It's Time to Survive in the Apocalypse. Stop Kissing Your Electronic Girlfriend.

The logic is self-consistent and the plot transitions are relatively smooth, which are advantages. However, there are some plots in the novel that are too cliche, which are disadvantages. Overall it's pretty good, the writing is also good, the plot advances and it's very comfortable to watch. It's much better than the one next door. Many plots are handled very comfortably, and it looks really enjoyable, with a feeling of going on in one breath. But I'm wondering why you didn't just put the artifact in when you could pick up the equipment at the beginning? It would be so convenient to be able to directly pick up the things in the picture. Is it my problem? Why does it become more and more boring the more I watch it? [Thinking] It's been getting worse and worse lately. Let's change it again depending on the author's performance. The kids are not good, I moistened them first. The more I see behind it, the less I can stand it [smile]

Advantages - The plot setting is novel: it combines elements of doomsday survival and electronic girlfriend. Jiang Yu, whose legs are disabled in reality, establishes contact with the pixel villain Su Qianyue through the game, and unfolds a unique love and survival story in the doomsday background. This setting is relatively rare in similar novels and can attract readers' interest. - The logic is relatively self-consistent: the novel can maintain a certain degree of logic during the development of the plot. For example, Jiang Yu relied on his calm mind and planning, and used his advantages in the game to help Su Qianyue avoid danger time and time again in the doomsday. Su Qianyue also gradually grew up, and the changes in the characters and the advancement of the plot were in line with the story setting. - Smooth and natural writing style: The author's writing style is relatively smooth, allowing readers to read smoothly. In terms of describing doomsday scenes, character emotions and interactions, it can be vivid and vivid, giving readers a strong sense of involvement. Disadvantages - Some plots are cliched: Although the overall setting is novel, there are still some common clichéd plots in the novel, which may make some readers feel that there is a lack of novelty. - Insufficient characterization: The images of some supporting characters may be relatively single. In the context of doomsday, the character's personality and behavioral changes can be more delicate and in-depth to better show the complex changes of human nature in extreme environments.

The writing is very good, thank you to the author! ! !

At present, the plot is smooth and has no poisonous points, and the emotional lines are also delicately written. It would be better to compare with the real female partner. Just compare without meeting. If we meet later, it would be better to reduce the number of times. And the author, keep up the good work!

You can do an event to boost your favorability w(ﾟДﾟ)w, the progress is too slow now, the 100% favorability on the introduction is probably a few hundred pictures based on the current progress, but the author's writing is really good [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It looks good, what the protagonist says and does is not distorted, and the background setting of the electronic girlfriend is completely reasonable. Should this track be driven by a penguin? But the Penguin book was really tiring to read. The background setting of the electronic girlfriend in the book "Cultivation to Immortality + Regret" is very torturous. The main character's words will also be distorted. The innocent villain spends money and has his own expression distorted, and sells it miserably to make money... It's not just a comment.

Disadvantages: The female channel flavor is a bit strong. I have read several high-scoring female channel articles, and this is the taste [face covering]. The plot is okay but some settings are too outrageous, there are also the classic protagonist group package distribution, and too many appearances of T0 ex-girlfriends. However, the above problems can be solved by skipping, basically no more than half a chapter. Advantages: The male protagonist's genius and cleverness are well established, the contrast between the female protagonist is also interesting, and the candy-making plot is also written with a sense of feeling. Overall, worth reading

Not bad, not bad. This is the first book that I have updated before it reached the 100th chapter [Blow a kiss] The character creation is pretty good, and the protagonist's IQ is on point, better than Chen Xianzun's Zhong Er (although I also watched it) (the quality of the pictures is not as high as Chen Xianzun [shy]). The plot is also very reasonable, for example, the story about Bai Qiehei is foreshadowed in the first dozens of chapters; and the conceptual setting of the disaster is quite good Finally, I want to read Tie Tie! Be religious!

It's time to survive in the apocalypse. Stop kissing your electronic girlfriend. Saturn and Mars together In terms of plot, the theme of raising a girlfriend in the clouds is always quite relaxing, at least for me I like it. In terms of characters, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also written in more detail. It is different from similar works and also has a slightly cute interaction, which is quite good. Five-star support.

This book is well written, the subject matter is relatively novel, and the characters are well drawn. The male and female protagonists don't procrastinate and do whatever they have to do. Compared with other books, this book has scenes that arrange encounters between the male protagonist and his ex-girlfriend, but not many times, so it's okay. I hope the author will try his best to write as few things as possible, such as face-slapping scenes and encounters between the male protagonist and his ex-girlfriend, etc. He can consider adding some details about the daily lives of the male and female protagonists. The author, please consider turning this book into a comic. It will definitely be interesting.

Yes, the male and female protagonists kill decisively, and there is no high blood pressure. It is basically very enjoyable all the time. Even if they are kidnapped, they will be rescued by direct firepower in the next chapter. Wait, this seems to be the first novel I've read on Tomato. It's very good. Every time I watch it, I can't help but keep watching it. Even now, I watched it directly until 12 o'clock and it ended. So was Jiang Yu tied up with a rope? [Smile]

It looks good. It looks good. The quality is very good. It is exactly as described by the seller. I am very satisfied. I really like it. It completely exceeds expectations. The delivery speed is very fast. The packaging is very careful and tight. The logistics company has a good service attitude and the delivery speed is very fast. It is a very satisfying purchase.

There are very few novels with such strict logic in this software. The disaster line in the real world and the survival line of the heroine in the virtual world run parallel. The most valuable thing is that both worlds have a part of the brush strokes to portray the image of the supporting characters. The writing is really powerful. Putting aside some slightly awkward plot designs of the real world and the change of the heroine's personality (cold-hearted - cold-blooded), it is worth watching.

It looks good, the ideas are clear, and the character descriptions are realistic and decent. However, it is similar to a book (the details are different). Overall, it is a good book [smile] [smile] [smile] But who the author taught you to be so stupid [smile] [smile] [smile]

Uh-huh-uh? It turns out that there is a limit to the number of lines drawn? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Limit quantity 10,000? ? ? ! ! ! ! Quite pretty! The love line and the career line are about 60/50. Personally, I think the love line is very sweet and satisfying. If you like sweet love, just watch it. There are no annoying villains. The villains will basically appear in one chapter and die in another. Like it😘Recommend... The plot so far doesn't have too many poisonous points, and the emotional line is sweet. If the author's writing style were better, it might even be rated 9 points, as long as there were no eunuchs in the ending.

Come on, it feels good, I hope it doesn't collapse later

Speed ​​speed! ! ! Update soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! Update soon ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhinging is not enough! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

If you like this author, read the author's works like crazy! From Wasteland. [Love] If you can write, write more. This is my first time reading a story from the male protagonist's perspective. The story about growing up is also very interesting. My electronic girlfriend is so coquettish, please help me when can we watch the bondage drama hahahaha₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑ Looking forward to the next plot! ! !

It's a very good book. The male protagonist is not depressed. I should read more books with male protagonists suffering from depression. The male protagonist in this book is very independent, careful, and smart. The heroine is also very bold and bold, not a holy mother, but a little crybaby hehe

It's very nice, but there are a little bit less updates. The main frame is very clear and doesn't drag out, and the plot is also very well edited [laughing]. I believe it won't be long before the author will become a great writer [like][like][love][love]

Overall, this book is very well written. There may be a little bit of poison in it, that is, his ex-girlfriend, but as long as you skip it, it doesn't really matter, because he didn't make many films, only two or three, and he was killed in the end. The whole plot is a group portrait, and it's also very sweet. It's really good.

I hope you keep it up, and I'm looking forward to what's coming next Shuang Jie, sweet darling, the two babies only have each other in their minds, and they are both babies with very upright views. I think it is a double redemption. After meeting each other, they have hope every day, grow every day, and become a better version of themselves. I really want to see them👀 When they are really in the same world, these two people have a sticky [admiration] There are fewer words [crying], because I want to see how sticky they are [admiration]

The plot setting is very novel and the emotional line is also very delicate. It is quite interesting to watch! ! The male and female protagonists are both growing and strong, each has its own advantages, and there is no bloody misunderstanding. In the whole book, I think there is only one idiot, the hero's ex-girlfriend is not very smart, and the other rare characters are normal people. In addition to the main CP, other CPs also have their own methods. There are all types of sadomasochism, pure love, and there are also warriors without CP. The group portraits are also very good. Worth a look! !

Overall, it's good. The heroine is very cute and I like it very much. I prefer to work alone in the early stage. When two people are in the world, the psychological activities are more cute. The later stage is not as good as the early stage. I feel that there may be no sense of crisis.

The novelty of the plot and the writing are okay, but the updates are too slow. The worldview feels incomplete. But I am a local dog and I like to watch. The author should stop reading book reviews and update them quickly. If the extra time is too long, please change it.

I first read a similar type of novel about cultivating immortals, and I thought it was pretty good. Come on author, don't stop, update as soon as possible

A very nice novel that fits my inner fantasy. It is a novel worth reading. I wish the author's work and life will get better and better. I will finish reading it at 18:30 on June 22, 2025.

Overall it's good, but some of the plot has flaws. The relationship between the male and female protagonists also becomes smoother as the story goes on. I hope the author can continue to maintain this level and the plot will get better as the story goes on.

Great look, cheers for the author~[Upvote][Upvote]

For now, except for the settings that are a bit out of the ordinary, there are no bad points in other aspects. I look forward to subsequent updates. The writing is very good and I hope to continue working hard. Four stars are reserved for follow-up comments.