A Delusional Patient and Bocchi the Rock!

The writing is really good. The writing doesn't look like it would be at the level of Tomato. It must have been practiced by a big shot. It's not bad. It's either a harem or a single heroine. What does it mean to write an IF line? A novel is not a game script. I'm so confused now when I see any IF lines in a novel. You can either accept them all or just one. It's so silly. I haven't read this book in a long time. Why did it end up like this😅😅

Good! I have some writing skills, although the character of the protagonist who hides from the world and hates trouble is not the monk and love story character that I like. But at least the protagonist has a gentle background and doesn't look like someone who really runs away.

Just read it, it is one of the few fanfics that only has one anime, the others are either mixed with hen cards or mygo. In short, this article is very pure to read. The rhythm in the front is very good, but it is too main line. There is a daily life written by myself in the back. Because it is a love line, the sweetness will increase, but there are some problems that cannot be explained. The daily atmosphere is not bad, and there are no OOC characters in the front. In the later period, Xiao Lonely seems to be just social fear and abstract, a bit flat. This is probably because Xiao Lonely's personality is a bit too difficult to control. The protagonist is a psycho, which is probably the biggest obstacle to love. It needs to be sweet, but it will be blocked. If it is really sweet, it will be a bit boring and unnatural. Maybe it is my own reason. Overall, it is a work worth reading. It is very interesting. Being able to write an article and publish it is already great!!

Book review of "Paranoia and the Rock of Loneliness" In the field of animation derivative creation, "Paranoia and Lonely Rock" is undoubtedly a very unique work. With a score of 7.1 And more than 7,000 reads, it has occupied a place in the wave of fan creation. From the setting point of view, the concept of "Yan Ling" is very ingenious, embodying urban legends and rumors, and building a world view full of weirdness and imagination for the story. The protagonist Asami Yuuto returns with memories of his past life, with the clear goal of "making money to develop the sect economy." This pragmatic and even somewhat cold original intention forms a strong contrast with the emotional whirlpool he subsequently fell into. The socially fearful roommate, the creditor sister who exudes maternal glory, the terrifying Yang Jiao, and the blue-haired bassist are like an invisible net that tightly traps the protagonist who is trying to maintain an emotional distance. This kind of collision and entanglement of characters is full of dramatic tension and allows readers to empathize with the protagonist's "gravity black hole" situation. The character setting of the protagonist, who is "sultry and full of inner drama", is a highlight of this book. Through delicate psychological description, the author vividly portrays a character who seems indifferent but is actually rich in emotions. His inner struggle, resistance to emotions and unconscious fall are all shown in a large number of inner dramas, allowing readers to penetrate into the protagonist's spiritual world and feel his contradictions and growth. As an anime derivative work, it captures the essence of the original work well and makes bold original expansions on this basis. The "IF line" setting also adds more possibilities to the story and meets the diverse expectations of readers. Of course, this work is not perfect. A score of 7.1 Points indicates that it may have deficiencies in some aspects of plot control, narrative rhythm or character creation, such as the logical coherence of some plots, the in-depth exploration of supporting characters, etc. There may be room for improvement. But overall, Paranoia and the Lonely Rock is an anime spin-off worth watching. With its unique world view setting, tense character relationships and delicate psychological descriptions, it brings readers a reading experience full of fantasy and emotional entanglements. It is especially suitable for readers who like fan creations and are interested in urban legends and spiritual world themes.

It looks good and fits the character very well. The author has great ideas I hope Pochi will be a single female protagonist 🙂 and don't have a harem.

This novel is amazing. The first cool line at the end made me cry😭 (please pay for the 100 million yuan for tears). The emotional scenes are very delicate and it is easy to bring emotions into it. The protagonist is completely integrated into the original work and is not abrupt at all. Really well written I found that many people hate the f-line. Almost all the people who give negative reviews say this. Actually, I don't think it's a big deal. If you have the ability, just write. If you don't like it, you don't have to watch it. Otherwise, you can just watch one. I just watched the cool line and then stopped watching it. This is equivalent to a single heroine, right? There's no need to make a fuss in the comments section. When it comes to writing novels, more people write for themselves. There are a lot of people out there saying that the author does whatever he wants for the sake of traffic. There is no need to slander an author, right?

Is the heroine Hongxia or Pochi? Before chapter 40, Pochi still had a chance. After more than 40 chapters, Hongxia will be stable. I hope there won't be more heroines.

Very good, highly recommended, I have read another very similar book, Cultivation in Lonely Rock, and I thought the author's book was the same, but the author turned this sense of separation into Yuuto's illness, making the essence of the protagonist's behavior become abstract, and instead integrated into the group. I have read a lot of Lonely Rock fanfics on Tomato, either with a single female protagonist or a fusion of girl band comics. This is the first one for someone like the author. There are currently no poisonous points. The only regret is that there are too few. Who can understand the broken feeling that a person who believes in watching in bed all night finds out that he has caught up with the large army 😢 I wish this book will get better and better and be completed perfectly

It's a very good fanfic that made my mouth fly. The male protagonist's succubus attribute is finally not the kind of succubus that attracts girls to fall in love with because of his incredible appearance. It's too cliché. The protagonist's various behaviors really make people fall in love with him unconsciously, and the emotional details are also very good.

It's very beautiful, highly recommended. I thought it had multiple female protagonists at first, but it's not bad at all. I'm not averse to watching the lf line. The one written by Ryo is very good. Of course it would be better if it could be longer. I'm also looking forward to finishing the other lf lines in the band. Finally, I hope there will be extra chapters after the end of the lf line. [Sending my heart]