The writing style is very beautiful, every sentence is carefully crafted and every paragraph is full of emotion. The author uses various rhetorical techniques, such as metaphors, personification, symbols, etc., Making the whole novel full of poetry and artistry. [Thinking][thinking]

Good book, but the male protagonist's fighting ability is a bit problematic, but! This is also the advantage of this book. It has nothing to do with talking a lot and most of them lack humor, but! It's still acceptable, after all, there are too many 👀, and this is all to bring out the attractive topics below! In summary, it's a good read and has some high-level laughs that make people laugh out loud (I hope there are more)

A spring will lose its elasticity if it is oppressed by foreign objects for a long time, and our spirit will also lose its elasticity if it is often pressured by other people's thoughts - "Reading and Books" Schopenhauer

Very good, hope to keep it up

This Western fantasy is well written. It is like a magic cocktail. After drinking it, the whole person gets high.

The world is different because of its richness and colour, and the characters are vivid and interesting. This book exudes a fresh feeling and is full of writing and imagination.

It's pretty cool, but I feel like the combat power will collapse later on.

How shameless, and can you come up with more counter-routines?

Okay, so far it seems okay [laughs][laughs]

The best thing I've seen so far

It looks good, I love watching it, I want to watch it more, I enjoy watching it.

It's a bit low, I'll give it a try and see again.

I hope Pigfoot will become stronger as soon as possible and don't be unable to decide your own destiny.

Hao Kan, because of his personality, it would be a little uncomfortable to always be deflated, but I guess Su Yun will definitely kill everyone in the future, haha

What kind of ending can be worthy of Laosu's ups and downs? Being kicked like a ball by humans in the human territory, and being kicked like a ball by the demons in the demon territory, Lao Su has suffered all his life [laughing]

Interesting, step-by-step adventure story. I like it very much.

It's a very interesting novel with a different world theme. Why is the rating so low? The writing is smooth and the plot is good. I think it should be above 9 points.

The writing is smooth and powerful, with the conflict between the protagonist and Claire, the protagonist's anger and Claire's unresolved misunderstanding. It's a very good novel

Well, this novel is quite good, but the emotional changes are a bit fast. Although I hate it in the beginning, it doesn't matter in the end. It's just that the first few pictures may be a bit discouraging, so I suggest the author say this in advance, otherwise it's easy to get bad reviews.

Okay, it tastes good

Nice looking, quite fun