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Chapter 36 almost made me laugh. To be honest, this book is a good blend of suspense and comedy and is at least in the top three on Tomato. In fact, for more than ten chapters, I was worried that the author would write it down. After all, the protagonist is about to have great luck, become possessed by evil spirits, and even absorb a female ghost. It's really good to see that all the foreshadowing that needs to be dealt with has been dealt with, and from time to time, humor is used to spice up the slightly bland plot of the web article. It's too early to tell, but it started to fall apart after 100 chapters. The author tried to introduce more and larger systems in the later period, but it was obviously incompatible with the style of this article. So in the end, it was very fragmented when I watched it. Funny and serious cannot go on at the same time. Either change it to just having fun, or go straight to serious discussion.

I saw Chapter 109. It looked good, the world view was huge, and the story was exciting. However, the big world view before leaving the novice village was a bit abrupt (maybe because I didn't read the book). The only shortcoming was that it was chaotic, and many things could be described as inexplicable. I also found out the reason for the confusion, because the author of this book did not write it from the perspective of the protagonist, but from the perspective of the narrator, or in other words, from the perspective of God. In previous books, readers would naturally assume the role of the protagonist and dominate the fairy world! This book is different from the previous books. The author is a chess player. There is no protagonist on the chessboard, and each chess piece has its own use. The chess player is silent, and the reader, as a spectator, cannot take the place of the chess pieces, cannot intervene, cannot predict, but can only appreciate the excitement of this chess game! So many things are inexplicable. I don't know what the protagonist's next goal is, or why some incomprehensible plot suddenly appears, just like why the chess player made this move. Only when the chessboard is full and the game is over can you see the beauty of this move. I have only read first-person books before, but this is the first time I have seen an author like this. Come on! ! !

1. Very funny 2. Directly related to the previous book, in a world view 3. There are many foreshadowings that are impossible to discover. Suddenly, everyone is alive and has his or her own little Jiujiu. Without a lot of jokes and convulsive things, it will feel like a mystery novel, and the thinking cannot keep up at all. I especially like this kind of funny but hidden many details. It is not just purely funny.

It was easy and funny in the early stages, but it has stopped working in the middle. I felt that the plot was seriously broken. I couldn't watch it without reading the explanations at the end of the article. I thought I had missed a few chapters. In the early stage, I thought Liu Yun was the protagonist. After the middle and later stages, Wei Chen appeared and I couldn't figure out which one was the protagonist. This may be a dual-male protagonist style. Moreover, the protagonist's personality is too confusing and the humanity is seriously lost. I personally think that the early stage plot will give high marks, but the later plot After the logic broke down, the entire book was delayed, so I gave it about 8 points. I feel that the article has been updated all over the place, which makes the logic not smooth. Personally, I rated it above 9 points in the early stage and only about 7 points in the middle and later stages. Overall, it seems pretty good. At least it is not the popular theme of cultivating immortals. It feels very innovative. I feel that the early stage is a funny style, but in the middle and later stages, I can't understand it. It has a slightly refreshing feeling. I hope the author's writing will get better and better.

This is not as good as the previous novels, a brand new experience (ง•̀_•́)งa new direction (◍•ᴗ•◍) Love it, love it ٩(๑^o^๑)۶ It is still different from ordinary cool novels. I like the current plot very much, but I don't know what it will be like in the future. I hope the protagonist will be the same as before. Just don't become the protagonist of ordinary novels in the future. I like it best now The protagonist like this, the world the protagonist sees is just what he sees. Sometimes I think about those people who usually look stupid (commonly known as lack of brains). The world in their eyes is like that, and I won't say that it changes because of things or people, because I feel that that kind of world is the real world (the world in the eyes of a fool is the real perfect world)

I finished reading it in one sitting. It's really good [laughs] I wonder if the author deliberately made it so subversive? Although it feels like the above text does not follow the following, the information hidden between the lines seems to be able to make the logic self-consistent. Killing Foxtail is just around the corner [Blowing a kiss]

It feels like a Chinese comic book with sugary content, but it's like a good meal. It's a weird feeling, but it's quite enjoyable.

The book goes on like this. Just explode. Be sure to stick to this style. Don't go astray [laugh and cry] [laugh and cry] It's so funny

I recently had the pleasure of reading an irresistible masterpiece - its content is vivid and rich, unfolding on the world in front of you like a scroll; its wisdom is as profound as the first ray of sunshine in the morning penetrating the clouds. What a great book!

It's really good, it made me laugh to death, but I'm curious if the author is a man or a woman, who can write such bt [face covering]

The new book is good, and it's still so funny. I hope I won't open the map too fast this time, and it will be as messed up as last time. I was careless. It collapsed much faster than the original. Inexplicably, there was an additional setting of Flower God Palace.

The protagonist has a cheerful personality, his avatar is domineering and powerful, the author's writing style is interesting, and the plot of the novel is interesting. It is very good as a comedy novel. The only drawback is that the author updates too slowly and too little. Suggestion: update thousands of chapters every day [sneery smile]

The author has a profound background and can be picked up casually. The twists and turns are constantly funny. The story is interesting and can be played freely.

Very good, very nervous [cool] Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you, why don't you update it quickly [punch out]

A strong one, the author's writing is very good and humorous, but some parts are too outrageous. (The author is from Chengdu, right?), There are currently 66 chapters, the plot is very smooth, as smooth as deepseek, I give you 5 stars

Damn, it's the first time I've seen such a beautiful novel. I'm an old bookworm with really picky tastes, but this book solved the problem. It's not toxic, it's readable, and the logic is clear.

This is a very nice novel. It is one of the few novels on Tomato that attracts me. The protagonist's funny and sinister character is very interesting and makes people unable to stop [admiration]. Also, the author, please keep updating, three updates a day is not enough! ! !

It's nice and funny, but it's a little messy. I feel like I skipped a section while watching it. I feel like the events could be written in more detail. I'll add a bookshelf to it. I'm looking forward to the follow-up.

I have read more than 30 chapters, and the plot is tight and fast-paced (a little confusing, after all, it is a group novel, it seems a bit messy if anyone writes it, and it is a bit too bookish. It is said that the protagonist is a time traveler, but later it seems that he is more local than the native and the protagonist is schizophrenic). The villain takes the White Lotus route and it seems quite fresh. I hope the second half of the work will not be unfinished. I hope Tomato will give the author a big boost.

Recommendation, special recommendation, cannot make me feel uncomfortable alone. When you read the first 100 chapters, did you think it was a lighthearted and funny novel? Wrong! ! ! The back is full of knives. It's just a trick to trick people into killing them. It's so shameless! The protagonist's wife is dead, his sister is dead, and his companion is dead. Holy seven-star recommendation! ! I've finished watching the finale, and my final evaluation is that the first 100 or so chapters are funny, relaxed, energetic, and very attractive, but it's different after that, and it's family-friendly! (My wife died, my best friend died, and a lot of people died!), Kill the world! (From the world of cultivating immortals → Three Thousand Worlds of Weirdness and Ten Modern Times → The great world of prehistoric times, it is quite chaotic, and it shocks the world view!) The ending is killing (the male protagonist was imprisoned for 3000 years! The final profiteer was the Immortal Emperor of the Great Qin Dynasty, and the protagonist became a clown (ー_ー)!!)

Nonsensical and outstanding, the 11-year-old bookworm expressed his approval

The more I read this book, the more I enjoy it. It is definitely the most conscientious novel about immortality that I have read in recent times! The plot rhythm is tight and not procrastinating, the world view is grand and delicate, and there is no embarrassment of mindless writing. Every upgrade and every experience is written with flesh and blood. The protagonist has a three-dimensional character, he is neither a virgin nor aggrieved, the training logic is clear, and the fighting scenes are exciting and enjoyable. The author's writing is smooth, the foreshadowing is well laid out, and the plot twists naturally, becoming more and more exciting as it goes on. Whether it's sect disputes, adventures in secret realms, or insights into the great road, or mental growth, they are all written with a strong sense of immersion, making people unable to stop after reading them. The overall structure is complete and the atmosphere is in place. It is a high-quality text that is truly worth staying up late to read.

This novel is awesome, extremely awesome. It was okay at first, but in the end, the author wanted to make me laugh to death, right? I couldn't stop laughing.

The atmosphere is very funny, but the logic of the paragraphs is not clear enough, and many of them require brainstorming. Normal people who read this kind of books usually don't use their brains, so it needs to be improved!

Very interesting and creative. It's the first time I've seen this style. It was very interesting in the beginning, but I couldn't understand it around chapter 30. I didn't like the Riddler, so I gave it up.

This book doesn't follow any routine, which is quite interesting. It's much more fun than those who can guess what's going on at a glance [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

The author's writing style seems to have tempered the laws of heaven, and the fighting scenes seem to be witnessing the reappearance of ancient times: when the sword formation is unfolded, thousands of stars fall into a rain of swords, and the colorful clouds that burst out the moment the alchemy furnace explodes actually contain the remnant souls of ancient times! Not to mention those stunning reversals - when you think the protagonist has fallen into the devil's path, what is reflected in the bloody pupils is actually the dirtiest truth in the entire fairy world...

Interesting book. It's been a long time since I've read a novel like this that makes me want to put it down.

The book is indeed a good book, but it's a pity that the style changed halfway, and the funny style turned into a serious and conspiracy one [Chigua] It would be great if it could always be funny.

I originally read it as a mindless read, but the more I read it, the more I became fascinated. Although it is messy, it is very interesting and has many novel points. And I like the character design of Hua Liuyun very much. I wanted to write such a character before, but after writing a lot of things, I suddenly pulled away. They melted away like my brain and flowed away from my hands. I couldn't write it. I'm very happy to see a character roughly formed like this. I can't say what I will say about this book. I have a subjective preference for Hua Liuyun, and what I say will inevitably be objective. Those who are interested can take a look.