Fantasy: I Understand the Laws of Other Worlds

The writing is good and a lot of emotions are well described. The imagination is also okay, one body and two souls. In the opening scene, a child is transported back in time, and many of the descriptions are in line with the innocence of a child. But this kind of innocence is not in line with what an adult should look like, which seems a bit stiff. It only breaks out later after grandma dies. The contrast is too great. It would have felt smoother if there had been some foreshadowing. For example, in order to survive after time travel, I first accompanied the actor in a play. While acting, I regained my childhood feelings, and my feelings became real during the act, and the connection was better. Nowadays, the one-body and two-souls are not interesting. You can switch between one-body and two-souls like Nezha 2, or be more imaginative and have one soul control the body to fight, while the other soul attacks with the soul to play tricks. When practicing Qigong, you practice during the day and I practice at night, and my double cultivation state is stronger than that of ordinary people. It's worth doing something like this. Writing is not easy, five stars.

Don't listen, it has nothing to do with science. An adult travels back in time and becomes a child, and his personality also changes to that of a child? I know how to play with dogs all day long, but where is the science? I might as well go see Han Li and travel through loneliness. You haven't written any of the nine-year compulsory knowledge.

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