[By Using Evil Bones, I Use Ghosts and Immortals to Break the Yin and Yang]

I have seen the latest chapter, and the writing is okay. I have two suggestions that the author can refer to when writing new books. When he is buried in the pit, he should write it very cryptically in a casual paragraph. It should not be too straightforward, and it should not be directly prompted to say something later, which means that most people will not read it seriously. , You won't be able to find out that you buried the trap, and then it will be revealed after dozens of chapters. In this way, those who discover it in advance will feel itchy, and those who have not discovered it will be surprised. Suspense and supernatural stories are more exciting and addictive when written this way. In addition, I think the realm and the strength of the technique should be clearly divided. This can better reflect the strength of the strength, and more clearly experience how strong the opponent is. The masters in the world you wrote are all in the realm of ghosts and immortals. When the protagonist confronts those palace masters, the protagonist has also killed several palace masters. When he meets the new palace master, he cannot see or feel it at all. What is there? How big the gap is, how dangerous it is, and there is no sense of immersion. Regarding realm skills and so on, I think it is better to write it in the sense of a fantasy novel. It is more obvious. This way, you can be more immersed in the situation. At least you know how powerful the boss the protagonist is going to fight is. It can also reflect the strength of the protagonist and have a more sense of immersion.

It's been a long time since I read a book seriously, and personally I rarely write book reviews. I probably started reading this book when it was about ten chapters old. My first impression was that it was quite novel. I rarely read books about pool collectors. It can be seen that as a new author, the writing style is a bit immature. The descriptions in the early stages of the article are more detailed, but the pace of the article obviously starts to become faster in the later stages, and the expansion of combat power leads to later battles. The description of the scene is a bit unsatisfactory, and there are a few places in the text that are written with too few words, but it is understandable; overall, the book is coherent and has a clear outline. The foreshadowing that was inadvertently laid in the previous text appears in the later period. The only drawback is that the pace in the later part is too fast and most characters have no chance to appear. All in all, as a new author's first book, both the material and the overall coherence are qualified. As for the writing style, I believe it will gradually improve as the number of works increases. Therefore, I give this book five stars.

It's very interesting. It's really interesting. It's a novel supernatural novel. I really like reading it. I hope the author will update it soon. But I think it's better for the protagonist to be strong alone without the senior sister (less)

It's a very good book. It's attractive. I haven't read a few chapters so far. I hope the author can maintain the quality.

A book worth reading, with a novel concept

To be honest, I didn't find anything surprising when I first read it. But as I read on, the essence of this book quietly emerged. In short, this book is worth looking forward to. I hope it won't end badly. I wish the author good health and good luck in his work.

I just started reading it, it's very interesting, the style is a bit like "The Art of Darkness", the author is great!

It's so beautiful, my brothers really support me [laughing evilly] The second day of book review check-in [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

This is the first time I know that there is such a supernatural profession as pool collector. It is quite interesting. The plot is not well conceived and the pace is not slow.

To be honest, it does look good

Very nice. Don't know how to comment.

The story is novel and the plot connects naturally.

Very beautiful, highly recommended

Not bad, good, come on

This book is pretty good overall

This book is okay, can the author introduce some zombies? Hey, how can this kind of book be done without zombies? You can also have some red and white evil spirits

It's really good to read, the logic is clear, and the description is also very good. The author will update it quickly and highly recommend it!

Very nice, you can try it

I was afraid to read the ratings at first, but after reading it for a while, I found that it is indeed quite fascinating. I rarely write book reviews, but this one is indeed quite interesting.

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

Not bad, very pretty

The plot is well conceived, I love watching it

Good looking strong support

Not bad, keep going. Author [sending heartfelt wishes]

Not bad, the story is pretty good

Come on, it looks good

Good, good, good

Very beautiful, the plot is very good

Not bad, not bad, tastes great 😎

Very interesting book