(Family + Shuangwen + Decisive Killing + Spiritual Root + Sword Cultivation + Nurture + Not the Holy Mother)
After Qin Xiaoyun traveled through time, he held the pagoda in one hand and the Ten Thousand Ghost Flags in the other. He was decisive and ruthless in killing the enemy, but he was loyal to his family. Along the way, he led his family to become the first family in the world of immortality, immortality, and gods.
Reader comments
The author could really optimize the punctuation! It sounds okay, but it looks weird, the dialogue has no punctuation.
To be fair, some of the previous chapters jumped too fast, making me a bit confused. . . . After seeing it, it became smoother
Come on, come on, come on
The content is pretty good, but can you put in the punctuation? [Laughing and crying]
Pretty good, except for some typos
Still good
Not bad, but why do I feel like this practice is a joke! [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]
It's very well written, keep it up!
It's okay to take a look
This book is very good. I like to read it.
The story is good but the writing needs to be improved
The author could really optimize the punctuation! It sounds okay, but it looks weird, the dialogue has no punctuation.
To be fair, some of the previous chapters jumped too fast, making me a bit confused. . . . After seeing it, it became smoother
Come on, come on, come on
The content is pretty good, but can you put in the punctuation? [Laughing and crying]
Pretty good, except for some typos Still good
Not bad, but why do I feel like this practice is a joke! [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]
It's very well written, keep it up!
It's okay to take a look
This book is very good. I like to read it.
The story is good but the writing needs to be improved