Is It Wrong to Start by Becoming a God’s Disciple?

I like the upgrade mode of the world of Dicuo, and any novel similar to Dicuo will attract my attention! The male protagonist traveled through time and became Belle but was not attracted by Freya. I feel that the plot is somewhat lacking. Will this make the content less exciting encounters? After all, the role of Freya can not only bring troubles to the protagonist, but also serve as a backer. The Hestia Familia is still very weak when it is established. The male protagonist can easily be targeted based on his appearance and upgrade speed. Even with Lyu's help, it is not enough. Without Freya's help, the plot will be broken!? Looking forward to the author 💕💕💕💕👍

The flaw in Immortal Product may be that the characters of the protagonist and the original person are highly overlapping. Is this soul penetration, maybe it is influenced by the original person? It is recommended that the protagonist should have his own personality and not deliberately imitate the original character. Overlapping characters will be a deduction. The writing style is very good. If given the opportunity, I will skyrocket if I create my own original works.

The writing and plot are pretty good, but the writing and writing make the dlc the main plot. It's no surprise. When I wrote the DLC, I knew that the plot would be broken.

It's very good. The biggest mistake is that at point 7⃣️ there are basically no fans of Tomato! It's really well written! Very interesting to read! The black dragon shouldn't be that strong! God should be able to deal with the black dragon, he just needs to lift the restrictions!

Is it a single heroine or multiple heroines?

So far, it's super good-looking, and the characters are captured very accurately (not to mention 100%, but I'm probably 80 or 90%). When I read the dialogue, I can picture the characters speaking in the anime in my mind. It's a great article. Don't miss it if you like it in the wrong place.

OK, come on! Bell should be stronger mentally, study in a planned way, and become stronger...

Can Bale be made stronger? The original work is too thin and you can't feel the power of [Martial Arts] at all! 😏

Okay, keep writing. You should pay attention to some language structure issues. If it doesn't read smoothly, don't use the original story. You should be original in part, or write a new perspective on the story.

Very good ground fault fanfic