[Crazy criticism of the protagonist] + [Pokémon "development"] + [Decisive killing] + [Microxulu]
"I was shocked. It turned out to be an abyss monster. If you didn't tell me, I would have thought it was a Pokémon!"
Xiao Chen looked at the mantis creature with dark mucus flowing all over its body and twisted tentacles in front of him, and his big white teeth leaked out.
"How long has it been since you took a shower? You have tentacles growing on your tentacles?"
"Sorry, I just came out of the morgue, so I was a bit harsh~"
The abyssal plane is strangely merged with the Pokémon world, twisted monsters wandering in the broken city, giant rotting birds washed ashore by the sea...
Facing the contaminated Pokémon, humans sang unyielding hymns, including warriors, mages, and superpowers...
While countless professionals came forward, only Xiao Chen mastered the ability to purify abyssal monsters into Pokémon!
"What abyss monsters, these are my cute Pokémon!"
"Purify the monsters and evolve!"
"The human head tree? It's just the Alola coconut egg tree! Don't be afraid, Gengar always looks like this..."
Reader comments
It's okay. I've read similar books. Can I give you some suggestions?
1. Don't have a female protagonist. This is not very important. It's just that if there is a female protagonist in this kind of novel, it will be very strange and easy to write. For example, in terms of character design
2. The protagonist should not grow up too fast. This is more important. If he grows up too fast, there will be many shortcomings. In the later stage, if he is too strong and crushes him all the way, it will be boring. If his combat power is too high, it will easily collapse and other characters will find them redundant and annoying.
3. Don't overwhelm the combat power or abuse the protagonist. This is also very important. There are also books I have read before that have this kind of problem. For example, the protagonist's aura is not obvious and the focus is on the main protagonist. Anyone can do it. For example, I read a live broadcast article about Pokémon. It only wrote about the live broadcast content and all aspects of fighting the protagonist. The author later said that anyone can be the protagonist, so don't abuse the protagonist.
This is my first time reviewing a book. I'm not very good at saying that if I'm wrong, I can just say it. I hope the author doesn't make it worse. I will always support it.
Let me briefly introduce my book, which also serves as a more formal book review.
The world view is a parallel world of Pokémon. The originally normal world was invaded by the abyss. In fact, these abyss monsters are our lovely Pokémon.
So it stands to reason that the technology tree of this world is off-center. The Poké Ball was not produced, so there is no trainer profession (except for the protagonist).
In the long-term confrontation in the human abyss, human potential has been stimulated. Human beings can learn various moves like Pokémon and differentiate into various "professions."
This book tells the story of Xiao Chen constantly purifying Pokémon and trying to reconstruct a harmonious and normal Pokémon world.
Of course, this is not an easy path.
The writing style is relatively relaxed and pleasant, with a bit of bad taste on my part. I am also constantly trying and making mistakes. I often read book reviews and paragraph reviews, and I can respond to any questions I have.
Above, I wish you and I well.
Except, the part before Andre died was kind of scary. Others are not scary. I have finished reading the latest chapter, although the male protagonist only has a few Pokémon now. What I want to ask is. Will the male protagonist send Pokémon to other people so that they can slowly accept the Pokémon? Or what
It's quite popular [thinking] Dandan is quite unpopular, so it's relatively rare to give it a five-star rating for the time being.
Very good, with my favorite Numa miso
[Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Good-looking, loving to watch, begging for more
The subject matter is novel, keep it up [like] [laugh evilly]
It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject. [Like] It's pretty good. Come on, the author.
Very novel subject
It's a very special subject, you can take a look
Very good, highly recommended to people who like Pokémon.
The combination of Abyss Pokémon is a very good theme
It feels great, come on
Personally I feel good.
Okay, the subject matter is very new
Very novel subject
Such a good subject matter, I found it from the homepage, why is there no rating?
Why is it still not popular after such a long time?
Give me a rating, the author asked for it~ [laughs evilly]
It's relatively less anime-oriented and more child-oriented, but it's still okay for heavy tastes, but it's just a little lacking. I want to see rivers of blood flowing.
It's pretty good. I just don't like traditional Pokémon themes, but this one is so novel and the writing is pretty good.
It feels good, but I feel that the portrayal of the characters needs to be polished [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]
It's quite interesting and a very novel subject matter. Good luck to the author!
The most unique elven text I've seen so far
Quite interesting, the setting feels quite interesting
It's okay. I've read similar books. Can I give you some suggestions? 1. Don't have a female protagonist. This is not very important. It's just that if there is a female protagonist in this kind of novel, it will be very strange and easy to write. For example, in terms of character design 2. The protagonist should not grow up too fast. This is more important. If he grows up too fast, there will be many shortcomings. In the later stage, if he is too strong and crushes him all the way, it will be boring. If his combat power is too high, it will easily collapse and other characters will find them redundant and annoying. 3. Don't overwhelm the combat power or abuse the protagonist. This is also very important. There are also books I have read before that have this kind of problem. For example, the protagonist's aura is not obvious and the focus is on the main protagonist. Anyone can do it. For example, I read a live broadcast article about Pokémon. It only wrote about the live broadcast content and all aspects of fighting the protagonist. The author later said that anyone can be the protagonist, so don't abuse the protagonist. This is my first time reviewing a book. I'm not very good at saying that if I'm wrong, I can just say it. I hope the author doesn't make it worse. I will always support it.
Let me briefly introduce my book, which also serves as a more formal book review. The world view is a parallel world of Pokémon. The originally normal world was invaded by the abyss. In fact, these abyss monsters are our lovely Pokémon. So it stands to reason that the technology tree of this world is off-center. The Poké Ball was not produced, so there is no trainer profession (except for the protagonist). In the long-term confrontation in the human abyss, human potential has been stimulated. Human beings can learn various moves like Pokémon and differentiate into various "professions." This book tells the story of Xiao Chen constantly purifying Pokémon and trying to reconstruct a harmonious and normal Pokémon world. Of course, this is not an easy path. The writing style is relatively relaxed and pleasant, with a bit of bad taste on my part. I am also constantly trying and making mistakes. I often read book reviews and paragraph reviews, and I can respond to any questions I have. Above, I wish you and I well.
Except, the part before Andre died was kind of scary. Others are not scary. I have finished reading the latest chapter, although the male protagonist only has a few Pokémon now. What I want to ask is. Will the male protagonist send Pokémon to other people so that they can slowly accept the Pokémon? Or what
It's quite popular [thinking] Dandan is quite unpopular, so it's relatively rare to give it a five-star rating for the time being.
Very good, with my favorite Numa miso
[Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Good-looking, loving to watch, begging for more
The subject matter is novel, keep it up [like] [laugh evilly]
It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject. [Like] It's pretty good. Come on, the author.
Very novel subject
It's a very special subject, you can take a look
Very good, highly recommended to people who like Pokémon.
The combination of Abyss Pokémon is a very good theme
It feels great, come on
Personally I feel good.
Okay, the subject matter is very new
Very novel subject
Such a good subject matter, I found it from the homepage, why is there no rating? Why is it still not popular after such a long time?
Give me a rating, the author asked for it~ [laughs evilly]
It's relatively less anime-oriented and more child-oriented, but it's still okay for heavy tastes, but it's just a little lacking. I want to see rivers of blood flowing.
It's pretty good. I just don't like traditional Pokémon themes, but this one is so novel and the writing is pretty good.
It feels good, but I feel that the portrayal of the characters needs to be polished [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]
It's quite interesting and a very novel subject matter. Good luck to the author!
The most unique elven text I've seen so far
Quite interesting, the setting feels quite interesting