Isn't It Okay If It's Not O?

I really like this type of writing, but I feel that the ending comes too quickly. Many people's stories in front of me feel like they could be written in detail. I always feel that there are some unfilled holes in the front, but the ending comes unexpectedly.

It really pokes me xp. The one drawback may be that the relationship between the brother and the younger brother is a bit abrupt. It is more like soft-heartedness and compromise. It would be better if there is a plot of the older brother slowly falling in love with the younger brother through compromise. But maybe this is the theme of the book "forced love"? The younger brother is making plans at every step, hehe. But I really like this article. If there were more, the plot would be fuller. I can't think of how much I like it [shy][shy]

😐😐😐😐 One star less because I don't like Gong's character, and I felt that in the early stage the protagonist's fight with Gong had no idea of ​​love at all, and treated it completely as family affection. When they are together, the protagonist is soft-hearted and attacks moral kidnapping. . . Can we really stay together like this for a long time? . Anyway, the protagonist is really tolerant.

It's good in every aspect, and the plot is pretty good. I feel like the protagonist is a normal person. I haven't seen such a normal novel in a long time. In addition, the incident of seeing Li Yu, really - some people become a criminal record after they fall in love.

Why don't many people watch it? It's a good AB relationship. Doujiao's character really pokes me. Xiaoyi is the kind of big brother next door who is very considerate and gentle. They are a sweet couple. Personally, I don't think there are many highlights in the front, but the later episodes are very brilliant. Doujiao's mother's self-confession is also very real. It was quite good at the beginning. I am disgusted with Li Yu, but later I thought he was cute. Here, Doujiao did harm Xiao Li. I didn't know who A was beforehand, but I think this is normal, because Doujiao himself is not a good person (bushi) and he is also very disgusted with Xiao Li, so um... I still recommend it.

After reading it, I think it's okay overall. I really like Brother Yi, he has a very charming personality, hahaha. Regarding the relationship line, Brother Yi made a lot of compromises. Although Doujiao was unreasonable, he still accommodated him. I felt a little uncomfortable, but the young couple can do whatever they want. Generally speaking, it is acceptable. The young couple should stay together forever!

Very nice! The pacing is well controlled and doesn't feel too draggy. The writing is also online. But it's really short, so sad (┯_┯) It's not enough to read. When will the author publish the next one?

It really makes me eat fine chaff! ! ! Brother Yi really made me feel his charm so easily. No one would not fall in love with him, okay? ! The image of Doujiao is also very full, and the transformation from a small cookie to a big crazy batch is natural and creepy, and each supporting role also has its own characteristics and a very warm daily style. The most important thing is that the plot is interlocking and compact. The 40 chapters can accommodate the details of the two people's relationship from childhood to adulthood, and can also create three-dimensional characters. Wonderful, really a hearty reading experience [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

How should I put it? It was okay in the early stages, and the later plots were also okay, but there were some passages that didn't connect, which made me wonder if I had watched the abridged version (especially some important plots [smile][smile]

Overall, it's very sweet ([shy]... It's just that the story behind my younger brother is too hasty... I can't forgive it, even if it's touching to find out that my younger brother helped punish the bad guy)

So pretty! ! ! I don't allow the rating to be so low! ! ! Although there is not much description of Doujiao's psychological activities, Ms. Dou's part reflected Doujiao's psychology very well. Good reviews, good reviews, good reviews! ! ! When will the author release a new book? ! ! Squat, squat, squat! ! !

I am so happy after watching it. If it is made into a TV series, I will definitely follow it, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.

It's very interesting. After reading the whole story, I feel that Chen Weiyi is really a very charismatic person, very good. Doujiao is also good, but it always shows some dark side, hahahaha, and some of the descriptions of the conflict between Brother Yi and Doujiao are not very detailed and quite sketchy, but the whole article is still good, and the chapters are quite short. It is good to read it like this.

Although it was fun to watch the two of them sweetly, the part in the article where Li Yu was scumbag by a scumbag also had something to do with Doujiao, which made me a bit uncomfortable to accept. Li Yu was really miserable, and Doujiao didn't seriously talk about it to the only one later, and he didn't apologize. It felt a bit uncomfortable here. But the overall elements are very many, and it is still a very sweet short story that can be read in a few hours. I hope the young couple can 99

It's so beautiful. How come no one is so beautiful? [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] It's really super, super beautiful.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Doujiao's character is quite complicated, and he is more dangerous in reality. The short story is not very sweet.

It's been a long time since I've seen a book that really suits Aijia's wishes. Love it to death! ! ! [Adoration]

It's really cool, but it's too short. I couldn't understand it at first, but it became clear to me later on. Overall, it's pretty good.

It's very interesting. I love to read sweet articles like this. The author just wrote it on my heart. It's really very interesting.

It's a very good book [Love]. It's fast-paced and the ending is not bloody. I really recommend [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's nice to read. I personally think the best of the author's writing is from the perspective of other people in the extra story. The simpler the writing, the better. I personally think there are many elements and it's quite delicious. Recommended

What a sweet article, it's really nice [sending my heart]

A short article, but very interesting

Interesting, short, and full of meaning

I like it. It contains a nice little sweet article.

Cut into pieces of cookie with a knife

So pretty, so pretty, so pretty, right?

Very pretty. I especially like Chen Weiyi! But I can't accept Doujiao, well, it's a bit forced love later on. Fortunately, Chen Weiyi and Doujiao really have love.

Overbearing, yandere, and a lot of elements of the younger generation. It's a very interesting short story. I read it in one sitting [laughs] [laughs]. Chen Weiyi redeemed Dou Jue [like] [like]