After Being Abandoned, I Fell in Love with the Ceiling

The character and plot of the protagonist in the whole book are very good, but the only thing that I can't accept is the accountability of Wen Yang and Qin. It may also be my personal reason. Although the family property was given to Gong, Wen Yang received all the favor that Gong did not enjoy in his childhood.

In fact, I think the portrayal of the main CP is quite good, quite fresh and not particularly cliché. But does the portrayal of the deputy CP account for too much later? If so, I think we can make a separate episode to talk about it. If it is placed in the main text, it will always feel like reading the same story. I basically didn't skip a chapter in the first part, but I really didn't like the deputy CP in the later part, and there was no introduction to the origin of their relationship. I fell in love suddenly, fell in love at first sight across class, and then broke up with my family because of love. I don't think this is very reasonable (although this is a romance novel, this kind of plot is too bloody) Another point is that the protagonist is very friendly and considerate. The description also portrays a decisive and ruthless character. However, many times in the past, he has left a "tail" in dealing with things, and then similar things will happen. Although the protagonist's feelings are constantly warming up during these processes, I think we can actually arrange some new stories. Instead of being hurt by Shou's family of origin and trying to warm him up, it would be better to describe Shou's career line more so that readers can better understand his courage and brightness after leaving his family of origin (I like novels with more positive energy) This is the first time I write a long review, and I gave it four stars. I hope the author will continue to work hard. The writing is still very good. Come on⛽

It's really good-looking, Qin Zhao is really good at loving people, the young couple are super sweet, there are quite a few pairs of deputy CPs, and every couple is sweet. At first I thought Xiao Zhao was a bad guy, but he is really good. There are also teachers and sisters. There are really many good people around He Qing. But I think there are still some things that I don't like very much. The handling of the Dong family is not decisive enough, so that the fake young master always makes trouble, and Qin Zhao's mother. He Qing is not in good health, and they are always in the hospital because of their injuries one after another. There is also the fact that Qin's father has an extra child. He was probably drugged during a business trip and had a one-night stand with a girl who liked him. The girl secretly gave birth to a child after she got pregnant and was discovered. Although Wen Ning is very good and Zhuang Zhuang is very cute, I still don't quite understand the meaning of designing this plot. It may be to push Qin Kuaishou to accept He Qing, or it may be that the author wants to give Qin Kuaishou a more satisfactory ending. I have also read another book by the author, and it seems that the author likes multiple CPs. However, Qin Zhao's wolf education from a young age made Qin Zhao not feel much love in his childhood. However, his father took another child to watch movies and go to the amusement park. In this comparison, I feel that it will be very hurtful. Zhuang Zhuang still had a mother who loved him when there was no Qin Guanchan, but Qin Zhao's mother was not very good either. In order to win Qin Guanchan's attention, she would even push Qin Zhao into the water. It felt like Qin Zhao got very little love. Except for these things that made me feel a little uncomfortable, everything else was good.

I only watched half of it. The first half is very interesting. The emotional line is very natural and there is no misunderstanding. Only the first few pictures are a bit sour. Overall, it is very sweet. But in the middle part, a child suddenly appeared, another child of Gong's father. The existence of this child can be seen as the child in the old novel about the overbearing president running with the ball (middle-aged version), but a clumsy version. In fact, this child was right, but it was because Gong's father took him to an amusement park and watched a movie. None of these things happened when Gong was a child. It gives me the feeling that Gong is a Pleasant Goat and the other child is a Bingbing Goat. It was very uncomfortable to watch. It would be nice if they didn't bother each other and didn't show up all the time. But I read the comments that the protagonist will have to help take care of the children later on, which makes it even more disgusting. . . . If you can accept it, you can still watch it, because the main characters are really sweet [sending my heart]

First let's talk about the main cp Qin Zhao is a really good person. When I first watched it, I thought he was a very unruly person who would not be manipulated by others and was arrogant. Only when I looked back did I realize that he was really thoughtful and a guiding lover. Shen Heqing is that kind of cool person. In fact, it seems that he is very indifferent to the world, but in fact, his heart is the most sensitive, so Qin Zhao walked into his heart. The two of them are complementary. Shen gave Qin tenderness, and Qin gave Shen a sense of security. Deputy cp Zhao Wenxun can be considered a redemption type. I think this person is the same type as Shen Heqing. He has experienced the darkness and rolled in the mud. They are really similar. So that they finally had a little sun that illuminated each other

It's really sweet, but I just don't understand why Qin's father has to have an emotional line later. He didn't have the tenderness for the male protagonist when he was young, but the other child enjoyed it [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

The whole article is really good and worth reading. The crane that fell into the human world eventually spreads its wings under the nourishment of love. Qin Zhao really loves He Qing, which is very sweet (except for He Qing's life experience and experiences). Love will heal everything, but one thing that shocked me was the issue of Qin Guankun's (Qin Zhao's father) illegitimate child, but it was still acceptable, except for being a little dissatisfied at the beginning, and it got much better later on. In addition, this is not a particularly enjoyable novel. It is influenced by family ties and many external factors. Many things do not necessarily have a result. But no matter what, I am very satisfied with the happy ending. Everyone is happy. The most important thing is to never give up on the novel. It is really beautiful to watch in the end. From beginning to end, every pair of sub-CPs are very sweet. Generally speaking, it is a novel that can be read when you are short of books. The writing is very good and the plot is very delicate. It is more like a double redemption novel. The sweet love always makes people feel happy. You can read it without getting bored. Anyway, I like it very much (this is my first time writing a long review, I hope it can be of some help to others).

The author's writing style is very good, the logic is on point, and the character creation is also perfect. There are two shortcomings. The first one is that the story narration of the deputy CP in the middle and second chapters is a bit too much. I personally don't like it very much, but it's not a big problem. The second one is the appearance of Wen Yang. This section is a bit redundant, and it is also harmful to the protagonist Gong from a certain angle. And for me as a reader, I am interested in the story of the protagonist attacking and the protagonist receiving, so I don't quite understand why the extra story is Wen Yang's story. I understand that the author may want to complete the lives of more characters, so he added an emotional line to Qin's father, but it is obvious that Wen Yang's appearance is a bit uncomfortable. I think it would be better if he appeared at the beginning, or after the protagonist knows his father's feelings, when everything has settled down, rather than appearing hidden like this now.

It's so beautiful, come and see it! The rating shouldn't be so low. He Qing is the gentlest person I have ever met. He is gentle and tough. Each couple has their own characteristics. Except for He Qing's parents, whether they are relatives or adopted, the rest are all very good. Shen Heqing×Qin Zhao Ji Qiuting×Zhao Wenxun Zhang Zi × Ji Heng Wen Yang×Chu Tingshen

It looks good, the main CP is very sweet, but I gave up after knowing that it will get better and better in the future, because the emotional line of attacking his father is a bit disconnected, four stars for the main CP Lightning protection: Gong has a half-brother, and his father's emotional line has been written for a long time. It's not that his father can't have CP, but this description is really uncomfortable, just because his brother is stupid, and his father watches movies and plays with him, so all the preferences are given to him (later he is alone) He made a side story for his brother), and he was able to put it down after knowing it, otherwise he could be the male protagonist. Anyway, I was isolated, and it was already the middle and late stages of the article. My love, family relationships, and studies have all improved, and I have no regrets about giving up. I wish the little crane happiness forever.

So pretty! Not a chapter was skipped, the plot didn't drag out, and the writing was great! The sub-CP plot is also very enjoyable to watch! After reading it, I was really unsatisfied! Haven't seen such a wonderful novel in a long time? Sweet and sour love is the most real. The characters are portrayed very well. There is no drama, the emotions are normal, and a love where both parties firmly trust each other is what I want to see. There is no bloodshed, no misunderstanding, and everyone's love is perfect. I felt so happy after reading it. Let me add one more thing, I read this article with true feelings. To be honest, the only thing I am dissatisfied about is that I feel sorry for Qin Zhao. He must have been sad when he saw his father taking Zhuang Zhuang to watch a movie. I don't like this plot. I feel very sorry for Qin Zhao, even though he said he didn't care about his father's emotional problems, but when he was a child, his mother didn't love him, and his father was strict with him. He didn't enjoy family affection in his childhood. In my opinion, I can't accept the sudden intrusion of his brother and stepmother into my life. This is the only point I feel is deducted, and it is also the plot that I can't understand the most. There are many ways to untie the knot between father and son, but I don't want to see the male protagonist treated so cruelly in the book. In the long review, I found that most people have the same idea as me. I hope that if there is an opportunity, the author and teacher can adopt some readers' opinions and be more sympathetic to the plot and characters in the subsequent writing!

Really super good-looking [Love] Shen Heqing (Little Fairy Crane) and Qin Zhao, [Love] Qin Kuanxi and Wen Ning, [Love] Chu Tingshen and Wen Yang (Zhuang Zhuang) are all very nice people, oh, by the way, [Love] Zhao Wengou and Ji Qiuting, [Love] Ji Heng and Zhang Zi, Hao Yang, Lin Yuan are also very nice people. I wish them all the best in the days to come, may they continue to be happy, safe, and live a long life and be happy [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] We are destined to see you again [blowing kiss]

The author's writing is quite good, and his writing style is also good. The crane that has been falling into the mortal world finally returns to the vast sky in the embrace of Qin Zhao's careful care and love. It is not very sad, but some words will make you feel like crying. The author's emotional line is very well written and delicate. The phenomenon of each character is well shaped. Each character has its own characteristics. Even the supporting roles have distinct characters. It would be better if the author did not write that Qin Zhao has a younger brother. Although his younger brother has no ill intentions, his mother is also a good person. But I always felt that Qin Zhao still had regrets. Qin Zhao did not take him to see a movie or an amusement park, but he took another child there, and did not inform Qin Zhao about the existence of the other child. This was too unfair to him. People who have no feelings for this child may not be very malicious. Fortunately, Qin Zhao's inner core is stable and strong, and with the company of the little crane, this matter is not very important. All those who were bad to Xiao Xianhe got retribution. The image of the boss in this book is relatively normal, he is law-abiding and knows how to solve problems through the law. The writing style is also more delicate and gentle, so it is a good book to read when you are in a literary drought. Regarding the character of Xiao Xianhe, his character is kind, gentle and inferior. After all, his core is still kind and gentle. There are some things that make him not a holy father. Every controversial thing, the author has made it clear later on. His behavior is not a holy father, but because of his kind and gentle character. I don't think he has a broken character. Xiao Zhao is a good person, and he will eventually have his partner. At first, he thought he was a bad guy, but later everything came to light. If not, Xiao Xianhe might not have been able to wait for the moment Qin Zhao came to redeem him, although he did cause harm to Xiao Xianhe. Everyone in the article has flesh and blood, and both the protagonist and the supporting characters have their own shining points. It is a happy ending, and everyone is happy in the end. There is still a lot of controversy about Xiao Zhao and the child born out of wedlock. If you don't have much ill will toward that child, it's actually innocuous. It may be a surprise to some people. This child does not play a big part in the plot. The story of this child is told in the extra story. But the author's approach was really inappropriate. Although it brought out the affection between father and son, it still hurt Qin Zhao a little. The appearance of this child in the plot was actually unnecessary.

It deserves a high score above 9.4. The author must be a person with a very delicate heart. His description of the characters is lifelike, and the two-way redemption is quite good. The most bizarre thing is that Shou's parents are extremely indifferent to their two outstanding children, and even go to great lengths to hurt them. They treat an abandoned son of another family who knows that they were maliciously exchanged and raised like treasures.

Ahhhhhhhh I really don't understand why the rating is so low, but it's really good to watch. I have followed it continuously. Several couples of CPs each have their own trials and tribulations, and in the end they all have their own consummations. Although I was a little worried about Zhuangzhuang's appearance at first, I started to like it more and more as I watched. Everyone's character is perfectly displayed. The author's writing style is also very gentle. Although Xiaoxianhe had so many disappointments at the beginning, he has always been elegant and gentle. The brothers of the Ji family have also found their respective partners. Dong Qing and He wanted to cry when they acknowledged each other [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] I hope they can continue to love life in their own dimensions! !

Except for the small part at the front, the back part is really sweet. Overall, it is a relatively relaxed article. I don't know why not many people have read it, but it is really good-looking and worth recommending. (Shou has a weak attribute and is often injured. If you can't bear it, lightning protection is recommended) But Heqing is really gentle and a good baby [I learned]

Highly recommended, super good-looking, without any clichés, every chapter is very attractive, there is a routine plot but you will not feel bored, and feel sorry for the protagonist, and the author has implemented the image of him being weak from beginning to end. Even if he is very happy in the extra chapter, when he gets sick, it will remind people of his previous experiences. Then the protagonist Gong's personal image is also very distinct. Although he is a bit violent, every attack is because of his lover or family. Sometimes he also has a naive side. Every pair of deputy CPs are very friendly. The extras are also very funny. He likes to be strong. He is a very well-behaved child. The only slight flaw is that he may have forgotten to mention his sister and single Hao Yang in the end.

To be honest, it's quite good-looking, but a book may have good points and bad points, but I will give it five stars because it really deserves five stars. First of all, let's talk about the highlights. The overall story line is quite complete, but in the later stage, when the finale is approaching, accidents will still happen. Overall, the number of accidents in the later stage is a bit too many, and a child pops up behind him. Let me state in advance that this child does not belong to the two protagonists, but is the youngest son of Gong's father. Even though the child was indeed very cute, he was still a little bit irritating for some reason. Maybe it was because of the things that happened to the child that led to some of the things the mother who attacked him did, so he was a bit irritating. Apart from these, it was probably nothing. Next, I will talk about the advantages I think. The first one is definitely the author's writing style, which is really good. I have also read another book of hers, which is really good-looking. Moreover, the characters written by the author are very vivid, each with its own characteristics, which is really poignant. It is really beautiful. The overall story line is complete, and the two protagonists have grown up. The mouth is particularly good, and it makes people happy to watch it. It is super beautiful and there is no misunderstanding at all. Even if it is a reunion after breaking up, except for the first two or three pictures that are a bit cruel, the second one is basically sweet all the way to the end. It is very beautiful. Loving a person is like growing a flower, and the changes in He Qing's body are also very obvious. To be honest, the images of the two protagonists are very lovable and really impressed me. With this setting, I could finish it in just one sentence. It's super invincible and beautiful. I stayed up five hours to finish chasing him.

Recommendation: I rarely review books, so I will contribute my first long review to this one. Objectively speaking, this book definitely has a low score. This book is better than other books around 9.4! There was a part in the middle where the rhythm was a little slow and I almost gave up, but the subsequent story lines of the main and secondary CPs were well connected and the flaws were not hidden. There is no need to write articles and describe the situations between the protagonists, but to integrate all the characters together, and they are natural. Each character is very vivid and three-dimensional. They do not simply serve the plot, but are living people one after another. You won't feel empty after reading it, the story is very complete, and you can read it except for just watching the main character's attacks and rejections and the supporting characters' rejection! Possible trigger points: I have a deputy CP, Shou is in poor health, and Gong has a half-brother.

How difficult it was at the beginning, but how sweet it was after meeting Qin again. Although the first half of Xiao He's life was bumpy, he had the best A Zhao and made a firm choice. The emotions behind it are so sweet, and all the couples are interesting

Overall a sweet article. Shen Heqing's journey was really not easy, and some parts of it made me feel that the author was being tortured! It's very sweet without the harassment from his family, and Gong is super doting on him. There are a total of four pairs of CPs including the protagonist, and one pair is in the extras, which is very sweet. While watching, people will feel that there is a balance between literature and Qin Zhao's father's feelings, which may make everyone feel shocked. It is a plot of running with the ball. I feel that Qin Zhao's father treats his son badly. The author's portrayal of women has both good and bad aspects, including that their mothers are crazy. In the later period, Heqing acted as an emotional master and was very transparent. The story that the extra CP is Qin Zhao's younger brother is very sweet.

The writing is very good. I like this subtitle very much. (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎) Except for my father, I felt that it was unnecessary and very annoying₍₍ ง(*Ӧ)ว ⁾⁾ Very nice

Great writing. Each character is carefully crafted. I saw some people complaining about the settings of my younger brother and my baby mother. My personal feeling after reading it is that this is a very important part for mother and son. They appeared when the conflict between Gong and his father was at its most intense. Their sudden appearance was like a basin of ice water poured on a fire, reducing the power of the flames. Use new contradictions to divert attention from old contradictions. Moving Qin's father from a superior oppressor to a weak position also shook Qin's father's authority as a father in Gong's heart. Let people realize that you can also make mistakes, fall into someone's scheme, and for a time, you were not responsible, and let your kind-hearted love brain run away with the ball? You are not omnipotent, you have not solved your own problems, how dare you accuse me? The appearance of this pair of mother and son allowed Qin's father to truly have a way to communicate with Gong on an equal footing. It also allowed Qin's father to truly and thoroughly realize Shou's excellence, and allowed Qin's father to fully accept Shou's existence. Father Qin learned love from Mother Wen (this cannot be purely classified as love, I think they are more affectionate than love), and learned how to express feelings (this is not to say that Father Qin had no feelings before, but that Father Qin did not know how to express his feelings before). Mother Wen's dedication to his younger brother really made Gong Shou directly realize what a normal mother's care for her children is like. The three mothers combined, Gong Shou, each have their own evils and paranoia, but they are all wrong, and Gong Shou, the other mothers, cannot really come into contact with them personally. Until Wen's mother appeared, a love-minded person with a well-off family and three upright views, she had a child and just wanted to raise the child by herself. When the child's father found out and took her back, she was worried that it would hurt the other child's Baozi character. However, the mother who taught her children by words and deeds was not bad at all, allowing Gong Shou to see that this is the warmth of a normal mother. And the younger brother is a fragile person with slow facial control and sensitive skin. He is also frail and sickly, and his brain is not smart enough. As soon as we meet him, he becomes completely dependent on Gong Shou. This is a great healing 'cub'. This cub who trusts Gongshou wholeheartedly allows Gongshou to involuntarily speed up the healing of their inner wounds while raising children. This is a similar existence to a comfort dog, helping the psychological treatment process through the ignorance and dependence of a third party. If the mother and son were deleted, the story would be too cruel. The father of Qin is a villain and oppressor, the crazy mother Qin is paranoid and uses aggression as a tool, Mother Lin is unclear about the situation and dotes on her adopted son, Mother Shen is greedy and partial, and Father Dong wants to save face. The parents in the two families are abnormal, and the conflicts continue to intensify. Neither side can see warmth and hope, and they feel so tired. Only two people can hold each other and heal their family ties through love. That's so tiring.

It's really good-looking. I really like Little Crane. Although it's a text description, it gives me the feeling that Little Crane is like a real person around me. I like Little Crane's character. Qin Zhao really made me cry to death. He has always chosen Little Xianhe unswervingly. With Qin Zhao here, Xianhe will always be aloof and true to himself. He doesn't want Little Xianhe to suffer a little injustice, and his love is very deep. I love Wen Yang to death in the author's great works, and I love the other CPs as well. Zhao Wenxun's outlook on life is also very upright, and he can pick it up and put it down easily. Overall, this is the best article I've ever read on Tomato [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

My book review involves spoilers, sisters can choose to read it or not. A Zhao and Heqing are a match made in heaven. Both of them consider each other very much. I admire their characters and plots. There are a lot of cps in it, but it's not balance literature, because Hao Yang has no cp hahahahaha, Wen Ting really likes this! It is worth mentioning that the sub-CP plot may be a bit too much in total, and Qin's father had an illegitimate son Wen Yang, and gave Wen Yang a lot of fatherly love that A Zhao didn't have when he was a child. I think some sisters may be dissatisfied with these two plots, but I don't care much about these two plots, so I think it deserves five stars. In the end, A Zhao and Heqing just need to be fine! Terukaku99.

Redemption➕Home invasion type lover Qin Zhao really cultivated He Qing into a tough yet elegant flower, instead of mindlessly letting him be a vase. This is real love, allowing him to be recognized and accepted by everyone.

This book is really beautiful, especially Zhang Zi's character, which is written in my heart [laughing]. After reading so many books, this is the only one I like. It is clear-headed and has a correct outlook on life. I am convinced and will remember it for a long time! The writing is so good that I couldn't stop reading it in one sitting! This is also the only book review I've ever written! I won't go into details about this valuable content, I believe readers will believe it after reading it! But the rating is not high, which is quite surprising. But as long as the writing is good, good books will always surprise people! Every team's cp is so annoying. I hope they can be safe, healthy and happy in one dimension! ! Finally, whether it works or not, I strongly recommend that you write more extras about Wen Yang and Chu Tingshen, [Blow a kiss]

The characters of the two protagonists are well created. I like Shen Hehe's image very much. The whole person is strong. The emotional line between Qin and Shen is also very online, and the plot is laid out very smoothly. Some things that were not very understandable at the beginning gradually revealed their true colors later on. At first, I was a little resistant to Wen Yang's appearance, but the author handled it well. Zhuang Zhuang is very cuteớ ₃ờ. There are also a lot of sub-CPs in the later stages. I know that the author wants to flesh out the story and characters, but for my personal reasons, I prefer the whole story to revolve around the protagonist, so it is a little hard to accept. However, in the later stage, I still let go of the discomfort because the sub-CPs are well portrayed and the plot has ups and downs. In summary, I still really like the two protagonists no matter what. They are really good-looking and have a soft heart.

Guys, it's really good-looking. For women, the three views are very positive, and the relationship between attack and reception is very good. When the author writes the sub-CP, he writes it in a series, and there will be no confusion in the plot. Also, I seriously suspect that there is no plot in the back of Hao Yang because he has no plot. I really like the couple Zhao Wenxun and Ji Qiuting. The only drawback is that after the author writes about many people, those characters will disappear. For example, I basically didn't see Chen Wan and Su Ling in the back. But this book is highly recommended. I will read it again if the book is exhausted! ! !

The author's writing style is very good, unobtrusive but able to slowly introduce emotions, as gentle and clear as flowing water! Like the protagonist, there is no deliberate femininity. The masculine characteristics are well preserved, very soothing and attractive.