Little Bird, Be Good. Your Master Will Play You a Song

Great writing! The female protagonist has a lively and cheerful personality, with super strong force value, but may be a bit emotionally insensitive. The male protagonist is the kind of gentle and considerate male mother. However, I personally don't like some plots where the female protagonist conflicts with the female protagonist because she likes the male protagonist (although it can reflect the male protagonist's personal charm). I remember there is one above. Jie Xiaopei was injured in the fight for this (I am a super heroine, I don't want to see the heroine suffer, she has suffered a lot of injuries before, it's enough, I feel sorry for her 😢 😢 😢) But the subsequent plot is really great, the two people are also redeeming each other, and the emotional development is also natural, not abrupt, sweet and reassuring! Overall a great novel! I hope you will continue to work hard! Always optimistic about you! 💕💕💕 (This is my first time writing such a long book, so if you don't write well, don't complain 😫)

A very nice book!!! My eyes really lit up when I first saw the character design. This kind of gentle master male protagonist really struck a chord with me, and I felt that he was a perfect match for Xiaoniao. Perhaps Xiaoniao, who is dull and very impulsive, needs a partner who can tolerate her and point her to the right path. Unlike other master-apprentice stories where a master teaches a disciple, I feel that their relationship is more like complementing each other, learning from each other, and achieving each other's achievements. It's a perfect fit! It's probably because the Way of Asking the Heart and the Way of Killing are a natural match, they are completely complementary. After reading the full text, you can find that the author is actually a very knowledgeable person in literature. I drew a lot of lines while reading and found it particularly beautiful. In particular, "The Ballad of a Female Official" (that's what it should be called) lays out the emotional line of the two deputy CPs very well, and the female power and spirit of resistance to the old order reflected in it is worth learning. This book left a deep impression on me, but the writing style of the book is relatively bland. In fact, I am not very good at describing it. It just gives me a bland feeling when reading it, a bit like a meek temperament 🤭 But it gives me a warm and elegant beauty, I like it very much! I would like to make some suggestions here. It is suggested that the author can use lines or blank lines to separate scenes when changing scenes. Otherwise, sometimes when the place is changed, the readers will not react and will be confused after reading it. Finally, I am very grateful to the author for using such an elegant writing style to show us this wonderful world. I wish you will write better and better in the future! 😘 (Can I get a big reply [sending heart])

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It looks great, I've reprinted it several times.

Very nice!!! I particularly like the characters of Xiao Pei and Wen Yuheng, and the other characters are very distinct!

I really like the characters in it, and the stories of each generation of them (Qihe Sect) are exciting enough, and the atmosphere is good enough. I'm looking forward to the second part.

It's rare that I'm willing to put pen and ink on the supporting characters and foreshadow the plot. The writing is very good~ (much better than those mindless and cool articles about group portraits. It's awesome~ it's worthy of praise~) Like it. Linked together, the heart is crazy

The author's writing is great, I hope there will be a second volume

It's one of the most interesting novels I've read about male masters and female apprentices cultivating immortals.

This book is very beautiful, everyone is very vivid, the birds are so silly ~ their relationship is so exciting!