Under One Person: Li Huowang's Template, Killing Daogui

I thought it was a formula Da Nuo world and took Li Huowang's script, but it turned out that it was a completely re-created world view. Although it is quite similar, it is still better than the formula flow. I also recognized the protagonist's mental state [OK]

It's very good. There are no common problems in other fan fiction, such as being a nanny for Zhang Chunan, being a dog for the company, etc., And there are no hidden abilities to seduce the protagonist. It can really make readers feel the protagonist's sense of identity and belonging to the Tianshi Mansion. It can also feel the care and love of the master, brothers and other disciples for the protagonist who has known him since he was a child. In my opinion, there are no problems with the protagonist's abilities in all aspects. There is no problem with the logic. After all, Lao Tianshi and Zhang Chulan didn't know each other at first. In comparison, they still prefer the protagonist who is with them. Now that the plot has reached the eve of the battle with Zhang Chulan, I will review it after watching it. At present, it is not only the best-looking fanfic, but also the most comfortable fanfic for me personally. Come on, author!

The writing is quite interesting. Compared with ordinary one-person fanfics, it has its own characteristics and does not blindly follow the plot. Everything revolves around the protagonist, which is more like a world view as the basis. Instead of the entire plot going towards Ant-Man's world view, the protagonist, that is, the protagonist-centered plot serves the protagonist. I think it is very interesting.

Nice to see it over It feels like the protagonist is exactly the same as Brother Huozi in the early stage, with relatives who dote on him. Questioning both worlds, but firmly believing that both worlds are real and both have a "good" master haha. Those so-called hallucinations cannot be seen by others and they think that the protagonist is crazy, just like Brother Huozi! If you have the same treatment as the protagonist, you will be driven crazy sooner or later

It's hard to imagine how awesome this book would be if it were adapted well. It creates a new world and structure and integrates it with one person's world to write. Come on, this idea is invincible, but it is a great test for the author's imagination and creative ability. I have seen many fan adaptations. Basically, this kind of fusion novel was unfinished after about 300 years. Because it has no framework and structure, the inspiration burst out and I couldn't write it in the middle. So come on, the author.

Who allowed you to be so little? If foreigners saw it, they would think we looked down upon it. If you ask me to say ten chapters per person [angry] [angry]

The content is very fascinating, so I won't spoil it for you here. I can only say that the author has a lot of imagination. When portraying a "mental illness", he is not shy. He goes crazy for the sake of being crazy and is immersed in the scene. I always followed the protagonist's thoughts while reading. The immersion is very strong and the plot is closely connected. I don't think that most fans give the protagonist the feeling of being invincible. It is considered a growth stream for me. I read the latest chapters in one breath and look forward to the author's update. It's a good book worth reading! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Looking at the introduction, there is Sister Baoer among the protagonists. But given the protagonist's mental state, I still hope there won't be a female protagonist

The subject matter is novel The content is pretty good too It's a bit unconscionable to score low on purpose, but it's even worse if you score high. Keep up the good work.

Except for kissing men, everything is fine I think the subject matter is okay, but I update two chapters every day, and the content of the two chapters is not much. I feel that the word count is low every time when it comes to critical moments. I read it for several days, and I felt uncomfortable for several days...

It looks like Daogui, but it actually feels like it to me. Many of the settings are different, and overall it looks great.

The writing style is very interesting. It vividly describes the tender protagonist who is a ten-year-old child with a completely immature mind. It uses the core of "misunderstanding" extremely profoundly and everywhere. I'm really obsessed with the writing of madness and it's confusing. The details are outrageous and hard to scrutinize. Overall, it's quite passable and I can read it. Forget it, this book doesn't deserve four stars. I regret giving it four stars.

Did someone change the writing later? As a result of the Maoshan section, Tang died.

Just watch it for fun [thinking]

It's well written, but it just doesn't suit me. Come on

The writing is good, but the gap in combat power between the two worlds is too great. Mainly because I want to see the world under one person

I am mentally ill, but not to the point of hallucinations, and I hate that kind of state. I have been off medication for two months. I read this book at 2 o'clock in the morning and suddenly became panicked. I ate a big bag of instant noodles before I recovered [crying] [crying]

The point that we are ghosts really explodes. Just like myths and legends, as long as you drink Meng Po soup, you can be reincarnated, and the ghosts will still be ghosts. [Please update]

I am very happy

The beginning is pretty good. The ending is a mess.

Brother, give me one more episode, I'm dying, please, brother, I I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like my whole body is shaking. Come on. I can't breathe, please, bro, just give me one more episode, just one more episode Just one episode, I'll never touch it again, please, brother, really, just One episode, I swear I will never touch this thing again, I really can't bear it No more rain

I can only say it's a classic. I recommend it to everyone. It's the most classic book I've ever read.

I have been reading novels for 20 years, and speaking from my own heart, I still have something to say. I haven't felt this way in a long time. It is worth recommending. Generate electricity for love once a day, cheers for the author

It's very interesting to write

A strange and fairy smell,

It's well written, and it's incredible [cover face][cover face]

Still quite interesting

Very novel and interesting

Not bad, I finished reading it in one sitting

Nice, but too short