Paranoia and Lonely Rock

The writing is really good. The writing doesn't look like it would be at the level of Tomato. It must have been practiced by a big shot. It's not bad. It's either a harem or a single heroine. What does it mean to write an IF line? A novel is not a game script. I'm so confused now when I see any IF lines in a novel. You can either accept them all or just one. It's so silly. I haven't read this book in a long time. Why did it end up like this😅😅

Good! I have some writing skills, although the character of the protagonist who hides from the world and hates trouble is not the monk and love story character that I like. But at least the protagonist has a gentle background and doesn't look like someone who really runs away.

Just read it, it is one of the few fanfics that only has one anime, the others are either mixed with hen cards or mygo. In short, this article is very pure to read. The rhythm in the front is very good, but it is too main line. There is a daily life written by myself in the back. Because it is a love line, the sweetness will increase, but there are some problems that cannot be explained. The daily atmosphere is not bad, and there are no OOC characters in the front. In the later period, Xiao Lonely seems to be just social fear and abstract, a bit flat. This is probably because Xiao Lonely's personality is a bit too difficult to control. The protagonist is a psycho, which is probably the biggest obstacle to love. It needs to be sweet, but it will be blocked. If it is really sweet, it will be a bit boring and unnatural. Maybe it is my own reason. Overall, it is a work worth reading. It is very interesting. Being able to write an article and publish it is already great! !

Book review of "Paranoia and the Rock of Loneliness" In the field of animation derivative creation, "Paranoia and Lonely Rock" is undoubtedly a very unique work. With a score of 7.1 And more than 7,000 reads, it has occupied a place in the wave of fan creation. From the setting point of view, the concept of "Yan Ling" is very ingenious, embodying urban legends and rumors, and building a world view full of weirdness and imagination for the story. The protagonist Asami Yuuto returns with memories of his past life, with the clear goal of "making money to develop the sect economy." This pragmatic and even somewhat cold original intention forms a strong contrast with the emotional whirlpool he subsequently fell into. The socially fearful roommate, the creditor sister who exudes maternal glory, the terrifying Yang Jiao, and the blue-haired bassist are like an invisible net that tightly traps the protagonist who is trying to maintain an emotional distance. This kind of collision and entanglement of characters is full of dramatic tension and allows readers to empathize with the protagonist's "gravity black hole" situation. The character setting of the protagonist, who is "sultry and full of inner drama", is a highlight of this book. Through delicate psychological description, the author vividly portrays a character who seems indifferent but is actually rich in emotions. His inner struggle, resistance to emotions and unconscious fall are all shown in a large number of inner dramas, allowing readers to penetrate into the protagonist's spiritual world and feel his contradictions and growth. As an anime derivative work, it captures the essence of the original work well and makes bold original expansions on this basis. The "IF line" setting also adds more possibilities to the story and meets the diverse expectations of readers. Of course, this work is not perfect. A score of 7.1 Points indicates that it may have deficiencies in some aspects of plot control, narrative rhythm or character creation, such as the logical coherence of some plots, the in-depth exploration of supporting characters, etc. There may be room for improvement. But overall, Paranoia and the Lonely Rock is an anime spin-off worth watching. With its unique world view setting, tense character relationships and delicate psychological descriptions, it brings readers a reading experience full of fantasy and emotional entanglements. It is especially suitable for readers who like fan creations and are interested in urban legends and spiritual world themes.

It looks good and fits the character very well. The author has great ideas I hope Pochi will be a single female protagonist [smile] and don't have a harem.

Is the heroine Hongxia or Pochi? Before chapter 40, Pochi still had a chance. After more than 40 chapters, Hongxia will be stable. I hope there won't be more heroines.

Very good, highly recommended, I have read another very similar book, Cultivation in Lonely Rock, and I thought the author's book was the same, but the author turned this sense of separation into Yuuto's illness, making the essence of the protagonist's behavior become abstract, and instead integrated into the group. I have read a lot of Lonely Rock fanfics on Tomato, either with a single female protagonist or a fusion of girl band comics. This is the first one for someone like the author. There are currently no poisonous points. The only regret is that there are too few. Who can understand the broken feeling that a person who believes in watching in bed all night finds out that he has caught up with the large army [crying] I wish this book will get better and better and be completed perfectly

It's a very good fanfic that made my mouth fly. The male protagonist's succubus attribute is finally not the kind of succubus that attracts girls to fall in love with because of his incredible appearance. It's too cliché. The protagonist's various behaviors really make people fall in love with him unconsciously, and the emotional details are also very good.

This novel is amazing. The first cool line at the end made me cry😭 (please pay for the 100 million yuan for tears). The emotional scenes are very delicate and it is easy to bring emotions into it. The protagonist is completely integrated into the original work and is not abrupt at all. Really well written I found that many people hate the f-line. Almost all the people who give negative reviews say this. Actually, I don't think it's a big deal. If you have the ability, just write. If you don't like it, you don't have to watch it. Otherwise, you can just watch one. I just watched the cool line and then stopped watching it. This is equivalent to a single heroine, right? There's no need to make a fuss in the comments section. When it comes to writing novels, more people write for themselves. There are a lot of people out there saying that the author does whatever he wants for the sake of traffic. There is no need to slander an author, right?

It's very beautiful, highly recommended. I thought it had multiple female protagonists at first, but it's not bad at all. I'm not averse to watching the lf line. The one written by Ryo is very good. Of course it would be better if it could be longer. I'm also looking forward to finishing the other lf lines in the band. Finally, I hope there will be extra chapters after the end of the lf line. [Sending my heart]

At first, it was because I had almost read all the updated books in the bookshelf, so I looked at the books I randomly added to the bookshelf. At first, I felt nothing, and even planned to abandon it. After reading it, I felt more and more interesting. The character of the protagonist is also unique among the same type of books. This kind of daily feeling is really interesting. Among other books with serious homogeneity in various beginnings, such as love and food, this book is really like finding a plate of cucumbers in a pile of fat meat. After reading it, I felt very empty that I couldn't find the same type of books. This article feels like it is not a masterpiece but it is absolutely top-notch. It has no shortcomings. It feels more like a tsundere who was a Taoist priest in the village in her last life than paranoia. There are still many holes that have not been filled in. For example, people like the master and previous lives are fake (other people said in the comment), as well as the male protagonist's super power, what happened to the male protagonist in the first half of his life, etc. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to Hongxia's if line.

The quality is very high, and the whole novel reads very naturally without any sense of inconsistency. It is a fine novel that can be read one at a time. The most important thing is that the character of the protagonist really appeals to me, and I finally found a treasure [Adoration]

I've finished reading "Common Lines", it's very good, the rest of the "if" is not necessary for me, but the rest should be good too What makes me a little uncomfortable is that the protagonist is obviously so poor and can only eat expired bread every day, but Fanxing still doesn't say anything about giving the protagonist a slight salary increase or telling the protagonist that the debt is almost paid off. The protagonist is really pitiful. In my opinion, he is obviously living a bad life, but he is still willing to shine and help others. This is really valuable, but the protagonist is really too pitiful, and even because of the protagonist, I feel that Fanxing is quite bad...

Excellent, the author's writing style can be said to be top-notch in Western persimmons. It is the first work that I can read as Kita instead of a Kita work that has no sense of life and is nothing but sunshine and cheerfulness. There is no god and man to unfold, and it is also a bit over-expanded, which makes me feel that this is not a bad persimmon.

It's good-looking, with ordinary daily life, and the delicate emotions of young girls are shown by the author. I lost interest after looking at other girl band fan works, but this one made me linger. Anyway, I like it very much Looking forward to Hongxia Line, don't love Hong TV anymore [crying]

There are very few novels that I can read for the second time (I actually prepared for the third time but gave up) I still like Hakiyu as a magical chef. In my impression, there is no behavior of lowering the head, licking the dog, and there is no inexplicable physical contact. She also has a bit of a tsundere attribute (she doesn't always mean what she says), which I find quite likable. Half of the reason why I like reading this novel is because of Haki Yu, and the other half is because of Kamito Brawl. After studying last week, it was really satisfying to put down my mind and watch the daily life of some gods. About the IF line: As a character, I think this design is very good. It has more possibilities for people to see more sides of Haki Yu (which means that they can shape the character more freely). Regarding the cool IF line: I give it seven points out of ten. Personally, I feel like there's something missing but I can't put it into words. Maybe it's because there aren't many gods and men fighting each other, maybe it's missing some explosive points, maybe it's because the discussion about life isn't deep enough. I don't understand this, and I can't give you any advice. This is just my personal feeling. Don't worry about it. The author can just follow his own opinion. I'll wait until the other IF lines are released to see if I have time to write a review. I don't care about cultivating immortals. I feel like it's just something that helps shape Hajiyu and is a tool to promote the development of the plot. This novel inspired my interest in writing fan fiction (although it was more of an Austrian one than Lonely Rock) and I successfully wrote two chapters. Let's talk about what Hakiyu looks like and want to draw a fanart (although I'm not really good at drawing and I can't necessarily draw it, but I still ask and I won't apologize!)

Good-looking, natural interaction, and the body feels warm

This novel makes people feel sad, as if my youth is over. If I continue writing, maybe it will become a work like The Flower Marriage of Five Parts. But it's also full of blank spaces that make people think.

It's very good. It's a food level. Personally, I don't care about the IF line that has the most negative reviews. I can just watch it as a fangirl without CG. I'm halfway through reading it and I used my spiritual sense to read the latest one. It feels so slow. It seems that it will soon tie up and continue the book shortage [crying]

The writing is really good The personality of each character is also very interesting Every personal line is very stylish It is also a progressive relationship in understanding the protagonist. Very design sense I just want to say that Kita Line is not sweet enough [smiles] I really need more sugar for my personal line [grievance] Also, update, update, update me [angry]

It's quite interesting. It's not the common Asasi kind, but a very normal interaction between friends. Occasionally there are some jokes mixed in, and there is a bit of outrageous dialogue in the middle, which is quite interesting. Overall, highly recommended. Although there is language in the middle that is similar to cultivating immortals, it should all be imaginary. You can just treat it as a chuunibyou.

So pretty! The characterization and plot description are a masterpiece in my mind. Whether it is the common thread or the IF thread, the writing style is very strong. I hope there will be a harem thread after the four IF threads, so I don't want to leave too many regrets.

It's very interesting to read, and the daily writing is really good. The style is like a Japanese light novel, and the overall tone is quite warm and peaceful. It's eye-catching, mainly different from the harem full-scale ones that I'm used to seeing in Tomato where all kinds of big events happen one after another (it may be because this book doesn't write about chicken and dog gbc). The controversial point in the comments is also the aspect of the heroine. A common line like the one in the corner plus a few separate lines for the heroine is indeed more novel and unlike the traditional online novel Wudanduo. This depends on personal taste, but at least it is not a poisonous point. I hope new readers will not be deterred by this, and I hope the author can finish it smoothly🫡. Speaking of those who want to see the harem or other characters' routes, if the author wants to use this template, he can slowly polish out different good-looking routes. I think it just depends on time😋

Childhood I often get money from grandpa's bedside table It feels like there is no end to the supply. Later I asked my grandpa if he knew I took money Grandpa said he knew I asked grandpa why he didn't change places Grandpa said that you can open the case after you get enough 3,000.

The book is very interesting, but I'm not used to reading if's single-player storylines. I'd rather read the extras. After reading the main plot, I was satisfied. I knew that it would be impossible to achieve the harem line without the divine power of the deus ex machina, so I stopped first. However, it is a pity that there is no harem line, but it is not bad to be a little lacking. I strongly recommend the author's book. The description of emotions is relatively delicate, but the plot is a bit sloppy and I'm reading too much.

It's quite good to watch, much more relaxed than other bands. The love story in the later stages of other books is ridiculously high. I just don't know if the protagonist is really cultivating immortality. It should be true, right? He can really see people with his spiritual consciousness! But what is paranoia? [Thinking] Recommendation

I just want to give it five stars and don't want to write a review

It is a very good Lonely Rock fanfic. I have finished writing the common thread, and the individual threads of the four female protagonists in sequence. If you have played galgame, you should be able to understand this structure. The cool line is finished, the writing is very good, next is Kita, followed by Pochi and Hongxia (Aihong TV#乐) All in all, it's good-looking. The protagonist is not a transparent person, but a gentle person who doesn't want to get into trouble but will take action when critical. The interaction with other people is also very interesting.

It's great. It's often humorous and abstract, as well as concise but delicate emotional expressions. I don't see any problems with the common thread. The subsequent if, except for the cool thread, the protagonist's personality has changed a bit, but it's still acceptable. I look forward to the author's final Hongxia thread, and will comment again then.

Whose trumpet is this to write fan fiction?