Rebirth**********

The author is a newbie, and the rhythm control in some places is actually not very good. I hope everyone can include it. Regarding some suggestions on details, rhythm control, and character image, if you feel that it is not very good, you can tell me directly. I will continue to optimize it in subsequent creations, and I will also make some deletions and improvements to the inappropriate parts of the previous article. Thank you all for your strong support! ! !

The overall plot is okay, but the text should not be too long and repetitive, such as every other sentence or the overall description of a person, but it should not be too lengthy, and the words should not be too repetitive. You can use similar words instead, otherwise the impression will be very poor. I suggest you change it here. Now it seems that there are no poisonous points. If there are, it may be that my requirements for the quality of a book are relatively low (because the novels I often read are a bit poisonous, but the more I read, the lower the requirements). Another point is whether the protagonist has cp [full]. If there is, I will slip away [laughs awkwardly]. Great, there is no heroine, we are saved. The author's kindness has not yet been paid! ✋😭✋

It's very interesting, but why did you hear that this book is no longer available? Is it true? Tonic wow, I think this story really attracts me [crying] [love] [love] [love] The author must persevere...

When I first came to Monster Academy, the whole article didn't have any bad points. I could accept the description of emotions and it was subtle and restrained. There was no cheating. I saw that I had reached a preferred viewing experience. I only followed the protagonist's single line and didn't blindly follow it. It was steady and making progress. In Tomatoes, there are not many Dou San articles. It is considered good. Come on, author, [Shy] [Blow Kiss] More

This is my second time writing a review. This book is generally very good. The plot is smooth. The protagonist has his own growth line. He does not just follow the original protagonist. This is good and a little shocking. The word count is 270,000 and it is only about 50 chapters. According to my previous reading experience, there should be about 100 chapters. The author writes very solidly in each chapter. I hope there will be more and more updates. It is not enough to read.

There are some minor flaws, but they don't cover up the flaws and the future is promising. There are a lot of flaws...

Come on, it's very well written [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] The author must persevere.

Hope to win the Easter match.

Let me go, he is really good-looking, and his writing style is very good. It is not boring at all, and it is quite refreshing. There is nothing brainless and very logical.

In Tomato, Douluo's works are already top-notch, especially those of Dou San. At least they can be ranked in the top three compared to the Dou San fanfics I have read. The character creation is very successful and does not follow the plot too much. The second creation is also very good. I hope the author can write it well [laughing]. I also hope that the author can have a good spirit while coding [eating melon] [laughing]

Personally, I think it's very interesting, but I just want to ask, is it a single heroine, two heroines, or more? In addition, I feel that the author does not know much about Dou 3. There are some places in the original work, but he evades the importance and does not describe them (maybe the author is lazy?) Then there is the Ascension Platform. I remember going to fight the dark gold Dreadclaw Bear and get the soul bone. (I haven't read it for so long that I forgot) This seems not to be written (or maybe I remember it wrong) [Thinking][Eating Melon]

Very nice novel

So pretty😄, ahhhhhhhhh

The writing is quite good, but there are some minor errors in many places. It stands to reason that Leng Yaozhu should have already reached the Ultimate Douluo in Chapter 9 of this book, because by the end of the original work, she has reached the demigod realm and has reached the quasi-god level. No matter how you look at it, she should not be a level 96 super Douluo. If there are any minor discrepancies, I will add them later. Come on, author

Looks good, although there are flaws, they are not major problems

This book is good. It is one of the few Douluo fan fictions. It does not blindly change the settings of the original work, nor does it have any mindless and cool writing routines. It would be better for the author to arrange a female protagonist, which will add a lot of fun. Although emotional scenes are difficult to write, without emotional scenes, people will always feel that something is missing. In the finale, everyone is happy, but if the protagonist is single, the protagonist itself becomes a pity. Another point is that the protagonist's writing style is indeed good, but it is too heavy. There is almost no time to relax from the beginning to the end. The writing is too depressing. There must be a short period of time to relax, otherwise the readers may not be able to bear it.

Come on, I wish you success

Like, praise, praise, praise

Beautiful and well written

Still sanctioned

Come on, author, don't stop! Author, you must survive! 😭😭😭

This is okay, it doesn't completely follow the protagonist, which is worthy of recognition.

It's very good, please give it a thumbs up, author! ! [Adoration]

A very good book, I found a treasure, please rate it

It's good-looking, good luck to the author! [Laugh]

It looks good, please rate it [laughing]

Very beautiful, very cool article!

This book is very delicious [Learned]

One of the few good Douluo books

The content of the story written in so many chapters is quite good. I hope that the people who follow me will give it a thumbs up for me. I don't want this good book to be hidden by tomatoes