Siheyuan: Obtain the Power of Dragon and Elephant at the Beginning

One hundred thousand words later, the plot of the Siheyuan finally begins. It's a bit watery, but the writing is okay. With the blessing of the tomb robbing and courtyard system, it's still interesting. It depends on whether the follow-up is the same old-fashioned plot of pulling and aggrieved. Chapter 61, slipping away, he is really good at water. 1526326 If you lose money, don't call the police. Let's hold a meeting first. I know that the protagonist's family will be involved later.

It's okay for now, but it's best to take Jingru in later. Who wouldn't like a wife who is willing to hand you the knife even if you kill someone? Other heroine authors are casual, and since there is a system, they are not afraid of adding more. The Siheyuan belongs to the period novel, but the world of tomb robbers is a bit magical. Anyway, it is magical. It is not surprising that the entire portal or teleportation can be used to solve many problems. You can travel around the world. The layout is so big that the author can write as many chapters as he wants.

Chapter 4 mentioned that the protagonist's master hid a portion of gold somewhere, but he only told the protagonist, not his twin daughters, about hiding a portion of gold. And in Chapter 27, the protagonist's master left a terrifying dowry for her daughter, without telling the protagonist. Isn't this inconsistent? Of course, it is also possible that the master of the protagonist left two copies, one for the protagonist and one for his daughter. But the same sentence is still a bit contradictory. The daughter told the protagonist that his father left a dowry and told the protagonist about it, but the protagonist did not tell. Her father also left a share of gold to the protagonist. I read Chapter 28 and this matter was not mentioned, so I felt that it was very contradictory.

(Above and below) Purple +•Legendary (level 16)/9.0 Points, marked... Sense of substitution A, plug-in B, setting A, writing style A, rhythm B, imagination B, character design A, main line B, logic S. Extra points: none Personal feelings: The setting is rigorous, the plot is sophisticated, the tomb robbing worldview raises the upper limit, increases the rationality of the protagonist's combat power, and the characters blend into nature. Looking at the subsequent description of the tomb robbing part, in terms of overall evaluation, the current Siheyuan part is very good. ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (4) Plug-in: cheat settings (5) Setting: World background, training system... (6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Samsung white·standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Samsung gray+·low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Samsung gray·low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Samsung gray -·qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points. (6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. ──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words (Up and down) Purple-(Level 13)/8.5 Points 4×2+5×1=13, character A↓B, logic S↓A In the plot of Suolongjing, he is inexplicably the main character!

Some of the girls who were given away were the little girls from the Zhengyang family, and Xu Huizhen was also given away. Judging from the plot, I guess Liang Ladi also gave it away.

Dude, it's a bit cool. It's written about the aspects of the Siheyuan that I particularly want to see. If you can learn martial arts, have a harem with supernatural powers, you can live forever, and then you can also explore ancient tombs. It's so cool. And the most important point is that the quality is not degraded and the writing style is okay. Brother, please write well, I support you and I will throw money at you every day.

Thinking back to the time when I had a near-miss crossing, I was very happy and sang a song The song "Blood Song of Three Realms" was discovered by "Lord of the Stars" and brought me to I took "Journey to the Misty World", entered "All Heavens and Worlds", and met When it came to "God of Killing", which was called "Natural Disaster", he sat in "God of Death" "On the Seal of the Throne", he wanted to kill me, but was stopped by the "Nine Heavenly Sword Demon" However, he was seriously injured and was cured by "The Crazy Doctor". Hurt Afterwards, they said goodbye to me. Then he recommended me to "Different" "The Evil Lord of the World", and did "The Underworld Special" in "The Unparalleled Tang Sect" Soldiers". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing Star" "Empty", "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. There I developed "The Most "Ultimate Intelligence", possessing the "Eye of Perspective". Normally when nothing happens "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" taught me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" taught me how to mix wine. The most awesome one is "Emperor". His old man taught me "Du Bu Tian" The "Peerless Divine Power" of "The Next Part", and the "Unparalleled Divine Power" of "The Supreme Way of the Emperor" Road, soon I will practice the "Immortality" divine body, "Chaos" "Sword God" and I have a good friendship. Be my protector and accompany me in the "Proud Nine Heavens". I'm there Under "Heaven and Heaven", defeat the world with "Zhu Tian Tu" The number one master, "The Evil God", stole "The Throne of the End of the Law", But the world couldn't bear my power, the space was shattered, and I was sucked Entering "Perfect World" and returning to the era of "The Wild Era"~~~ Alas! I am old, and now it is your young people's world, but You are a young man, you need to update!

Very well written and exciting! It seems that the world set by the author is very deep. For the protagonist, the courtyard is really a relaxing place. There are many masters, including ancient gods. I hope the author will continue to work hard to update! Come on, author!

Scientific easter egg: In fact, the wind takes away not only the smoke, but also 0.0001% Of the DNA fragments in your lungs. These particles carrying the genetic code may be reorganizing into a smoking jellyfish somewhere in the Pacific Ocean at this moment. (Incorrect) After seeing this video, I went to the balcony to smoke a cigarette. I smoked half and the wind smoked half. Then I thought, why should the wind smoke my cigarette, so I started smoking the wind. [Gnath][gnath]

It's so good, but the author is too proud of it. Two chapters a day is enough for anyone to read.

To solve the problem of multiple wives, you can ask your subordinates to marry them on your behalf. On the surface, there will be no problem. Just buy a larger courtyard house and live with your absolutely loyal subordinates! Aren't there ten Xiling warriors?

I came here after reading a professional review from a big brother (highly praised). It's pretty good. Even those who have never seen Siheyuan are very happy to see it [smile] [smile]

Dear author, please change the plot of giving away the daughter (Xu Huizhen, etc.) To distant cousins. This lowered the rating a lot. If the previous plot hadn't attracted me so much, I would have rated it three stars.

It's super good-looking. I personally suggest that if the author has the idea of ​​writing a long novel and later comes to Hong Kong Island, he can write about the plots of Young and Dangerous and Detective. The most important thing is to pay attention to copyright. . I have been reading books for so long and I have seen too many books that were obviously well written and were removed from the shelves due to copyright issues. 🍅There is no copyright for tomb robbers. Just write about ghosts and blow out the lamp.

This book is well written, with rich content and a somewhat bland storyline. Although the protagonist's ability as a special agent is relatively mediocre, there are quite few highlights and exciting scenes of ups and downs. The above is my review. You can read it at your leisure.

Update it quickly! It's not enough to watch! It's really tiring to chase more like this.

Very well written. The gold is gone. How much is left? It turned out not to be.

The front was fine, but Chapter 41 said that I was going to tell others about the system space in the future, so I just gave up. Some kind people saw what was said later and told me whether to tell others or not. (The protagonist said that there are caves such as bronze doors, and his system space tells others that it is okay. I thought that other caves are immovable and cannot be operated by humans. The protagonist is portable and controllable, and it is not a concept at all. And how does the author know that those cave countries have not intervened or participated in research?)

The story is very strong and the logic is reasonable. Not overly flattering, currently rated too low.

The reason for the downgrade is that I feel that the world of tomb robbers and the Siheyuan are too incompatible. One is supernatural and the other is after the founding of the People's Republic of China. How can we coordinate the two?

I've read more than 20 chapters, and I haven't finished it in two days. I want to know if the 200th chapter has been finished for a month [staring] 40 photos, enough to last two days

Everyone knows that there is danger in the cemetery, so don't stay away quickly. The one on the left is approaching, and the one on the right is Natsume. You don't lack money, life, force, or people. . If there is danger, don't hurry up and declare that you can't run away if you are close.

If you want to be more straightforward, you can go to Xiangjiang in the later stage to develop, such as Hongxing, Crow, Chen Haonan, Kowloon Walled City Fusion and the like [laughing evilly], I think it looks good! Then after passing ten pounds, the protagonist's strength is going to Japan, such as a hot-blooded neighborhood, a hot-blooded college, etc., You can write hundreds of chapters [cool]

It's pretty good. It's fun to watch. It doesn't have any shortcomings. It's still different from those stallion stories. At least I can clearly remember the names of the heroines. Like more than 20 other people, I can't even remember their names.

In 1958, Jiumen Zhang Dafoye was busy with 044 056. It just so happened that he was experimenting with the longevity of the black-haired snake in Gutongjing. The people in its organization are getting older and yearning for immortality. My brother seems to be in southern Xinjiang at this time! Or go to the Zhangjia Ancient Building in Banai, Guangxi.

The heart remains the same despite all the changes. Why should a man hide his appearance? The totem shows masculine beauty, and the cloak should complement the majestic figure. The wilderness has no boundaries and the fragrance of wild flowers kills all the foreigners in Gu Bahuang. Go straight into the heaven to play with the goddess, look up to the sky and laugh out loud!

Well written and looks interesting, keep it up

The story progresses step by step and is not abrupt. The protagonist has a system and does not blame the sky, the earth, or the air. It is still a very obscene development, which is in line with the realistic setting at that time. If you want to be invincible, you must have an obscene development! ! !

The novelty of the writing is good. It would be better if you don't cultivate immortality later. What you read is novel and unknown. It's not about becoming an immortal with one hand. Just don't focus on cultivation.

Not bad, not bad. This is the first time I have seen this courtyard theme. It is much better than other courtyard themes. Although there are some minor flaws, I hope the author will continue to work hard and write well. I hope there will be a Hong Kong line and a tomb robbing line in the future.