Breeze Outside the Golden Courtyard

This is a story called Xia Zhi - just like that summer, I played a game called Honkai Impact 3 for the first time during my summer vacation. It was a very good story, and there were so many regrets in it that I couldn't help crying. But after reading many fan works, this is undoubtedly another story, and it is the one that surprises me the most. It does not mean that other novels are not good, but I have witnessed a story that satisfies me. It is not unreasonable or collapsed. It is one of the joys of my life today. Finally, thank you to the author for bringing me another story!

This book is the most interesting one I have seen in Honkai Impact fandom. Every word written by the author seems to be infused with emotion. The paragraphs and articles composed of these words vividly present the character's personality and life in front of the readers. It is amazing. I dare not say that the author's writing style is the best, but it is definitely not bad. This is impossible. Negative, before I saw this book, I remembered no more than 15 authors, and now there are 16. At the same time, the author ensured quality while also ensuring quantity. This is really too diligent, but I hope the author will not be too tired and write the book on the premise of ensuring his own health. After all, the body is the prerequisite for everything. ____A reader January 26, 2025

The profound knowledge and romantic writing style can be said to be completely in line with all the fantasies of Chef Eden. I haven't finished reading it yet, and I feel a little bad. I hope I won't read it. It's a rare good book. I was filled with emotions at the same time and didn't know what to say. I'll make up for it later. Love does not rise in the east and fall in the west, but romance lasts until death, which is probably all my understanding and perception of this book. I discovered this book early yesterday morning, and stayed up late tonight to basically read it. I can't calm down for a long time, and I have mixed feelings. Why do I like these characters in the game Honkai Impact 3 so much? In my opinion, the fan creations are the most important. We started from the game I came into contact with a certain character in the play, fell in love with it, was moved by it, and through various secondary creations, I poured the emotions gushing out of my heart into it. Reading the whole book, especially the first volume, the word "romance" is used throughout. This includes the tenderness in the smallest details in real life, the truth that cannot be touched, and the unattainable longing that exists in fantasy. Please, I think, for Eden, Ellie, or other characters, the reasons are different, and everyone's love is different, and there are such a part of them, with uncontrollable feelings, either boldly and straightforwardly, or cautiously, trying to express their unique love in every possible place, whether it is a second-generation video or a fan fiction No matter whether it is the author or the reader, it is all the same, and the most unstoppable joy is that we gather here and resonate in love. Isn't this a very romantic thing? With so many thoughts, I wrote down some humble opinions before going to bed. I hope the author can see that this is also a spectator who should be in the audience, and he can show his little support and gratitude to the author. @

I declare Over There Is Tomato to be the most pinnacle of Eden single-heroine Honkai Impact fan fiction. The author's writing style is really excellent. I feel that I should pay to read your novel. As for the blade? It's ridiculous that any decent author these days doesn't use a razor blade. The male protagonist is also a very traditional beautiful, strong and miserable character. To be honest, you can discuss it with these people @gui @ @123 Again, whoever doesn't see it will regret it [Learned] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Learned]

From a personal point of view, this book is not like a fanfic to change the plot or make up for regrets, but rather like a daily novel in which the author does not want to change the plot and ending but wants to change "he can't do anything" and wants to accompany Eden as the protagonist. It is a relatively rare novel, but I really like it. To me, it is not only good-looking, but also like meeting a close friend. After all, the original plot is already very good. The only regret is that there is no projection of the captain in the plot in the original novel. It's just that you can only watch these things happening and can't take them into consideration (I can't do anything), and this fanfic makes up for my regret (even though I'm not Chef Eden) Different from other second creations, some fan fiction seems to have applied the background and character templates, and then rewritten the ending; but this one seems to have added daily life and details to the original plot. The protagonist is more like the author's shadow cast in the book, and it is also considered a semi-sweet novel. (Stacked Armor) The above is just my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it. Abbreviation: The author can't do anything, so he wants to write a novel and create a sweet love story.

This is the first book I have read with a single female protagonist, Eden. To be honest, I can tell that the author is really writing seriously. From the plot, I can also feel that she has the same romantic qualities as Eden. This is probably the person who recommended Eden. I like the way the author inserts anecdotes in the first volume of the Paradise. It feels like I have returned to that summer. While complaining that there are so many Paradises, I am unconsciously attracted by the scattered text plots. (I also have to thank the limited-time rewards of the Liver Crystal Heart of Paradise and Paradise plot when I went to the past, and I really understood this story called Chasing the Fire and was moved by it.) In fact, I haven't experienced the long preparation of the plot of Paradise like the old captain, but I was still deeply attracted, including the last lesson when I first entered the pit. I still remember Teacher Himeko's answer. She said that she would not let her students fall into collapse... This should not be considered the answer... You are so cunning, Teacher Himeko... In short, this is a serious Honsana humanistic novel. The character portrayal, plot logic, and writing are all good. It's not very exciting, but it's romantic, but you have to watch it with your heart♪~ (ps: I just finished reading the first volume, so I won't comment on it for now)

Immortal product, this is the real immortal product! Bella strongly recommends Ah Xing. If you have time, you must go and read it. The author, who is Eden's single-recommended chef, wrote the article extremely well in order to express Eden's temperament, beauty, art, elegance, and poetry. Bella lacks vocabulary and cannot think of any words of praise. But in general, this is a book that is different from a running account and a work created just for the sake of pinching rice. The author is deeply involved in emotions and has devoted time and energy. Powerful, polished works are produced to make people remember them. It can be said to be one of the best works in Tomato. I recommended this to a friend and handwritten it. Our feelings after reading it. Generally speaking, I felt shocked after reading the first volume of Bella, especially the summary at the end of the volume. We can see the author's persistence and the author's emotions, but these are rare in many Tomato novels. I only hope that the author can get better and better and create more excellent works. , Create more beautiful memories, let us remember, here, the author wishes that your life will be as gorgeous as summer flowers, the years will be quiet, and you will be safe and worry-free.

This book is so damn good. The author has already updated it very quickly, the second fastest among all the books I have ever read. The plot is also very sunny, healthy, sweet and knife-free. If this book had not been a single heroine, I feel that the protagonist and Ellie are very suitable for each other, okay. Like (sad).

The plot structure of the book "Breeze in the Golden Courtyard" is unique, logical and has good rhythm control; in terms of characterization, the characters have distinct personalities, the protagonist has a concrete and tangible growth and transformation, and the relationships between the characters are intricate; in terms of writing, the author describes the scenes in detail, and the writing style is suitable for the theme of the story.

Seriously. , The rating of 8.0 Is really not worthy of this book. The author's narrative style is superb, his writing is very good, and he has a very special style. In my heart, it is definitely a 9.8 Masterpiece. Come on, author. (By the way, this author is simply a superman. He takes 5 pictures a day. Is he a poet?)

It's really rare to find a Bengsan fanfic in which Eden is the heroine. I personally feel that the writing is not a big problem, and the description is more delicate. If you want to read a Bengsan fanfic, you can try this one. After all, I remember a saying: I've come here. Since I saw the review, why don't you come and take a look? Take a look at the world in this book. I feel bad after reading it. If you scold me, I will admit it (I am timid, cowardly, and incompetent. If you want to scold me, please be gentle. I have thanked you in advance)

It's a very good book, and the third volume also has a good ending, but I'm not used to the author's writing style (?) (Actually it should be called a habit), which makes this book look very complicated and repetitive. But its achievements in other aspects far outweigh this shortcoming (but this shortcoming still cannot be ignored) Regarding the plot of this book, I am actually quite satisfied with it, except that Alicia is a bit pitiful (overflowing with sympathy), and Eden is a bit too "selfish" (?), But I can understand it. I am an emotional person. I can understand Xia Zhi's selflessness and loyalty, and I can also understand Eden. I can also understand Dean's selfishness and love, and I can also understand Alicia's hard-earned pursuit and the powerlessness of destiny... I can understand all the various conflicting emotions, which makes me unable to evaluate who is good and who is bad. I can only say that the author's character creation is okay, at least it left a deep impression on me. I wrote another long comment, forget it, I wish the author better and better. Add another rating: A-

I opened the space-time portal from Yi Moxibustion. The familiar writing style, the familiar taste, and the feeling of getting better and better, made me so high [laughing evilly] [like]

Honkai Impact is a story destined to be sad, but the author has perfectly created a person in it, a person who will give everything for his lover, and also recorded a story almost perfectly. Xia Zhi, to be honest, I regret that I didn't start witnessing his story until the late autumn of 25 years. It's only today that I have accumulated my emotions bit by bit (although I haven't finished reading it now) rather than at a more suitable time. He is the child of the sea, the lover of Eden, a person worthy of trust in Ellie's eyes, Kevin's best friend, and a mortal. Eden thinks that he is omnipotent and is her superman, but I am also sorry that he is not, he is just a person who will give everything for the person he likes. "I promise, I swear, I will definitely" These nine words have almost been engraved into my life. The author successfully created Xia Zhi. I was only able to witness two of the fourteen cycles, but almost all of these fourteen efforts were placed in front of me for me to look through. This is undoubtedly the best achievement in character creation. Even if the author is not satisfied with the last volume, in my opinion, this is not a flaw. The story can never be perfect. Regrets must be everywhere, not to mention that there is nothing wrong with the content. May the paradise of "gold" last forever

I want to see Zhi and Eden fall in love! ! ! ! ! I hope the author will write better and better [Sending heartfelt wishes]

I finished it in one go. It's great. I haven't read the second volume yet. After reading the first volume alone, the divergent ending is really enough to make me a god. I can completely write the first volume as a separate work. Regret is the longest confession. People are often trapped in things that were not available when they were young. I like the first volume. I really like it. I read a little bit of the second volume, maybe out of regret or something, I like the protagonist of the first volume, but in the second volume, well... I just don't like it. It is undeniable that this book is really good. Now I can no longer read other Honkai texts, including the second volume. Maybe it is because the second volume has not been completed. I can't change my mood. I suggest that when the second volume is completed, I will give me a kick instead of a hug and a trample.

You deserve to be remembered. You made me see that fan fiction is not all mindless cool stuff (although I read it with this purpose [you read it carefully]). After all, most people think that fan fiction is just for fun, to improve the unsatisfactory parts of the original text, but you let me see new possibilities. , Although it may be a bit exaggerated, Eden in the book really made me see a different character and a fulfilling personality. After all, I was once a chef of Ellie. Although Eden also has a good role, it is too dim compared to Ellie. I hope the author's book can be as brilliant as [Gold].

It took me one day to read the first volume. It was very sharp. It was not until the end of the first volume that I realized the author's intention and foreshadowing. The concept is really clever. It's a rare Eden story with a single female protagonist, and the author's writing style is very good. But the author also has to pay attention to rest. Working at 5 or 6 a day is really tiring [Chigua]

I think this book is very special among the Bengsan fanfics I have read. Among Bengsan fanfics, I especially like to read those related to pre-civilizations. However, most of the heroines are Ellie or Snake, and there are very few other female heroes such as Eden or V2∨. So I hope the author can work hard and write this book. It is really beautiful and must give Xia Zhi and Eden a good ending.

The writing style is excellent and delicate, although book lovers who are not very literary may find it a little... Difficult to read? Because this book has a bit of prose flavor, the form is scattered but the spirit is not scattered. The author is very good at creating the atmosphere and the character's heart. I think it is very comfortable and comfortable to read.

Yes, this Ellie is so well written, I like it so much. It feels very human rather than divine. It is my favorite book after reading it for so long. It is very unique and does not make me feel OOC. I don't quite agree with that extra chapter. Although it is very possible, it is not certain. Eden makes me feel like I can't tell it in the game (I'm a cloud player, but I've watched a lot of fandom and related videos). What kind of character is he? It feels like it is created dependent on others, without that kind of bright feeling. Also, I want to read the psychological description of Ellie in this book, haha ​​[flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It's really rare to see Eden as a heroine, and the character is portrayed very well. Is this the power of a cook? 13 Reincarnations in 650,000 years, deleted memories, tsk, the debuff stack is full. But no matter how you say it, it can be considered a superior novel. The depressive despair in the first volume and the warm changes in the second volume make me look forward to the subsequent plot. (It will be sweet after cutting)👊👊👊

One of the few Eden heroine novels. The writing is very good and the plot has ups and downs. It's good. Although the character of Eden in the back is a bit ooc, I think it's normal. My husband is doing it for the world. I feel a little abnormal in my heart. In short, this book is very good.

It's awesome, the plot is reasonable, non-toxic, the characterization is very smooth, every action has a reason, and she is the heroine of Eden who is rare in Sandengzi (although Eden is a bit crazy and a bit OOC later), but the overall characterization is still very good, the male protagonist and Ai Li are both very well portrayed, especially the male protagonist, I have become a male chef, a very good book, worth reading (PS: When will the extra story where Ai Li meets the male protagonist first, I really want to read it)

It looks good, the plot is reasonable, not too toxic, the characterization is very good (personally speaking), every action has a reason, and does not deviate from the character (except for Eden in the later part), and she is the Eden heroine who is rarely seen in Bengbengbeng (although Eden is a bit crazy in the later part, a bit OOC), but the overall characterization is still very good, and the male protagonist and Ai Li are both very well portrayed. It's just the ending of Ellie that made me a little sad (Ellie didn't die) (PS: So, when will there be a side story where Ellie meets the male protagonist first? I really want to see it [angry] [crying] [crying]) Very good book, worth reading

The real-name recommendation of Wang Laoyi, who can withstand iron elbows

Good-looking, logical, still sadistic, still harmful to heterosexuals, in line with my understanding of Eden, and the guest appearance of [Gold] in the previous book [Years] can reflect her uniqueness. The two complement each other, just like Zhi and Eden. Without one, the other will harm the tree, but it is still not enough (dog head)

It's good to watch. I can't say whether the ending is good or bad, but there will definitely be no shortage of knives. The interweaving of various memories really makes me feel a little stomach-ache, but I have to say that the hazy and strange sense of disorder are really worth watching, so I will update it quickly qwq

I am very much looking forward to it after reading it, looking forward to someone who dares to write a heavy story that is in line with Ompharos's painful fate and unyielding struggle, and that is truly in line with the spirit of all the characters, instead of using the old-fashioned time-travel and invincibility system to erase the tragedy and the romance and excitement of the story. In addition, I believe in the author's penmanship.

The writing is really good. The characterization of Ying Jie did not deviate from the characterization in the game, which was the most unexpected thing for me. It made me feel like I was watching another timeline. And the portrayal of the protagonist is really good, and the plot is integrated very naturally, and it doesn't feel abrupt when you look at it. I've almost seen the latest chapter. It is divided into two volumes, the first volume is a prequel. Personally, I feel that the first volume is indeed better written than the second volume. The connection between the first volume and the second volume is not very big. The function of the first volume is to provide the wind rhythm core to the second volume and separate the collapse form to make the companion Honkaimon and the companion god key, and the rest is gone. I hope that the subsequent plot will strengthen the connection with the first volume. While reading the second volume, I sometimes thought, if a person goes back in time and loses all his memories and ties, is he still the same person? If the Collapse Form is separated and used as a companion Honkaimon, will there be a Collapse Form in the future? Will it be the backhand of the past? After using the powers of Origin and End to reverse time and space through imaginary numbers, will the protagonist awaken the Herrscher core of Origin and End in the future? The answers to these three points will be found in future plots!