Yushou: We Have Severed All Ties, Why Are You Begging Me to Go Home?

The writing is very good, and it is different from the conventional beast control novels. It is worth reading. The only thing is that I hope Luo Xinyuan will go offline as soon as possible. It makes me sad to watch him jumping around without dying [facepalm]. He doesn't have to be the stepping stone. You can let the male protagonist encounter other stepping stones. I don't want to see him jumping around [facepalm] [facepalm]

The story can always focus on the theme. There is no hammer here and there, nor does it collapse after writing like other articles. It's good [I understand]

Very nice, highly recommended! The front is a bit similar to the routine of regret flow. I guess it's the author's popularity, but the back has his own things. Anyway, I quite like it [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Personally, I think this book is readable, but there are too many toxic points (currently 439 chapters). As a new writer, there is still a lot of room for improvement. Here I will list my personal opinions for everyone (it's just a personal opinion). 1. The killing is not decisive enough, and the skills are left out. There's nothing much to say about the protagonist's rebirth + system routine. But he's not decisive enough in killing and he's not cautious enough as a reborn person. Instead, he has a kind of [arrogance? ] He has a heaven-defying skill like "Forbidden Eye" but he doesn't use it very well. 2. Too many emotional lines As the saying goes, "If there is no woman in the heart, the god of nature draws the sword." Too many emotional lines will give the protagonist crises and opportunities. Take "Liu Yinyin" after chapter 400 for his own selfish desires, which will have an immeasurable impact on the protagonist later on. But at the same time, "Tang Yueqi" should also be of great help to the protagonist in the later stage, but considering that the characters in the later stage may also be female characters, I won't make too many comments for the time being. (If the Yin and Yang body splits later and breaks into the Black Society, and there are a lot of dramas that finally merge into one, I will abandon it) 3. Character creation A common problem for new writers is that they don't develop enough characters. It's not a good thing for the protagonist's character to be too kind in a rebirth novel. The same goes for other characters more or less. 4. Strength (bloodline) expansion In the early descriptions of the beast-controlling bloodline, the higher the level, the less. But now it is a legend and there are many myths. 5. System The system's sense of presence is too low. I don't want to see the system's achievements buried. All in all, this book can be read, but there are many poisonous points. I hope the author will polish it in the following articles. Give 3 (basic rating stars) + 1 (encouragement) 4 stars here I hope that the author @ will continue to update and polish the article carefully. Don't leave it unfinished or abandon the article. I look forward to new plots [][ Eat Melon][ Eat Melon]

Able to judge the situation and be patient, instead of mindlessly killing for the sake of pleasure, yes, yes [like]

Very able to capture readers' appetite

Looks good! ! ! Five stars! Must be five stars!

Really beautiful, I highly recommend it.

If no one gives you a five-star review, I will give it to you. Keep up the good work and don't care about the low scores.

It's okay. It's just that the family plot is not very good and I don't like it very much. Everything else is pretty good. Also, the dragon feels a bit weak in combat, but overall it's good [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon]

The foreshadowing and plot direction are pretty good, I'm looking forward to it I think the rating is too low🌚💪

It has a unique flavor and is very polarizing. Those who like it really like it, and those who don't like it can't stand it at the beginning. But I personally still like it [laughing and crying]

It's okay, not mindless

I like it very much, but it's a little too late to punish the Luo family.

Super pretty! Really beautiful

I hope I can combine the yin and yang bodies

That's what I think. Is it possible that the author has written female videos before? "

This is the first complete novel I have read on Tomato. I personally think this book is generally good. (This is just a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it) The protagonists and protagonists in this novel are pretty well portrayed, and the plot at the beginning and middle is very interesting. However, the appearance of the two demon kings at the end is a little rushed, and it's a bit unfinished. But it also gave me a good fantasy novel. All speeches are my personal opinions only

I don't understand why the rating is so low, it's obviously so good. Look Although I feel that the protagonist has been dragging his feet and letting Luo Xinyuan live for so long, I was speechless and frustrated, but the plot of the protagonist's Yin body and Yang body is really interesting.

I feel like this is a good first book for a new author. It deserves encouragement [Like][Like][Like]

Very nice, but a bit short

It's the author's first book. It's good to be able to write it like this. I just hope that the typos will be corrected and there are a lot of mistakes. Just keep working hard.

It looks good, I love watching it, and I want to watch it again.

Very good very good

It's a good article, but it's not as enjoyable as some people describe it [exploration]

It's a good book that you can read with your mind.

Good-looking, good-looking, yes, yes, very beautiful.

Reborn and reached the position of the strongest beast master. (The regret of the former family, the joy of the original family, and a happy ending.)

It's great to watch, but the main character isn't decisive enough.

It's really good. I hope the author can make it longer.