Dragon Clan: Sign in the Twelve Talismans and Start the Shadow Army

How should I put it, I can barely watch it, but I was almost persuaded to retreat several times before, so just resist with high poison resistance. Like the Shadow Eater group turns into a mini group, and the Alien group turns into an octopus group? Also, the strongest among the demons is probably the boss, Curlan, otherwise he wouldn't have become the big brother and let all the other seven demon kings obey him.

Well, the writing is okay and pretty, but there are a lot of poisonous points. The 12 spells should not only be equivalent to high-risk spirits. There are still some problems with the writing, but I can barely read it.

I would like to make a reasonable suggestion. So far, the proportion of the content of each chapter that is actually about the plot is somewhat small. I hope to increase the content of the plot and slightly reduce some explanatory paragraphs appropriately and reasonably. Other than that, there is nothing that needs to be changed. The writing does meet the definition of cool in the article. I hope that the protagonist's combat power will not be suppressed in the future. Come on_(:з∠)_

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Every time I hear talk of a deal, I think of the big brother in Nezha making a deal [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] Uh, my underwear was really clean after being stripped off, and so was I [laughing awkwardly] [laughing awkwardly] [laughing awkwardly]

As you know, people who type code often face all kinds of strange gestures from users, which leads to bugs in the program. At this time, you should reduce the opportunities for users to operate and reduce the options. In the next book, you can try not to expose all the options at once, but try to turn the cheat into no options and operate in a straight line. Then the reward received also appears as a percentage. This way you won't be disturbed by all kinds of weird comments. For example, many people have various strange understandings of the Cow Talisman, so don't let the Cow Talisman appear in an adaptive form from the beginning, but in a percentage after it is unlocked. This way there won't be anyone shouting about suppressing combat power. Also, I have a novel that does not suppress combat power and I will introduce it to you.

Quick code words, the author is great

Too short, too short, too short

The protagonist is so cool, the feeling of being in control of the overall situation without having to be afraid of most people, and it is also combined with the power system theme of Jackie Chan's Adventures, which I like, but there are not enough chapters at the moment, and it seems easy to get stuck [laughing]

What is yours will eventually be yours, it is just a long time coming. What belongs to you will eventually belong to you. Although it is late, it will always arrive. Please wait patiently and may every dream of yours come true. (ง •̀_•́)ง✨

It should be okay, but from the looks of it, it seems to be a single heroine, because I saw that it is related to the girl in the introduction, and there is no other relationship, except that the girl in the introduction met Eri once because of the sheep charm (probably)

The Dragon Clan fanfic is very good, it's very comfortable to watch, I highly recommend it [full]

Ok, I haven't read this article about Dragon Clan. I've only seen videos before. I didn't want to watch it because I heard there were cuckold elements. But it feels good to read the author's fan fiction. Ok, ok, but you are too slow to update. I will read this article and write a fanfic when the time comes.

It was quite boring at first, the writing was mediocre, and the feeling was mediocre, but after chapter 60 it suddenly started to get better, the fighting was so exciting!

The sea, you are all water

Finally someone has written about this subject [crying], come on, author, take a breath and continue writing when you can't finish it. Don't make it unfinished.

It's not bad, it's pretty good-looking, but it's written that there's no heroine.

Yes, although the combat power is suppressed in the early stage, it is at least enough. The value is a bit small, but the number is relatively large, so it will not be stretched. In short, no matter what, I won't be overpowered by other characters. The plot is still quite good and very enjoyable. Also, even those who have never seen Dragon Clan can understand it, but of course it is best to understand it. I hope it can be written longer. If it is written with the current quality, the longer it is written, the higher the evaluation will be. I really beg you, please don't end it in more than 200 chapters.

It's still very good (≧∇≦*) I hope the author can finish this book Forgot to rate it?

I feel like I can add another skill branch: Xiaoyu's Stair Walking

Yeah, my ratings are all like this. The plot can be interesting, but yeah, it seems like it's overwhelming.

Cool article, there is no fighting in the early stage, and pressure is of no use. It's really fun later, invincible, the protagonist is invincible at will

He must be a new author, his writing is okay, keep up the good work

Come on, I hope there will be skills and moves like Hong Kong Comics Sword Master, Seven Limit Sword Techniques, Purple Thunder Sword Technique, etc. Sephiroth and Vergil's sword techniques are also very good.

It can be written very well, but there are some places where it's a bit disjointed, but overall it's not a big problem.

The settings are quite interesting, the rest depends on personal preference. These five stars are meant to support the author. After all, I'm really not good at giving low marks.

Although this novel is a bit a bit off, it's still good overall. The main character's bloodline is actually the Holy Lord. It's good, and the part about Curse Orchid is also good.

Except that the ability of the 12 spells is too weak, I think it's okay.

It is recommended that the author let the protagonist form a guild

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