偶遇师姐，拼尽全力无法战胜

It is really a very comfortable book to read. Ever since the word "The Holy Mother" came out, most of the male protagonists in male novels are cruel and narrow-minded. The main theme is to kill all men and rob all women. There are very few male protagonists who can be called gentlemen like this.

Great, the interaction between the senior sister and the protagonist is not enough. However, the title has multiple female protagonists, so I hope not to write too many female protagonists. I feel that both the master and the senior sister are completely OK now. As for who is the main character, I don't need to say more. Full marks for the senior sister [shy][shy][shy]

How to say? The protagonist is very decent, kind and cowardly. It always feels like he is based on reality, or else he is not that three-dimensional. Other characters... The writing skills need to be refined, but they also have outstanding characteristics and are relatively interesting to read. As for the plot of this article, at present, it seems that it is unlikely to be recognized by most readers (perhaps?) Because the author's narrative does not make the story ups and downs. It is true that this kind of work will not catch people's attention like Shuangwen, nor will it be as exciting as Love Shura Field, but it is like this. Instead, it has a kind of pure conscience that does not belong to Internet articles. It is a breath of fresh air, and it suddenly reminds me of Li Juan, "My Adler". But for this reason, those who like this book are probably like the male protagonist, who struggles in the ordinary, sticks to himself, and longs for peace. (This is purely out of emotion. If you don't love me, you'll be blind. I'm so sleepy that I'm dizzy. Call me a sand tea.) ૮ •𖥦• აᐝ

Nice! There are only two heroines for now, and there may be more later, but I like it! If you have a harem, you should take it all in without leaving any regrets! Nice writing! The male protagonist doesn't think he's a turtle or anything, he is a gentle and warm man! There aren't many good male protagonists like this anymore.

After reading it before, I thought this novel was quite good, and I also have some suggestions. First, I beg the author to stop insisting on writing about Qin Ling. This character is really unlikable. No one would like a girl who likes to make snitches and take blame. It's not cute, it's just 🗡️. Second, the author can give the protagonist more abilities, for example, give a talisman the ability to suppress the talisman association later, and then use this ability as a fort. Third, about the protagonist's swordsmanship. I think it can be written in two forms, the ultimate drink more and the ultimate one. The Ten Thousand Sword Techniques that obtain all the sword intent, and add a setting that can perfectly simulate the original master's battle, make the enemy facing this move feel like facing countless swordsmen. As for the protagonist's own sword intention, I think it's better not to do anything fancy and just write the most simple and simple sword intention. The sword is just a sword. There is no chaos or sword intention with prefixes such as opening the sky. One sword can kill everything in the world.

It's very interesting. To be honest, I only read this book because of my senior sister. Don't look at the name of the master. The senior sister directly cut off Hu and became the heroine. The master became the female partner. I should say that I have read so many novels on this subject. This is the first time I read this. It is really interesting and I have the desire to continue reading.

It's a pretty good harem novel, and the progress is okay. The characters are well developed. However, the attitude of the master may be a bit stomach-ache, but overall it's still very good. The main character was not caught by the senior sister, so I took the bait. [Shy] The senior sister came to catch me. [Shy] It's more of a daily style.

They are all very well written. I think Chapter 75 is the most emotional and the best time for male and female majors to become Zhengguo, but the protagonist chooses not to. I don't comment on whether this is good or bad, just my personal feelings. After all, I am here to read the book, and I only look at my feelings. That is, I feel very bad, because I feel that the preparations have been made for so long. At this time, regardless of the right time, the right place, and the right people, I think it is okay, right? It won't ruin the character, right? But I feel it's my feeling, but I don't evaluate the book from a personal point of view, but the overall situation. Although this paragraph is very uncomfortable to watch, you deserve it. I can't accept this style, so I withdrew, again to remind people who can't accept this style. No, you can go and see it if you can accept it, it's still pretty good. (Personal opinion: Plot: good-looking, character traits: good-looking, characterization: good-looking, summary: excellent book) The above is purely a personal opinion, don't criticize it if you don't like it, my personal requirements for books are not particularly high.

Personally, I feel that the most interesting part of this book is the emotional line between the protagonist and the heroines. As mentioned in the introduction, it is a sweet book. Books with normal emotional lines include single heroines, double heroines, and multi-heroine novels. The highlight of the single-female protagonist novel is that the protagonist and the heroine interact for various reasons, and then the relationship slowly warms up. Because there is only one heroine, the portrayal is usually very delicate, vivid and real, just like a real living person. The interaction with the protagonist can often make people turn up the corners of their mouths to the back of their ears sweetly, it is mutual. The female protagonists in the novels with many female protagonists, highlighting the word "shuang", are centered on the male protagonist. The female protagonists have less emotional plots, so they often lack a sense of agility and end up becoming the protagonist's appendage. The biggest feature of this article is that each heroine is described like a single heroine. Each heroine has a large number of emotional lines and there are also running-in lines between them so that they can coexist harmoniously. , There will be no jealousy or fight for the protagonist, the sweetness explosion is very good😄, but maybe the emotional lines of the first two are too long, so starting from the third one, the emotional lines become shorter, but it is also a minor problem, but I personally feel that the problem appears in the third one. Regarding the feelings of the four male protagonists towards Xianjian Senior, Xianjian Senior slowly discovered that he fell in love with the male protagonist. After the male protagonist found out, he and Xianjian Senior were together. The first three female protagonists had plots where the male protagonist gradually fell in love with them, but when it came to Xianjian Senior, there was no such thing. (Maybe I didn't. (Have you read it carefully or missed it somewhere) I directly hinted in various ways that I also like Xianjian Senior, and then they got together. This conflicted with the previous setting of not being a casual person, which caused problems, but it seems that some readers don't like the flirting, so the author wrote it like this [Thinking] But I still feel The original way of writing is better. After all, this book is a sweet article and you have to read it 😋. It turns out that the writing has the author's own style and many readers like it. Otherwise, it may become a mindless and cool article. In short, long live the sweet article. Come on, author (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

# "Comments on "Master, I really never thought about becoming a rebel" Among many novels, "Master, I Really Never Wanted to Be a Rebel" stands out with its unique plot and distinctive characters, bringing readers a unique reading experience. From the perspective of plot structure, the story line of the novel is full of tension and twists and turns. A very attractive suspense is set up at the beginning, allowing readers to be quickly drawn into the story, eager to find out why the protagonist fell into the situation of "being a rebel". As the plot progresses, carefully designed plot twists emerge one after another, sometimes making readers sweat for the protagonist's situation, and sometimes being moved by the protagonist's wit and bravery. This relaxed plot arrangement makes the whole story full of rhythm, like a wonderful adventure, tightly grabbing the reader's attention and making it difficult to put it down. In terms of character creation, the images of both the master and the apprentice are very full and three-dimensional. Master has his own perseverance and principles, but also has a complex emotional world. His care and expectations for his apprentices, as well as his entanglement and helplessness when faced with the possibility that his apprentices may embark on the path of "rebellious disciples", are all vividly displayed, allowing readers to deeply feel his inner struggle as a teacher. The image of the apprentice is more multi-faceted. From being simple and ignorant at first to gradually growing and changing through various experiences, the transformation process of his character is delicate, real and convincing. Moreover, other supporting characters in the novel also have unique character traits and backgrounds. Their interactions and conflicts with the protagonist further enrich the story and add a lot of color to the entire novel. The theme of the novel is also quite profound. The theme of "Being a Rebellious Disciple" is not only about the contradictions and conflicts between masters and disciples, but also an in-depth reflection on many issues such as human nature, growth, and choice. Through the protagonist's experience, we see how a person struggles and makes choices when faced with difficulties and temptations, as well as the consequences of these choices. At the same time, it also triggers our reflection on the master-disciple relationship, moral ethics, etc., So that readers can not only enjoy the pleasure of reading, but also gain some enlightenment about life. In terms of emotional expression, the novel is even more delicate. The deep friendship between master and apprentice is fully reflected in the details of daily interactions. Those warm moments make people feel extremely warm. When a conflict breaks out, the inner pain, disappointment, anger and other emotions of both parties are also vividly depicted, allowing readers to empathize with each other and feel heartbroken for what the protagonists are experiencing. In addition, the novel is also interspersed with other emotional clues, such as friendship, love, etc. The interweaving of these emotions makes the story more colorful and closer to human nature in real life. However, the novel is not perfect. The processing of some plots may seem a bit too hasty, causing some plot twists to be slightly abrupt, making readers feel a little uncomfortable during the reading process. In addition, the inner world of some characters can be explored more deeply to better demonstrate their personality traits and emotional changes. Overall, "Master, I Really Never Wanted to Be a Rebel" is a highly readable and thoughtful novel. It has successfully attracted the attention of many readers with its wonderful plot, rich characters, profound theme discussion and delicate emotional expression. Although there are some shortcomings, this does not prevent it from being an excellent work worth reading. I believe that it will bring an unforgettable reading journey to the readers. At the same time, I also look forward to the author's continuous improvement and perfection in future creations and bringing us more wonderful works.

Objectively speaking, the plot is not as protracted as that of female videos, the characterization is pretty good, and it is considered a good read, but the author has too few manuscripts.

The novels written by Xiao Chunan are great.

Senior Sister is so sweet, I like Senior Sister Yu. Personally, I still don't like lolita, and I don't recommend that advanced monks be depicted with this kind of body shape, if they must be raised as a daughter-like character [eating melon]

The first time this article said that the protagonist is handsome is in Chapter 39. In fact, before that, the plump image of the male protagonist was already at the level of a succubus. This kind of protagonist is like Xiao Yan at the beginning, but without so much suffering, but it is really very good. I like reading this kind of article for the first time.

Needless to say, it looks good. I really like this ideal interaction between men and women [eating melon] and the main character is also very sunny.

I would like to make a suggestion: do not focus on describing the role of the "system", nor over-strengthen the function of the "system". Let the "system" become an "opportunity" similar to magic weapons, elixirs, and exercises on the protagonist's path to immortality (growth), downplay the role of the "system" itself, and emphasize the results of the character's own actions. For example, the "system" will give you some props that are not very useful in normal times, but when the protagonist encounters danger, the protagonist will make the best use of them based on the existing conditions to avoid danger; In this way, readers will feel that this character is indeed a person who can take on the role of "protagonist", instead of the "system" directly giving an "Emperor Experience Card" or something like "The Great Emperor Experience Card" to kill the enemy in seconds. This is not a "chance" but a "cheating", which will make readers feel that I can do it, and I can also tie a pig up to solve this problem. After all, who can't cheat. I really think this novel is quite good. Many places are well handled (for example, taking the pill of lying down for a minute combined with the passiveness of reducing one's control), and there are also some novel places. I also like the fact that the senior sister is so good at it, and the small details of the interaction between the senior sister and the protagonist. I also think that the role of the senior sister is very well created. Some small details of daily activities are really important (can help create a living person, not an NPC that serves the plot). Good luck to the author! I hope the author can read these suggestions carefully instead of just skimming them!

Well, I think the writing is quite comfortable. Why do so many people dislike the male protagonist? The three views are very upright. Isn't it toxic that the male protagonist of the novel does not have some calculation and coercion towards people and feelings? [I'm about to cry]

The book is quite good, but the description and characterization are not perfect. It's like eating an apple but it's tasteless and it's a pity to throw it away. The first is the image of the protagonist. He is kind, upright, and motivated, but he feels too rigid (there are many female protagonists, but he gives the impression of an innocent male). For example, during the trip to Yaowang Valley, the two disciples of the Sword Sect borrowed spiritual stones, so they can repay them. Debt, but it seems that he forgot it (or maybe I didn't see it), and the senior sister who is a disciple of the Sword Sect has an unpleasant personality. In the presence of strangers, she pulls and tugs at others and repeatedly pulls them not to leave, and enters other people's rooms without their permission. This can be changed. The second is about Yu Yunxi. The original intention of teasing the author is always a slight smile. In fact, he can add more personal colors, or he can put it in and write some psychological description. If nothing else is said, it can always be 💦word count In fact, I think the narration of the article is the most important. The narration suggests that the author should add appropriate daily tone or detailed description of actions. For example: It turns out [Xu Ruobai did not hesitate, with a thought, his spiritual power gathered, and three swords composed of spiritual power suddenly appeared next to him, and then they gathered into one, and Xu Ruobai caught it in his hand] [Xu Ruobai did not hesitate. With a thought, his spiritual power gathered around him, and three swords made of spiritual structures appeared next to him. They gathered together into one sword and was caught by Xu Ruobai in his hand. Of course, I just suggest that everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage, and the author can also change it according to his own habits and ideas (don't criticize if you don't like it)

I didn't feel there was anything bad about it. The male protagonist is a completely good guy. If you are narrow-minded and petty, I suggest you don't watch it. Otherwise, for the male protagonist, it's just a small amount of money and people who have money will have to worry about it. The character creation is still very good. I like my senior sister [Adore][Adore]

After reading it, it's actually quite good. I like the world view setting and the setting that is reversed later. It's very thoughtful. Although this article is about the system, the proportion of the system is not that much, and it is more like an auxiliary to advance the plot. There are a total of 8 female protagonists. The senior and master lines are the best in terms of appearance, and the others also have their own settings. There may be problems in terms of perception, but at least they are not outrageous (some people complain about the senior sister, I feel that it is actually the previous life), the rhythm is not draggy, and there are not too many poisonous points and thunderstorms (the biggest minefield I am chewing must be the harem, right?) I've always wanted to know whether he could be saved or not? (I didn't mention it when I was watching) Some of the foreshadowing was only mentioned quickly in the follow-up, and it always felt like it was gone quickly in the end. I don't know if it's my problem... The overall evaluation is good.

The subject matter is quite new, and the first part is really good to watch. I even stayed up late to watch it, but when I went to Jian Zong, it became more and more ugly. I felt that except for the two senior sisters of Jian Zong who were women, I had to accept it. After reading Chapter 277, my personal opinion of the protagonist's character completely collapsed. I read the comments and said that the latter part is an old routine and has a hasty ending. If you are not a book reader, you can read the first part to the sword sect. If you read it as a romance novel and don't use your brain, then it is still okay (I hope that the character design can be improved and the background added, the character design is too shocking)

The author can try to use the senior sister as a template for a single female protagonist. Now that the harem has withdrawn from the environment, due to the modern society's concept of love, the less something is missing, the more something is wanted. Most people now just want a pure love, that is, a single woman, or even a single woman who mainly sends sugar, supplemented by her career, and will not get out of the circle, but based on the flow of the author's writing The plot is not low either. Most of the single girls with ratings above 9.3 Have confirmed this (female frequency). What's more, both the male protagonist and the senior sister have lovable personalities. Multiple female protagonists don't require too many harems. Three are enough. This way the look and feel will be much better (please figure out the if line of the single female senior sister, I can do anything!!)

There are some problems in the content and plot. The progress of the protagonist is indeed slow, the world view is not developed, the sect has never met other people, and there is basically no description of minor characters. There are advantages and disadvantages, it can focus on plot advancement, there are not so many cliches in the face, but it is obviously a bit empty. However, there are many funny parts and many jokes, so it is good for casual viewing. I feel like I can focus on comedy later on and write less about the competition and suppression of cultivating immortals, so it can be used for leisure reading in a book shortage. The psychological change of the protagonist also requires a transition process, from inferiority to self-confidence. It should be tried later in the Sword Sect, and it is also time for the protagonist to learn something and understand his own talent. The presence of golden fingers is not very strong. Although it is quite useful, the realm mainly depends on fruits. It is difficult to add points by yourself. You can open more tasks. The higher the realm, the easier it is to improve. The main reason why I gave five stars is the senior sister. The character created by the author is very likable and has a strong personality. If the senior sister is not the main palace, two stars will warn [punch out] (I have typed so many words, the author must give me two more chapters)

The plots with Senior Sister and Master are very well written. I hope there won't be too many female protagonists in the future. The harem is good but don't be sentimental. Three or four at most will be enough. The focus is still on Senior Sister and Master.

Haha, after watching it for a while, I found it to be quite good. The writing is particularly good, but I didn't feel any discomfort after reading it. Senior sister: Junior brother, are you sure you don't want to date me? Then I'm going to pick you up [laughing evilly]

Author, I give you five stars, but I give them even more to Xu Ruobai. He has upright and simple views. I just like to watch innocent boys being teased by seductive beauties [laughing evilly] [shy]

So cool [crazy] First of all, after reading the first few chapters, I feel that there is a bit of a sinister feeling about intrigues, and the male protagonist is silent, and seems to be suppressing the story...[Grievance]... …But it's not the case! [Crazy] Including the bad guys mentioned in the introduction of the book, they were just playing around here at the beginning. They were actually just side dishes (note that this book has more than 500 chapters. The background and main plot are actually grand but not boring) and they were immediately wiped out. And then it really comes, classic high-scoring masterpieces, first White Moonlight (I don't know if this word is the right one, but it's the main palace that makes all readers very excited), then Sweet Harem Daily Life, cheating and cultivating immortals, etc., And then enter the main line... Not many dramas It is very classic (classic in a good sense), various lines (not too brain-burning, and has room for imagination), good pits and pit filling, etc... And there is a degree of relaxation, which does not delay the later stage and does not look like a matryoshka doll map. It is just the right time to finish the work. Another big difference from other novels is the small theater [face covering] the mysterious milk tea cup (Bei) trio (if you read it, you will understand what I am talking about, it is interesting [laughs])

Not bad, no wonder the score is so high. Xiao Chunan who came in probably didn't even run out😅 There are flaws, but the big flaws are centered around asking routine questions in daily life. Those who like emotions and daily life can ignore it. In addition, book friends who don't like to suffer losses can stop reading. Those who directly judge the male protagonist🐢 at the beginning can pass it.

It's not easy. I finished reading this book as quickly as possible. I have to say that I haven't read a completed novel for four or five years, but I have read two in less than a month (I read other books in the meantime) To be honest, there are some poisonous points in the book, but they are not intrusive and generally readable. Don't be too smart, there are quite a few pitfalls in the end, which is a bit regretful. The PS at the end of each chapter in the article is also very interesting. The heroine also has a distinct personality, but I think most people like the senior sister, right? Other than that, I feel that the author only replies to those few people every time he replies, and ignores others and doesn't give likes. It's a bit aloof. I hope there can be more interactions with different people.

I downloaded Yang Persimmon after reading this article from another platform. It can be said that the platform has become a white moon. I would like to give it a five-star encouragement [laughs]. The writing is quite good, but I didn't expect that the harem would include seven in the end. It's too exaggerated. Half of them were airborne [face covering] Wei Xiaobao's time in time was only at this level. But the biggest advantage of this book is that there are two plots involving time travel. The author has filled in all the causes and consequences and pits in a very satisfactory way, and the writing style is also relatively delicate. According to other novels I read on the same platform during this period, this is simply commendable. By the way, it would be nice if this novel didn't focus on the harem and only focused on the master and senior sister. Yu Yunxi's creation is really nice and she is a unique heroine in traditional novels.