You Have to Live Well in Honkai Impact.

Well, I think I can change the cover, yes, I feel it is really possible, no, the books I have seen in the past are much better, those books are usually about love, their relationship happens so fast, there is no sense of logic at all, I feel like I fall in love with others for no reason, especially in many of them, I see the protagonist and so-and-so and I feel like the protagonist within a few pictures, so how does it look like this? Oh, it's a bit weird. I feel like there's no reason. After all, people are just mediocre. How can you fall in love with someone all of a sudden? The last time I thought it was good to watch today was "Honkai, I Can Do Anything". It was really touching. It was just an ordinary person's struggle in the world of Honkai Impact, and it was also the return journey of a wanderer away from home. Moreover, there was no nonsensical reason to get close to the protagonist group or anything like that. It was very ordinary to get in touch with you. Ah, in short, how should I put it? Very beautiful. At least it's pretty good-looking so far. I hope the author can keep it up. Come on, great author! [Like][Smile] By the way, the author hopes that you will fill in the previous pits. There are some parts that you don't understand. For example, as mentioned earlier, well, there are a few people who have traveled through time and space, but they don't understand that part. ＼(`Δ')／ By the way, when will there be a heroine? I feel that if you are a heroine, you can push it back a little, don't be too anxious @Young Age Uncle Face [smile] Hey, why do you suddenly have a sense of déjà vu as Xu Shu, even though it seems to be just a little bit [laughing evilly] Damn it, author, why don't you come back? It's been almost a month @Young age uncle face. If you don't come back, what will you do with me? I'm almost exhausted too. (／_＼)Big grudge

It's a very good book. The writing can be given 3 stars, but the biggest point is that the author has captured the character perfectly and even digs deeper. The character of the protagonist fits the image of an ordinary person ("a non-returner who longs to return home") who has just traveled through time and does not have a strong golden finger (Honkai resistance does not count). The characters in Yusan's home are also very consistent. It is not that the warmth of Mei Yi is full of favorability (commonly known as Bai Gai). Tenderness and perseverance, Paramecium's naivety and kindness, Yaya's sympathy and tolerance in front of family... They are all in line with the real-life reactions, and the strength is also brought up by the protagonist himself (there is a feeling that talent will not give you a knife-like figure [sneaky laugh]) How can I say, I strongly recommend this book (among the few novels I read, IQ is online, it makes sense, and it makes people think "Wow, this is the mouth and teeth I want to see") Disadvantages: The segmentation is a bit uncomfortable in some places, and a large section at once shocked me, but it is understandable. It's a good book [Thinking][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The ore dug out from a pile of sand is not a precious metal like gold or platinum. But better than sand, similar to alumina (aluminum was expensive in ancient times because it was difficult to mine, but modern technology has effectively reduced the production cost of aluminum to extremely low prices) and is worth a look.

It looks great, and I feel like Yae Sakura, Kiana, Mei, and Bronya can all be the heroines. It's better to have more female protagonists. I'm a Qibao fan. I think Yae Sakura's emotional line is quite good, and so is Mei's. Let's just accept them all. But I hope it won't be like other fan works. I hope it's logical. What I've written so far is quite good. It's not as straightforward as other works. Just cultivate it slowly. Author, don't stop updating. Just update more every day. I'm afraid the reason for your low rating is that you stopped updating for a long time and didn't update enough.

Although it is dull, I feel that this is very close to my normal reaction to traveling through a collapsed world. Unlike other protagonists, who immediately forget about their family members once they travel through time, and can blend in within a very short period of time, which always looks a little awkward. I think this book is very good and highly recommend it.

The character in it, Police Officer Edogawa, is clearly designed to change from a mentor image to a villain image, but this villain does not bring a very tense crisis to the protagonist. The protagonist refuses the protagonist's call for adventure to prepares to answer the call for adventure. The plot arrangement of forming partners is more detailed.

I don't know if it's because I listened to the book while playing the game. There are many places that feel a bit inexplicable, especially when the male protagonist and Qi Bao act together and then Qi Bao says that the male protagonist has a bad idea, and then the male protagonist rubs Qi Bao's face, and Qi Bao runs home. This whole part of the plot is inexplicable to me. Why did he go home suddenly? There are also many sentences that are not fluent. For example, after reading the sentence "Looking strangely" for a long time, I didn't understand what the previous "looking" meant. There is also confusion in the characters. It is obviously the male protagonist who is silent, but Kiana stands aside with her arms crossed. It was also mentioned in the comments, but the author has not changed it yet. Furthermore, this book has a lot of streams of consciousness, and I feel that the male protagonist's emotions are ups and downs. Although there are reasons, the changes are too fast for people to adapt to. To put it bluntly, there are too few transitions. However, it is generally readable, but the issues I mentioned still have a great impact and I hope the author can correct them. The male protagonist has such a huge emotional problem that he cried more than three times in less than a hundred chapters. The first time you cried was indeed memorable enough, because you knew you couldn't go home, so you should cheer up quickly after crying this time instead of crying to vent your emotions over similar things again. Moreover, crying is the most primitive and inefficient form of expression. It can be done once or twice, but it has been done more than three times, which is really tiring, not to mention crying every time because of similar and trivial things. I can understand that the protagonist is emotionally unstable due to his young age, but the author has obviously developed a path dependence. He cries as soon as his mood breaks down, and starts crying again a few days later when he gets emotional. Moreover, the protagonist never grows up while crying again and again. He will still cry the next time he encounters the same thing. This has reached a level that is annoying. As the saying goes, break and then stand. Since you know why you are crying, you should face the same thing calmly instead of continuing to break again without making any progress. Some people may say what they said, but it was not you who traveled through time, and your emotions broke down even though you traveled through time. But I want to make it clear that if the protagonist always breaks down emotionally because of trivial things, then if he encounters the same thing in the future and still breaks down emotionally because of trivial things, will it become a weakness, will it become a drag on the team, and lead to failure? The reason for failure can be lack of ability or accidental reasons, but it must not be due to emotional breakdown, because this will make people feel that failure is very cheap. From my current point of view, the protagonist may really fail due to emotional breakdown, then this book really deserves this score. The summary is that the problem with the protagonist is that he breaks down too easily, like an emotional giant baby, venting his emotions at every turn. The problem with the author is that the emotional breakdown is written too cheaply, and he always uses crying and wailing to describe emotions in a single way, which makes me feel a little bored. Also, the disease of literary youth is becoming more and more serious, resulting in more and more inexplicable literary youth plots that are becoming more and more watery. The plot is somewhat watered down. I hope the author can take these issues seriously

Strictly speaking, I only listened to about a dozen chapters. The reason why I gave it five stars is because I had a very good dream. And the content in the dream is very rich. Although I almost forgot it as soon as I woke up, I still have the impression of the first level, and I still have the impression of the second level, which is really good. After I woke up and thought about it carefully, I didn't know how to pass the level with my brain, although I don't know how I made these contents. There is another key point, that is, the dozen or so pictures he wrote before are also very good.

It's quite consistent with what an ordinary person without a system would do. Moreover, you can also wear clothes and control the character design. I still don't know who the heroine is. I don't know if I can answer it. [Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon]

I think this is the Honsan fan novel that I have seen that is the most realistic and realistic in terms of personality. It does not have to be a common orphan to deal with the past life. The protagonist also has his own personality and difficulties. Instead, he looks like a real person. It is not that he is brainless, but he speaks his thoughts calmly and feels very comfortable.

I didn't hold back. When I saw the title of the book, I only thought of the noble little scythe. Alas, Soul Five. Urgent update, author, you must continue to update.

This novel is really great! The confusion of an ordinary person who travels to the Honkai world, the longing for home, the kindness to others, and the persistence to survive are not like other fan fictions, which are very deliberately close to the protagonist group, and summarize the protagonist group as their own private property. Each small head controls the big head. The author writes about the helplessness of ordinary people who have gone through the Honkai Impact. It is really very special. Good (≧∇≦)/, the characters in the author's works are all flesh and blood. They are not like other fan fictions where they fall in love with the protagonist mindlessly in order to highlight the protagonist. Are they like other fan fiction where the protagonist is ignorant, arrogant and has a sense of superiority through time travel, as if the whole world revolves around him (´∀｀)♡, I feel like I can sit at the same table with Lao Xu

It looks good, and the description of the protagonist is very realistic. The only bad aspect is that the protagonist is too fragile, unless he is prepared to be redeemed after being transformed. It's okay to cry, but you can't skip it after crying, as there will be no growth at all. After heartache, growth and redemption are the keys. After I lost my hometown, I no longer had a home, but in the future, where I have friends, that is home. The New Year period can definitely be sublimated. A little humble opinion.

I personally think this book is quite good. If you don't want to see it, just leave. @A Fei running around Ah Fei, hurry up and give this book five stars, but you can read it for yourself and then decide whether to give it five stars or not.

The writing is quite good, the logic is there, and the writing style is readable. However, the emotional line feels a bit fast and rough, and the details are a bit poor. For example, the scene where Kiana and Banya quarrel feels a bit too hard, but the protagonist's growth line is well written.

The book is very good, the protagonist's character is very good, and the plot is okay, but the protagonist's growth line is too long, and I feel that the protagonist's psychological defense is a bit fragile.

This book is in line with my perception. It is not obtrusive. The protagonist has obsessions and shortcomings. He may cry but can accept it. The protagonist also changes and grows. The content is a bit bland, but it flows smoothly, and there are also interactions with the female characters, which is a bit sweet. Finally, I hope the author can update it stably, at least to bring changes and vitality to the original story. Come on, author.

There are many original plots that are a bit slow, but it doesn't prevent them from being enjoyable to watch. It would be great if the author could update them twice a day.

Super invincible and beautiful

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you

It feels like I'm... Reading... A novel? 😳

Well, the reading time doesn't lie.

It's great, I finally found a high-quality book [Cool][Cool][Cool]

It's quite interesting [I learned it] The description is very good, there are no problems, and it's quite clever [eating melon]

The writing is not particularly good, but it can be considered as good as tomato, and it is quite to my liking.

It's pretty good. It's not like other fanfics that have a direct appeal to you. Although there are some places where it feels like you skipped something, it's not bad.

Why is the cover of the Emperor's Custodes?

In fact, the best place to retire is Saint Freya [laughing]

Uncle, come on and write a book! I will support you, hehe, after all, uncle's books are really good. ⌓‿⌓

The author has his own ideas in writing the book, so he has skipped some content, but the reader is not the author, so it would be better to be more detailed [Like] [Love]