One Person: Obtain the Akainu Template and Massacre the Alien World

Author, you can also use the famous scene of General Duanmu

The plot is not sluggish at all. The protagonist is positive and handles things without relying on cause and effect (for example, if you already know that a person will do bad things in the future, but as long as he is a good person now, you will try to guide him to the right path). Full marks 💯 [laughs]

Not bad, not bad. It's always a pleasure to watch. The main plot is not obvious. Maybe it's because the protagonist is too strong. The strength is pushed all the way, but the plot is not too problematic. I hope the plot can be written better after Zhang Chulan appears. It won't be a big problem to get 8 or 9 points in Tomato It gets a bit messy later on, but the writing is really okay. Let me settle it down with Samsung first.

The author updates and updates, it's so interesting [like], I hope there is no heroine, this is much more interesting than those studs

It's so beautiful, Mad, I usually don't comment. Five points must be five points. I can't be poisoned by myself!! It's so painful to watch. [Spit] [Spit] [Spit] A proper female video article

An author has written about Kizaru Fujitora before, and now there is one about Akainu. I hope it will be released soon. Is there any author who has written a book about Aokiji?

The author just doesn't stress about combat power. In the original world of One Piece, you need to know that elementalization can only be broken by domineering. And according to the new patch, the sea water in the world of One Piece has the Sea Tower Stone factor to disable ability users. It is impossible for one person to have it, so the sea water here is useless. Moreover, the protagonist can develop his own killing moves. Other skills can only be obtained by upgrading the template. There is no one he can develop himself.

Have a question? Akainu, who was in the way of killing pirates and even civilians, followed the protagonist's principle of protecting ordinary people who did not commit crimes. Are you sure you can achieve 100% integration?

It's great to watch, but the rating is low because Little Ghost Yun doesn't know the timeline [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] and then broke the defense [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] Come on, your words are too secretive. I think about this and that every day. I don't want to talk too much about the fight scenes.

I finished it in one go and received full praise. After reading the bad reviews, it was basically because of Xia He. I haven't read much of Under One Person, and only learned about it on Douyin. I can only say that the Xia He set in the book has not done evil yet, so I don't feel much about the so-called whitewashing, she is just a normal female NPC. A good book should be good, and this book is good enough.

Dashachun, what are you going to do again? ! ! ! ! ! No update for 12 hours! ! ! !

By the way, can the author change into a red suit with black leather gloves when he becomes the boss of Mo Yan District? As for the cape, feel free to wear it. After all, it is a bit strange to have a cape in the city. Then he can awaken his overlord color independently, master the domination, and change into a white suit when he becomes the chairman.

Anchor, your novel is still so good. Can you make it more powerful and explosive?

That's great. I hope I don't have a relationship with Xia He.

I have been a bookworm for ten years, but I am a novice. The writing is quite good. The protagonist has rules, restraints, and control. The scenes are more shocking and less confrontational. This can only be said that everyone has their own preferences. I have read many similar articles, and they are much better than others that focus on pirate abilities. The description of the structure is easy to understand and not too overwhelming. Nowadays, many of them are messy and I can't understand what they are talking about. This book gave me a basic understanding of a person.

The lack of power and strategy is more general, and all difficult troubles are left to the protagonist. Xiangbo Island is absolutely impossible to go to, and the actual power and strength are better than nothing. Suppressing absolute justice and wanting to have the best of both worlds, is it possible to threaten the protagonist in a busy city with a bomb in hand?

Sinners will suffer pain😈Sins will know what pain is😈Revenge to your heart's content😈Be punished, kneel down😈You are a sinner😈Blood debt must be paid with blood😈It's too late to make up for it😈Pain is my gift to you😈Great revenge is one step closer😈Death will not absolve you😈Who is the next piece of meat on the chopping board? 🐊🐊🐊

There is currently no heroine. The protagonist is raised by the company and is regarded as the future successor. He has invincible power, invincible background, and invincible strength. He will not do it to anyone he wants to do, so cool! The protagonist also has emotional intelligence and is not just a brainless fool.

The plot is that the protagonist joins Nadutong, and then draws his sword to kill when there is injustice. He kills from small places to big places, and is massacred by all sexes. He kills from China to Nathan Island, from an American company to a Japanese priest. It was very enjoyable to write, and the main character is invincible. There is a shortcoming. It may be that the author is pursuing modifiers too much, or simply using them for AI. There are some cases where modifiers are excessive, similar to the situation of Zhatian Jianlai, where descriptions are desperate but tend to be drawn in white. The overall plot is normal, but there is very little plot in the original work because the protagonist is too strong.

It's so cool. The author's writing is also good, and he also carefully portrays the image of Akainu in One Piece. The settings for one person are also very complete, but there are too few!

Yes, the whole world is not the land of the king, and the shores of the land are not the king's ministers. Anyone who violates the laws and disciplines must die. One day is the whole nature, and the whole life is the whole nature. But according to this progress, how many words can be written, will it involve the heavens?

It smells like Sakaski but not much. I haven't seen absolute justice yet. It is true that I am decisive in killing.

Except Xu San's portrayal is a bit poisonous, the rest is pretty good, quite enjoyable

The plot is still good, but Xia He is not killed [smile]

The writing is very good and exciting, and it also has a feeling of being written into reality. It is very reasonable. In today's environment, many people read brainless articles and think themselves stupid. They can't stand any twists and turns, so they have to be strong. And I can't understand. If you read too many brainless articles, shouldn't you pursue meticulousness? Have the senses ceased?

Update·…· When you update, the subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be magnified. Will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the plot progresses more attention. When you are on the third watch, the slight praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decline. When you update the fifth update, the readers' support will spontaneously form and the voices of praise will form. Getting louder and louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the scholar's debates were deafening and his tolerant attitude Implement internally and externally. When you are twenty, the bookworm's memories have a place for you, even if In the long life, your name will also leave a dazzling mark. Traces. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of them The problems all come from insufficient updates.

The development has been very good so far. I hope the protagonist can become stronger faster, strive to have the ability of Akainu to change the island's landscape as soon as possible, and then execute absolute justice [Love] [Love] [Love]

I hated Akainu when I first got to know him, but later I found out that he is a conscientious soldier.

It's okay, it feels good, but it's only half good.

More than 30 pieces of writing are okay, a bit like Akainu.