Elf City: Start with a Zoroa Cleansing

It's very, very beautiful, highly recommended. It's pretty good now that I've read it. The system is fine so far. There's no female protagonist at the moment. I hope it doesn't end up being a brainless Pokémon article! [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

Pokémon strength level Novice (lv.1-Lv.9) Ordinary (lv.10-Lv.19) Senior (lv.20-Lv.29) Elite (lv.30-Lv.39) Professional Level 1 (lv.40-Lv.49) Career Level 2 (lv.50-Lv.59) King of Heaven (lv.60-Lv.69) Champion (lv70-lv79) Legend (lv.80-Lv89) Level 2 God (lv.90-Lv99) Level 1 God (lv.100-Lv109) Creation God (lv.110-Lv120)

There are many small problems in this book. There are many conflicts between the context and the context. Daily life is a mess. Except for crises, there are battles. The transitions in the middle are very poorly written. However, the overall plot direction and design are okay. It is also good to use system tasks to earn points to replace the resource acquisition drive of other civilian books. Five stars for encouragement.

The writing is okay, but I feel that the dialogue between the protagonist and the elf does not need to be written in such detail. It can be summarized directly by the elf's cry. Anyway, the protagonist also has the power of wave guide, and he can understand it. This way it won't look so embarrassing and affect the readers' reading experience. I hope the author can see it and make some corrections. Thank you! ! ! [Laughing] There are still a lot of details that need to be paid attention to. Another thing is that the psychological description of the protagonist is too rich [face covering]. Forget it, I still ran away. There are too many funny words in the book, which made my reading experience not good [laughing and crying]. I can only say that the rating is still in line with this book.

How shameless! I found this book that I still have a few days ago and re-read the previous one. It's quite good. When did Zoroa evolve? This is 300 chapters long! [Wronged]

Especially good, there are cats and dogs. I think one more. Xishi Hairen is also good, after all, she can keep up with her in appearance.

I thought it was okay at the beginning. I hope there will be a single heroine or no heroine. If I write it, I'll try to have as few scenes as possible. Big cheers to the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

The writing is good, and I also like the elves. I would like to give you five stars to encourage it.

Brother, which dragon family are you planning to adopt? It's not like you can't afford to raise the third dragon. It's not even a dragon yet.

Yes, it seems that the golden finger is not very open at present, and the cultivation is also very reasonable. I hope there will be no female protagonist or a single female protagonist in the future.

I just found a Pokémon novel, and this is the first time I've seen one about Zetrizoroa! Simply my favorite in Arceus! Great writing, keep it up!

It's quite good in a new book, you can read it

If you see that there is a system authentication function that you don't need to use, there is no need to read further.

It would be better to have a heroine, otherwise I would be very tired watching the protagonist fight all the time. I think this heroine (Lin Xue) is okay [thinking] But it depends on how you write it later, come on💪

Come on, this novel shouldn't have only this rating. I feel like it can be rated 9 or above! !

They look good, they are all elves that I like.

I feel that this book is okay, but I feel that fighting with others is a bit delayed. It can be reduced to four or five chapters in one fight. I feel that it is quite good after two or three chapters.

Overall it's okay

The description of the battle is average, and the battle process is skipped directly. Other descriptions are okay

Come on, keep updating. I hope the protagonist can conquer a water elf, which will be more convenient on the water or the sea.

I feel like the writing is okay, but I don't know why there are so many readers and few fans of the author. I won't go into detail about the poisonous point. Everyone has their own opinions, but I'm fine with it.

It's a pretty good-looking Pokémon, but the author is a bit slow in updating it [grievance]

Nice! It is systematic but not particularly dependent on the protagonist's own hard work. The elf's strength grows quickly but not too suddenly.

This book is very nice.

Nice rhythm, okay

If you like reading, cheers for the author

Come on, author, give me a five-star support

Overall, it's pretty good. Although there are some flaws, the look and feel is okay. I'll give it an 8.4. Good luck to the author. [Praise]

It's good to read, thank you to the author! (⑅˘̤ ᵕ˘̤)*♡*

The writing is good. In terms of content, the author should be mainly writing about the bond between elves and trainers. The setting of special abilities is also remarkable. Come on [Blow a kiss]