23 Years Old in a White Shirt, I Brought My Father-In-Law into the Club!

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day, a certain day, a certain month, a woman was lying weakly on the bed, her face could not hide the paleness. There was a slight smile on his lips. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of her eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update..."

To be honest, this novel is not bad. The heroine has a very good character. She is very kind to the protagonist! ! The basic logic is also online, as is the villain's IQ. What's more, the protagonist rises very quickly, unlike other novels where he takes his time, which is great! ! It's just a little shortcoming. The protagonist rises quickly, no problem, because most of the credit belongs to him, but for supporting characters, there is no need to rise so quickly. It's good to get first-class, second-class, and third-class merit. There is no need to rise to the police rank so quickly. If this novel is worth 10 points, I will give it 9.7 Points! ! It's very interesting. The author should keep it updated! ! [Eat melon][eat melon]

"My gambling father, my sick mother, my broken family, and her new arrival. What I wash is not the feet, but the mud of walking in the world, the edges and misfortunes smoothed by time, the fate of cherishing her, the youthful years of great years, but she is burdened with heavy responsibilities, and she should not have to bear all this." "I still remember her watery eyes and her affectionate gaze that night. She didn't care about my car or my room, but she gave me all the tenderness in the world. At that moment, I was confused. I seemed to see the lost love again, approaching me again." "She put down the box in her hand, picked up the black hair between her lips and teeth, and tied it high. At that moment, the cool light shone on her body and also shone into my heart. At that moment, I could no longer tell whether the throbbing in my heart was because of love. Now that I think about it, it is no longer important." "Today, the bright moon is in the sky, and the beauty is full of thoughts. If I don't go there today, it will seem that I don't understand the charm. Although I have been poor for half my life and have no fame or fortune, I am still willing to add an insignificant touch to her at her best age. Love rises with the bell, but it is difficult to calm down when the bell stops. The origin and fall of the bell, and the fall of the bell is the beauty."

Keep up the good work, not bad! It's just that the male and female protagonists are a bit emotionally conservative.

The plot is compact and the emotional line is relatively fast, but it's a bit too fast and rushed.

It's super beautiful and worth watching.

It was indeed a pleasure to read. Many similar novels cannot be read after reading them. The plot of this book is compact and makes me want to read it. Although many of the cases are familiar, the specific facts of the case have been changed, which is a bit refreshing. Good luck, author, [laughs]

Not bad, but it would be nice to leave a little tail every time and cut the grass and roots.

The male and female protagonists are set online, and the interaction is naturally not awkward. The plot is fast-paced, and the protagonist will also pass on his skills to his teammates. It is not the kind of cool story where one person has to shoulder the responsibility, which is quite good. But there are a few small problems with the details: 1. The points given to major cases, especially those with large scope and influence, are too few and unreasonable; 2. It is always said that the skills are useful, but in fact it still lacks hard-core reasoning skills such as micro-expression analysis and profiling. After all, the protagonist's metaphysical skills cannot be taught to others. These skills can be taught to teammates to make them more powerful. If the protagonist can be given a large number of classic cases from ancient and modern times, both at home and abroad, his experience in handling cases will definitely be sufficient. He will naturally gain experience after seeing more. 3. The protagonist is overly conceited and obviously knows how to disguise, but when he is undercover, he stops pretending because the enemy does not know his teammates. He is not cautious enough.

It is a positive and refreshing criminal investigation article. Although it contains many fictional elements, it is generally very good and worth reading.

It is very beautiful, very beautiful. I wish the author to write it quickly, otherwise I will send you a razor blade. I went to your house and beat you up😠😠😠

It is very interesting and exciting. The plots are interlocking and the conception is rigorous. It reflects that our criminal policemen fight on the front line regardless of hard work and danger in their daily work of solving crimes. The male protagonist has first-class crime-solving ability and a powerful golden finger. He has solved countless major and important cases. The male and female protagonists are also good at solving crimes and love work.

Not bad. It would be better if the author wrote more about the emotional line between the male and female protagonists. Every time the female protagonist appears, it only lasts one or two chapters, which is too few.

This book is quite good. If there are no other books, you can read it. The early stage of solving the case was too fast. It felt like a flash, because I only saw more than 20 pictures. I didn't read the later because I wanted to read other books. The writing about solving the case was okay, but the speed was too fast. There were no other big problems.

More daily life, there are too many police novels, what you wrote is really average, but the policewoman as a girlfriend is good, I suggest you focus more on daily life and less on the main line, there are many novels outside that have richer content than yours.

It's okay. The female lead should have more roles.

It's super good-looking, the female protagonist is the biological tool of the male protagonist, and the female partner is the author's biological daughter.

It's different from all the suspense stories I've read. The suspense stories I've read all have systematic cheats to solve the case. This one is not just about solving the case, but also has the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists. It's very good. They occasionally joke and it's like a warm big family. I can't get enough of it. Moreover, this is the first time I have read a novel with more than 800 chapters. Not a single chapter is nonsense. I feel very happy reading it.

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1. I think systematic novels should not have female protagonists, because many times when the male protagonist uses the system, the female protagonist is suspicious, and the male protagonist fails to explain clearly every time, or the female protagonist is not a police officer. Looking forward to the author's next book^ω^

The book is very good and the chapters are very compact. I hope the author can update it soon. It's not enough.

Criminal investigation system + criminal police profession, perfectly solve crimes. This is a relatively refreshing novel. The plot is compact and the basic logic is online. Even if it is realistic, the plot design is also wonderful. I did not skip a chapter. It is well written. The male and female protagonists have good personalities. The supporting characters also have their own characteristics. I think it is very suitable. I recommend it.

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Generally speaking, to solve a case, you just need to look at the suspect's guilt value. If he is a criminal, you can look in, find his lair, arrest him, and read his mind.

The writing is not particularly good, but the plot is good

Very good, please add more emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists! ! !

It's very beautiful. It's the first time I've seen this type of movie. I confessed my love at the beginning. It escalates very quickly. It's fast-paced and enjoyable. It's very enjoyable.

The plot is intertwined and very good. I hope the interaction between the male and female protagonists will not be too stiff.

The content is rich, the details of solving the case are well controlled, the male and female protagonists are also very sweet, and the emotional line does not take up much, and solving the case is the main line.

Dali, Yuxi and Puerbanna have all been written. Please also write all other cities in Yunnan.