After One Dreamy Night, She Died in the Real World

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The background story settings are very interesting and wonderful, and it has the feeling of combining a strange fairy and a mysterious city of strange beasts. But it seems uncomfortable at times, and there are still some logical problems. The author's writing power is not enough to support such a rich imagination. I hope I can think about the outline and details again.

I saw all the updated content in one go, and I don't know what to say. This is a world where people eat people. No matter which side they are on, they are essentially eating each other. Today I eat you, tomorrow you eat me. The whole world is a huge Möbius strip with only one side, which is cannibalism. A great start, looking forward to what follows. I imagined an ending. Maybe the whole world is a bizarre and perverted dream imagined by Wang Qi when he had a mental illness in reality. He trapped himself in this infinite loop of Mobius strip to prevent himself from hurting other people. Finally he woke up from the dream. His condition stabilized. He stood up and walked out of the hospital. Ye Ziqing stood under the tree and looked back at him.

It's interesting, it's true and false at times, coupled with the distorted scenes and cruel reality (questionable), it's a brain-burning experience after watching it. Some plots are really exciting However, I feel like there are some places where I don't quite understand the writing, and I feel like the language could be further refined. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up development. What kind of species is our green plum? Where did our school beauty Yang go? And the sequence ability really makes people look forward to other abilities.

The subject matter is very good and novel, and the setting is very interesting. If it can be written completely, it might really be a new masterpiece. Some people in the comments also mentioned that there is a problem with the title of the book. It looks like a rebirth romance novel. The author should think of a title for the book later. Change the title around the dream sequence, mystery, dream world, and Möbius strip. For example, I just picked it up casually, and the author can think about it carefully.

It took me an entire afternoon to catch up on the latest chapter without skipping. It's a bit unfinished. I really like this style. I like you, the author! Book!! 💕💕

The protagonist thinks he has traveled through time, but is it actually because the Möbius strip is lost in this world? Does he think he has traveled through time?

It's similar to the feeling of a strange fairy, but it's a bit less entertaining. Maybe the characters can be enriched and add more sugar and knives😏😏

I hope the author will polish this book well. Based on my ten years of experience, this book has the potential to become a god.

If this level can be maintained from now on, then I declare that a new legend has been born.