The Soul Travels to a Jobless World and Becomes a Black Dragon Lolita

The writing is very good. The author did not let the protagonist change his wife, but the emotional line between the protagonist and Rudy was very delicate. The character design is not OOC. Just keep it like this. Although it is very possible that the protagonist will become Rudy's white moonlight, I feel that the protagonist has no motive to like Rudy, and the author will definitely not let Rudy accept the protagonist. I think it is very good to maintain such a relationship.

The subject matter is relatively novel, the writing style is quite satisfactory, and the characters are quite three-dimensional. I like it very much, but I would like to give the author two small suggestions. One is that the cover is not very attractive and does not attract readers. The other is that the protagonist is not a dragon. I feel that she has almost forgotten that she is a dragon. There is too little plot in this aspect.

The writing is quite good. I don't know why the rating is so low. I read a previous book review and said that the introduction does not match the content of the book and that it is not a change. Personally, I feel that it is not very related to the change. The main reason is that the adaptation process of the protagonist from male to female is a bit short. I feel better if I worry about it again. Then there is the issue of shaping. There is no way this is different from the original work. The author obviously wants to make Rudy more optimistic. This is actually quite good. However, the process is still a bit shorter and there are fewer major events. It depends on how the author writes it later. In summary, after watching the anime, it seems to be quite comfortable. Although there are some differences from the original work, it has been restored very well. Please wait for the update. Come on.

I came across this book during class Although it is in the first person, the perspective changes in time Wonderful description and vivid language Logical and fitting to the plot Therefore, Gu said: Good However, the author has even less information, so I can read it all by heart in less than a day. Alas!

The writing is quite good, at least it's not too toxic or unacceptable to read. The main character is similar to King Furong, who is strong, has a long lifespan, and has a lot of friendship scenes. There are no emotional scenes with the main character, and the main character doesn't frequently use violence, and there aren't too many slap-in-the-face scenes. It's a heartwarming story about growing up, and 36 chapters are not enough to read. It was only 1-2 years after the big transfer that I was still traveling with the Dragon God near Alice's hometown [eating melon]

It's still the original plot. Nolen is still in a relationship with him. Is it possible that Elsa will run away with Rudy's son in the end? So what is the protagonist's future sexual orientation? Rudy's wife or Lily?

It still looks good and has the taste of the original version. This kind of relationship is quite good, but it's rare for the protagonist to be a woman. It's possible that there will be no old Rudy. If so, I'm blindly guessing that the protagonist suddenly disappeared, causing a mess in the future.

It's pretty good, but in the middle the author seems to have a bit of a mix of marriage and marriage. It may be uncomfortable for some Lily Dolphins. After all, it's like being eaten by Rudy (but it's okay, as explained in the book, like an old woman (crossed out) the elder sister's care for Rudy). In the end, she insists on being single, but I can accept single, hundreds, and marriage. 23333

I can accept that the protagonist and Luo Qixi are Lily. If it is Lu Di's fourth wife, wait for 6 stars.

The character design fits perfectly with the original work and is very comfortable to watch. However, it is recommended that you explain more when making the turning point in the original work. It will be better for those who have not read the original work. The emotional description in the original work is a little more delicate, but that is to reflect Rudy's growth, so I won't expect anything more from a fan, come on! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

The description of details and emotions are quite good, but the early panning is too long, and the perspective change seems a bit stiff, but the further you look at it, you will find that the description of details and emotions is very good.

It's so beautiful. I finished reading it in one sitting. It's too short and not enough at all! The character descriptions are also very consistent with the original work, and there is no OOC. The writing is also very comfortable to read, and I hope the author will continue to stick to his own ideas. Novels that follow readers' preferences and change the plot are basically useless.

Yay! A rare and good article about being single, I like to be single the most Single articles are relatively rare, so the author must not stop updating them) How can I live without you (?)

Looking at it now, the overall feeling is very good, but there are three problems First: There is only one update a day, which is too little. Second: The first update only has 2,000 words, which is too little. Third: I haven't found it yet. Author, why don't you post 20 chapters for me to look for [laughing evilly]

Nice. Readers who want to read fanfics should remember to understand the character settings. Don't mislead people by saying that you give out benefits. Rudy has that kind of character. This book can be considered a Japanese light novel. The author will most likely write a long novel with more than one million words, so if you want to see the protagonist transform into a dragon and enjoy it, you can quit it. It is not a novel. And the protagonist is a dragon, but it won't be exposed too much. After that, the protagonist will cooperate with the dragon god. It's not like giving away girls to Rudy. With Rudy's character, he and Rudy are like sisters.

There is still little hope if you are unemployed. Don't give up.

It's great. It's also a top choice among jobless fans. The Tomato rating is that it's humorous.

It's a good jobless reincarnation fanfic. It's well written. The switching between other perspectives and the first person is also very smooth. It's very comfortable to read. The writing is not bad either. As an original animation fan, I am quite satisfied with it. It feels very immersive. The relationship between the protagonist and the characters in the original novel is also perfectly handled. I have to say that it is quite interesting to read, and it is obvious that the author understands the original work. It is highly recommended for those who have read the original work. For those who have not read it, it is also quite good as a stand-alone novel.

Can the author still win the Easter match? [Cover face]

It's quite beautiful, it would be better if there were more of them every day. In addition, the author can reveal whether it is Lily or a change of marriage?

The author's soul returns

I would like to call it the best jobless reincarnation fanfic

My standards for reading novels are whether I like them or not. Many novels written by high-blooded people are not good to me. So usually there are many books with high ratings or well-received books. I don't really like it, but I quite like this book. I can give you a lot of room for improvement in my review. I'm looking forward to the follow-up.

I haven't read Jobless but this book is really good.

It's really good. Come on, the author, and keep updating [Sending heartfelt wishes]

At present, the direction of lifespan theory is not very strong. I hope to see a very twisted flag later. I'm really looking forward to it.

The cover has changed, long-haired Gaia Seigao! [Adoration] I feel like Gaia-chan feels like a central air conditioner now. It just feels like Gaia can talk to anyone. And, didn't the author say "Fulillian tries the first-person perspective", but the difference between Gaia and Frilian is still quite big. As far as I'm concerned, I feel like I can accept Gaia being a couple with anyone... So... I can't wait to see the content of the if line... And Gaia-chan has really cute teeth! ! ! Also, the shy look after being teased by Luo Qixi is so funny~★

A very good novel, the best among the jobless reincarnation fanfics on this platform

I still want to see Gaia and Rudy posting [almost crying]

It's a very good novel, keep it up (ง•̀_•́)งBut it's a pity that the protagonist is probably going to get married (´;;`)