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Overall, it's pretty good-looking, with novel themes and a high female content, but I feel like the background is not explained very clearly, and Goldfinger is obviously big, but it's a bit frustrating. So far, I don't have any useful employees. I finally got two decent ones, one was poisoned, one turned from being loyal to a traitor, and the others ran away like crazy... I also feel that the author doesn't know how to write fighting scenes, but I'm still looking forward to the follow-up. You can write about employee issues, but not too many. Your theme is management. Everyone wants to see how you run a weird amusement park, but you lingered on your employees for too long, which makes the heroine very incompetent. The most important thing is how many times did you stop at chapter 50? ? ?

A ghostly version of a weird business simulation game. The plot is very abstract but I like it. The heroine is very impressive as an amusement park owner! It's just that none of the employees we hired are reliable. The heroine has been busy for many days, but in the end, the only one who really does the work is the heroine [face covering]

It's only chapter 38 now, and the contrast between the protagonist's perspective on the strange world from a game is very interesting, the setting is novel, and the plot is interesting. The characters are well drawn, with distinct personalities, and the switching of perspectives is natural. I also like that the author uses the perspective of other Aboriginal people to describe things that are different from the protagonist. The settings of vampires, saints, and luminaries are all novel. I like the language style of writing about the weird world where the protagonist manages the game's perspective. The rhythm of the plot is okay. Maybe because I am a book reader, I tend to miss some parts, and there are some problems with the connection (I don't know if it's my problem or the work's problem), but it doesn't have a big impact. Let me talk about some minor shortcomings in my personal experience. The protagonist feels a little incomplete when doing something, and is always delayed by other things. In Xiaohei, the protagonist is deceived, and I don't like it that much either. But it's harmless. I hope the author will write better and better in the future! (Almost 100,000 words, only 4 book reviews, the traffic is a bit too low, right?)

Finally a heroine with a non-human mentality! You must make this career bigger and stronger! PS The author's writing style is very sophisticated, and he often explains the plot by describing the perspectives of different supporting characters. I'm going to read the author's other books first!

It's a very novel setting. Looking at the background introduction in the first picture, I thought it would be a step-by-step journey. When I saw the fourth chapter, I wanted to give it five stars. The protagonist is so high-end and it's so exciting. But after finishing it all night long, I feel that all the dissatisfaction points in this book lie with the employees. The first two employees were not very good. One was brainwashed throughout the whole process. I am a human ghost and punched the wall. He rebelled and ran away, and even made the haunted house alien. The other immediately reminded the protagonist after waking up from detoxification and then turned to fool the protagonist. The child he took care of was not worried. I always felt that the description of the child's soul was a trance. The child who had his body taken away must be an old monster, and he was even more worried. He also directly explained the matter of taking the body? The character design of Ge Qiu is indeed solid, but he made a long bet and never chose a protagonist from the beginning to the end, which is really unpleasant to watch. Even if the blood servant has poor character, how can he still plot against the protagonist and still have the promised sixty tourists? There are also knights who are condescending. If they didn't know that you had just plotted against the protagonist, they would have thought they were so noble. The protagonist doesn't care about returning the sun, but I care... ... I really can't choose one of your five camps. . . . The small amount of vomiting was relatively small, and I felt fine after I got offline in time. It's okay if the customer service gets beaten up a lot by the protagonist. In fact, there are many areas regarding the park's infrastructure that could be expanded. I don't know when the bus route will be completed. When I fought with the Saint, I thought I would take the city for myself... But no matter what, I am still full of expectations for the follow-up of this book. I mistakenly thought that I was following the route where everyone bows to the protagonist when they see it.

It's a business article, right? When you watch it, you will feel like you have been transported to a different world. Female protagonist: Chaotic neutral, a very chaotic person, her consciousness may have become unstable under the influence of the game. She is very confusing and will recognize various rules, some of which are social order and good customs, some of which are just her imagination, and some of which are very scary. Under these rules, the heroine will sometimes make very unscrupulous actions, such as starting to do harm without any malice. Most of the abilities are used unconsciously. Paradise: The heroine is very capable and the park has a large layout. Does this seem like a cool novel? The atmosphere of the novel: The overall atmosphere is terrifying, not the horror of darkness and unknown dangers, but the horror of the entire dungeon being forcibly modified by the heroine's weird logic and the heroine herself being so chaotic that it leaves people without a sense of direction. Because the heroine is very chaotic, she often leads to plots that readers don't want to go on. Good events that readers think are okay are turned into bad events due to the heroine's paranoia, making people feel very insecure and disappointed. Summary: Very, very disappointing, quite interesting, but very, very disappointing.

Immortal product, completely my orientation sniper I feel that Xiao Hei has weakened the heroine too much. I hope the author can at least strengthen the heroine's absolute control in the amusement park. Also, after more than 40 chapters, the park has not officially entered into operation. It feels like it has been a mess for too long. When does the author plan to arrange for the park to be profitable and when to arrange a useful employee? It may be a bit frustrating if this situation continues. I hope the battle line will not drag on too long. [Congratulations] Come on, author, you write very well.

The little girl thinks that the setting of this book is very interesting. I finally found a genre that I like. The author should work hard to write it. The little girl thinks that this book is very good. One day, she will be like a roc riding the wind, soaring into the blue clouds, and becoming a hot foreign persimmon [Adoration] [Sending Hearts]

First of all, the most important thing to praise is the female character, most of them are girls, and each has its own characteristics. Then the story is well written and so funny. What if the heroine and her employees are talking nonsense? Hahaha, the heroine has a very clear mind and does not play according to routines. I hope that the subsequent plot will not collapse. I have read a lot of gods and gods. This heroine is unique. She does not stand between humans and ghosts. She just wants to upgrade the game and pass the level. Everything is for upgrading.

I only read a few chapters and I thought it was super interesting.

If you watch it for a long time, you will be confused. It is so confusing that you have no idea where the plot will go.

Very interesting novel, strangely serious

It's a very interesting article. It's not a common business article. It's very interesting. There are many female supporting characters with various personalities~

The heroine just wants to run the park! What's wrong with her? She's just a little girl who just plays business simulation games [Like][Like][Like]

It's an interesting book, but I'm always worried that the author is cheating me [face covering] Has it been blocked?

I just like this psychedelic and crazy energy, like drinking very strong wine... Write quickly, write quickly

Damn, it's fun

I watched the beginning, so far it's great

Posted a follow-up review. Hey, it was very interesting. I liked it.

It has potential, and the heroine is naturally good. However, the restrictions on combat power are a bit confusing, and she is frequently stabbed in the back by her employees. I suggest you directly brainwash her or change it to something weird and squeeze her hard.

This novel is quite interesting.

It's quite fun, Wudiwen

Very interesting setting

Very interesting, I finished watching it in one go

It's a very good article. The author will update it soon. When it's finished, I'll write you a 1,000-word review [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's really beautiful and the setting is interesting

Love to watch good things, set a novel rhythm and relax