Dusk*****

Give yourself a five-star rating (｡￫v￩｡)

In fan fiction, it can be considered to be in the upper reaches, but the words are a little short, I hope the author will work hard!

I have made up a lot of Sanjiu's knives. The author likes to do abstract things [laughing evilly]. It's very beautiful. Go check it out! ! ! ! ! Love the author so much! ! ! ! ! [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]

Yeah! Looks good, looks good ໒꒰ྀི ´ ꒳ ` ྀི꒱১ Boss, come on and update, hee~ Hee hee hee looks good [Doge]

The writing style is smooth and fresh, and the readability is quite good. As a daily-oriented article, it mostly uses colloquial and popular descriptions, and you can feel the liveliness of the author's writing when reading it. It is recommended that the author try to refine the language and try some descriptions, which can add a different beauty to the article. In short, I dared to write in junior high school, and it is already great that I can write like this. The author gives me a lot of support [please give me more updates]

Nice! The teacher's writing is not just writing, it is the roses in the church bells during the Renaissance, the lights of thousands of houses in the hazy night, the fragrant daisies in the fields, the red camellia blooming at the end of winter, the chirping of cicadas outside the classroom, and the best midsummer. I cried because I browsed all the major software and walked through all the stores, but I couldn't find any work that could compare with the teacher's paintings. Mommy, you are Qi Baishi, Da Vinci, the reincarnation of Van Gogh, the reincarnation of Caravaggio, the hand that Picasso kissed and the pen that Monet kissed. Even Morandi said that your hands are as if they were made by God! The Da Vinci Code is revealed to be your name, and the Louvre's next collaborator, the contemplative artist, is thinking about how to meet you! After seeing this wonderful painting in my short life, I think God is unfair. Why haven't you been made a god yet~[

Dear teacher: Seeing words is like meeting each other, showing trust and comfort. Falling in love with you is probably the most arbitrary and unreasonable thing in this world. It's not about weighing the pros and cons, or acting out of lust, but suddenly having you makes me worried and unable to let go. You are the extraneous branch in my stable years, and the sun, moon and stars in my ordinary life. Whether it's the sunrise in the morning, a nap at noon, or a night filled with stars, I want to spend it with you. Don't doubt why I like you, just like fish fall in love with the sea, birds fall in love with the sky, I don't quite understand what this means, I think it's like breathing, no need to practice, just because it's you. Meeting you is the beginning of a story, and walking to the end is the joy of the rest of my life (copy-paste version)

I watched it, it's so good, so good, so good. Anyway, the cp is good, and the plot is consistent with the original text, especially it makes up for the regret of Xiao Yuanxiao. I cried to death when I saw that part. Oops, anyway, thank you very much to the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

Each article is not very long, suitable for an impatient little lazy person like me [Send Heart] The author can try to add more detailed descriptions of the environment and rhetorical techniques to enhance the beauty of the article. As a daily-oriented fanfic, the language is simple and sincere, humorous and has a bit of internet style, I highly recommend it! ! ! [Sending Hearts] By the way, I would like to comfort Beibei (I feel like the author is not as old as me): Everyone is unique, and you will always have what you love. Go for what you love, time will never let you down.

It has the immediate feel of elementary school students' writing, but it is written very concisely.

Although it is a new book by the author, overall it is pretty good!

The plot is pretty good, and they are all the original protagonists. They are considered god-like existences in the Tomato fandom.

It's very beautiful! The author must stick to it

Good looking. Love to see more.

The author writes very well, keep up the good work (^-^) [laughs]

Suki, madam, don't be tired, but don't be idle either.

It's really super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! But there is a knife! ? ? ? !

The author's writing is very good! For me, all the regrets have been made up for! Strong recommendation! Strong recommendation!! Strong recommendation!!!

Tasty! The author writes very sweetly and seriously, come and read it!

Very well written, the author keeps up the good work

It's really beautiful. I don't follow it much at the moment. I keep following it.

To be honest, I don't have the same sense of immersion as before. If possible, I would spend more time improving my writing skills, but I still like it [laughs]

Very interesting, the plot is also funny

I believe you can do it

Not bad, good work!

I don't want to talk nonsense anymore, I can only say two words: beautiful!

I personally feel that this book is quite good. It has fulfilled many of our dreams and given me a lot of fun @. Learn from others and use less knives [crying]

This book is also very good-looking. I highly recommend reading it. But the author is a bit slow in updating.

The descriptions of the characters are very vivid, as if they are real people. The author writes it very well.

It makes up for the drama god's regret, it's very beautiful [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]