[Transmigrate into a book, gender-bender, single heroine, slice of life, school, two female leads]
(Note: This is a slow-burn story focused on sweet interactions, and the plot moves slowly! The plot moves slowly! The plot moves slowly! Repeating this three times because it's important. If you prefer fast-paced wish-fulfillment stories, this may not be for you.)
Jiang Bai, a miserable corporate drone, was stabbed to death by a robber on her way home from work. By a twist of fate, she transmigrated into a melodramatic romance novel aimed at women, becoming a rich young female villain.
Jiang Bai: System, why did I turn into a girl?
System: It's necessary for the plot, okay?
Jiang Bai: System, why hasn't this mission been marked complete yet? I did exactly what it asked. The heroine hasn't turned evil, has she?
System: Huh? Did she? Let me take a look.
Jiang Bai: System, why is the heroine looking at me strangely?
System: …
Jiang Bai: …
The writing style is okay, and the plot is close to daily life. I have read 32 chapters so far, which is relatively dull, with just the right amount of foreshadowing. However, the character dialogue is too written, relies too much on modal particles, and sometimes the description is too abrupt. I'll give it four stars first, then I'll see how the author improves it and then re-rate it. I suggest the author not to rush to update, but to read the book from the beginning and revise it. There are too many problems, especially the problem of too written language, the description of the characters' expressions, the slow development of the plot, and the serious loss of reading interest. Some plots made me feel like I was reading three rooms and one living room with my toes, and I felt like I was reading classical Chinese. 🤦
The work is more of a daily plot. Since this is my first time writing a book, there may be some things that are not well written or unreasonable. I hope readers will forgive me. If you have any questions, comments, or ideas, you can tell me. The author himself is very obedient. (๑òᆺó๑)
Yes, the author's writing fits me so well❤️
Is it a harem or a single heroine? I don't like watching the harem. So remind me.
Come on, come on, come on, come on!!!
Good luck, author. You write well. I look forward to you.
Beautiful, no need to say more
It's a very good book. I hope there won't be any knives and it won't be discontinued.
Why do you feel that the identity of the eldest daughter of the Jiang family is dispensable? [Awkward laugh]
Are you considering accepting Lu Ye? 🥰