Honey, They’re All So Handsome

In fact, the author's writing is very good, but when the characters speak, there are no punctuation marks. Later, there were punctuation marks, but many of the actions and thoughts have punctuation marks. Because the punctuation marks are not clear, many people will not want to read it, so I hope the author can change it. This is my suggestion.

Although what I wrote is not good, I like it

The main focus is on cultivating immortals, supplemented by emotional lines. It is a modern novel about cultivating immortals, with a touch of Long Aotian as the heroine. Five people have gained beautiful husbands, and they have all embarked on the road to cultivating immortals.