My Brother Is Also a Mountain Vitex

It's very good. I feel very comfortable reading it so far. Although it's a bit sadistic (I'm about to cry). From the chapter names and content, it can be seen that it is very thoughtful, but the popularity is a bit low. But it doesn't matter. The teacher has already been recommended. More people will definitely read this story. Not much to review, but it's really good.

It looks good. I feel that the author's writing style is very good. It has a martial arts flavor, the gentleness of Dream of Red Mansions, and the heroism of Water Margin. It's difficult to understand the plot if you don't read it carefully [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

The writing is beautiful and the emotions are delicate, and you can tell that the author has put a lot of effort into it. But the shortcomings are also obvious: First of all, the biggest problem is that the plot of the whole book is too flat and the climax is not explosive enough. The solution to the problem is actually very simple: Regardless of whether it is a group portrait or not, since the book has a fixed perspective, it must use the protagonist's own decision-making as the driving force of the main plot, rather than guiding the protagonist through the silent appearance of a large number of supporting characters. The summary is: the protagonist should find supporting roles, but this book is just the opposite. The protagonist's position is too passive. The climax is even guided by the supporting characters, and there are too few memory points. Secondly, proper rendering of the atmosphere can indeed enhance the reader's sense of involvement, but over-describing it and immersing the reader in sadness for a long time will be counterproductive. Who is willing to listen to a person full of negative energy talking to you about the meaning of life for several hours? Hahaha~ But it is difficult to grasp this degree, and this is also a mistake that many writers make. Finally, the author is a super potential stock! The cultural foundation is great! The above problems can be discovered and corrected. The foundation of writing is there. As long as the above problems are improved, I believe your book will definitely be a hit. Come on! Never give up! [Sending Hearts]

The writing style is very beautiful, and the writing is very good. You can get a glimpse of its background by reading the chapters. Moreover, the female characters in the book have their own charms. This is not the current situation where the number of male characters in many novels is far greater than the number of women. Both women and men in the book have their own charms and are very strong. There is no brainless cannon fodder. I finished reading it in one go.

Fortunately, Dudu didn't give up on the creek [send heart], the creek must be kind to Dudu, Dudu only has the creek [crying]

Super super pretty! ! ! The author is very literary, and the titles of each chapter have the same number of words and are full of profound meaning. Moreover, in this micro-group portrait, the protagonists are all very, very good people! The most important thing is that there is no misunderstanding in the book. Wen Du has always believed in Jiubaixi, and the emotional line is very clear, and he has already expressed his feelings in the early stage. This is an article I stayed up late to read at four in the morning. You must read it! ! ! !

This is the best ancient-themed article I have ever read. It has the perseverance to face everything alone for a friend, the mind for the common people in the world, and the ideal for the country. Although I have lost my memory, this is not a kind of letting go of the sadness of the past with the stream. Facing a new and beautiful beginning, teacher, I also want to read the extra! ! ! The text is simply not enough! ! !

The story of two little bitter gourds and a group of little bitter gourds

It's really good-looking, not the same at all, and will be updated soon [love] [admiration] [blowing kiss] [cool]

This book is very good to read, but it was a little uncomfortable to read. Everyone has their own vivid life, and it is really well written. May all regrets be made up for in the next life, and may Jiubaixi and Wendu last forever

It's so beautiful that I can't get enough of it. It's so well written [crying][crying][crying]

It's so beautiful. Oh my god. I've only read a little bit but I'm already hooked. It's rare that the plot line of an online novel can attract me so quickly. The writing is so good! I'm almost halfway through watching it, it's so martial arts and I love it so much! It may be a bit exaggerated, but it really seems to be back to the obsession I had when I first watched Jin Yong. The plot line is completely written with swords and swords and shadows, and it has a taste of power. Although it is fictional, many historical details show that the author is very careful. The emotional lines are so delicate that I felt emotionally exhausted. The pure emotion is so full that it makes an experiential reader like me a little "home-bound" hhh. In short, I need to take a breather, and I will definitely finish reading it in the next two days!

The writing is very good, full of charlatanism, and the writing style is very good. I didn't expect that such a smart and courageous girl Yuan Qixing would disappear soon after she appeared [crying]

It looks good, so keep working hard It's good to read, I want more, come on, author

Very beautiful, well written

Nice! ! ! ! Like like

A rare good article by Tomato

Woohoo, it looks so good [crying][crying][crying]

It's really beautiful. It would be great if there were extras.