[Putting through the book - becoming a hundred - single hundred - daily life - campus - two heroines]
(Note: This article is a slow-paced post. The pace of the plot is a bit slow! The pace of the plot is a bit slow! The pace of the plot is a bit slow! Important things are said three times. Those who like to read fast-paced and refreshing articles should be careful.)
Jiang Bai, a miserable social animal, was unfortunately stabbed to death by a robber on his way to get off work. However, due to this, he accidentally traveled to a bloody female novel and became the rich female villain in it.
Jiang Bai: Why did the system turn me into a girl?
System: This is required by the plot.
Jiang Bai: System, why doesn't this task show that it's completed? I obviously did everything as asked, but didn't the heroine not turn into a villain?
System: Huh? Is there any? Let me be healthy.
Jiang Bai: System, why is there something wrong with the way the heroine looks at me?
System: ......
Jiang Bai: ...
Reader comments
The writing style is okay, and the plot is close to daily life. I have read 32 chapters so far, which is relatively dull, with just the right amount of foreshadowing. However, the character dialogue is too written, relies too much on modal particles, and sometimes the description is too abrupt. I'll give it four stars first, then I'll see how the author improves it and then re-rate it.
I suggest the author not to rush to update, but to read the book from the beginning and revise it. There are too many problems, especially the problem of too written language, the description of the characters' expressions, the slow development of the plot, and the serious loss of reading interest. Some plots made me feel like I was reading three rooms and one living room with my toes, and I felt like I was reading classical Chinese. [Cover face]
The work is more of a daily plot. Since this is my first time writing a book, there may be some things that are not well written or unreasonable. I hope readers will forgive me. If you have any questions, comments, or ideas, you can tell me. The author himself is very obedient. (๑òᆺó๑)
Come on, come on, come on, come on! ! !
Yes, the author's writing fits me so well❤️
Good luck, author. You write well. I look forward to you.
Is it a harem or a single heroine? I don't like watching the harem. So remind me.
It's a very good book. I hope there won't be any knives and it won't be discontinued.
The writing is okay, keep up the good work
Are you considering accepting Lu Ye? [Adoration]
Beautiful, no need to say more
Why do you feel that the identity of the eldest daughter of the Jiang family is dispensable? [Awkward laugh]
The writing style is okay, and the plot is close to daily life. I have read 32 chapters so far, which is relatively dull, with just the right amount of foreshadowing. However, the character dialogue is too written, relies too much on modal particles, and sometimes the description is too abrupt. I'll give it four stars first, then I'll see how the author improves it and then re-rate it. I suggest the author not to rush to update, but to read the book from the beginning and revise it. There are too many problems, especially the problem of too written language, the description of the characters' expressions, the slow development of the plot, and the serious loss of reading interest. Some plots made me feel like I was reading three rooms and one living room with my toes, and I felt like I was reading classical Chinese. [Cover face]
The work is more of a daily plot. Since this is my first time writing a book, there may be some things that are not well written or unreasonable. I hope readers will forgive me. If you have any questions, comments, or ideas, you can tell me. The author himself is very obedient. (๑òᆺó๑)
Come on, come on, come on, come on! ! !
Yes, the author's writing fits me so well❤️
Good luck, author. You write well. I look forward to you.
Is it a harem or a single heroine? I don't like watching the harem. So remind me.
It's a very good book. I hope there won't be any knives and it won't be discontinued.
The writing is okay, keep up the good work
Are you considering accepting Lu Ye? [Adoration]
Beautiful, no need to say more
Why do you feel that the identity of the eldest daughter of the Jiang family is dispensable? [Awkward laugh]