Xuanhuan: From the Start, I Drew Li Bai's First Skill

I have read the latest chapter, and I can see that the protagonist is not a good person, and he is very murderous. Of course, there is no problem in killing evil people, but he just didn't do any real evil or really good things, so he can't be considered a good person. From the last sentence of the introduction, which is to kill everyone with 1 sin point, it can be seen that the author actually treats people as wild monsters, so the protagonist is neither a villain nor a good guy. This can also be reflected in the text. Many practical issues are ignored in the setting of sin value. First, the book is set in the ancient times. Everyone knows the situation in feudal society. The adults eat the villains, and the villains eat each other. In this case, some evils are no longer the evils of simple people, but the evils of the times. Secondly, what is the system's judgment of evil? If you really kill innocent people, but spend your whole life doing good deeds to make up for it, what is his sin value? The world is not black and white, so how should the system judge a person's black and white value? Thirdly, does killing all the people with sin values count as a good deed? No, Dad told us that the yin and yang of the world are orderly and indispensable, so when the protagonist is simply gaining sin points, he is actually destroying the world and doing evil. So the setting is actually not complete. It does make you invincible quickly after writing it, and it's really fun to read. It's okay for a novice's first book, but in this case the book can't exceed two hundred chapters. So I have suggestions. The sin value will only increase and not decrease. This is actually impossible, because no matter how evil you do, you will accidentally do good things. Even if it is insignificant, it will definitely be -1 sin value. Therefore, you can find a condition to upgrade the system. When the sin value is flashing, it means that the person will do something to change the sin value. Whether it is good or bad, it will change accordingly. One. For example, there are 50 points on Wang Er's head. When he is about to kill Zhang San, 50 points will flash. If the kill is successful, 50 points will be added. If the kill fails, no points will be added. At this time, if the protagonist saves Zhang San in advance and Zhang San is not killed by Wang Er, then the protagonist will get the 50 points that Wang Er did not get. If the protagonist does not save Zhang San directly, but kills Wang Er directly, resulting in indirectly saving Zhang San, then the protagonist will get Wang Er's original 50 points and the 50 points that will be obtained. Two. For example, Mazi has 30 points and is flashing at this time, but what he is going to do is a good thing. He goes to save the puppy. If he succeeds, the guilt value is -1. Now it is 29 points. If the protagonist kills Mazi before and the puppy falls to death, then the protagonist can only get 30-1 = 29 points. Here comes the key point. What is the value obtained after rescuing Zhang San and the puppy? You can start a new setting, "merit value". Merit value can reduce the evil value on NPCs (can be set with a proportion), and can also be accumulated on good NPCs. The protagonist can see who is a meritorious person. At the same time, the protagonist can also obtain merit points. This is a new system. You can set the new value by yourself. My suggestion is that it can be used to increase rare attributes and attributes that are rare among kings, such as increasing luck, reducing breakthrough bottlenecks, reducing negative effects, increasing real shields, increasing world affinity, increasing perception, and used to purchase items, etc. It is strongly recommended that the extraordinary skills of resurrection armor, returning to the city, and mini-map teleportation can only be redeemed (or drawn) with merit points. The world is too small, and it is natural to have system invincibility, so if you keep fighting all the way, this book will end soon, even if you keep opening new pictures. For another example, the protagonist in the book kills all the evil people in a small place, but 30% of the stolen money is given to the Eighth Prince, 10% to the black men, and 60% is distributed to the people in batches. Therefore, merit points are very important. By establishing a new order in Jianghu, you can obtain merits to the greatest extent. The protagonist can become stronger from different angles. After completing the progress of Jianghu, you can enter the fairy world, and then enter the cosmic scale, or open the multiverse, break the dimension and enter the fan world to create your own world, etc. The potential is not bad, at least higher than it is now. Then there is a small point. The protagonist's humanity is too little now. In fact, most of it is divinity. When saving the young lady, it can be seen that the protagonist's humanity has always been there, but after that, he is just killing. If this continues, there will definitely be disaster. Let's not talk about thunder calamity. How to overcome the inner demons? Purification can only delay it for a few seconds. Moreover, don't forget that Sun Bin's first skill explosion damage and Zhuge Liang's Yamato suppression effect cannot be eliminated. This shows that there are still many mechanisms that cannot be eliminated (and switching positions cannot be eliminated). Another setting comes to mind. The sin points earned can unlock karma, increase damage, etc., And the merit points earned can be used to protect the body, improve various survivability, etc. It can be used as a passive or active addition. The above suggestions are all written. I think they are still useful. It depends on whether the author will adopt them. Of course, I will accept any decision, as long as it is not too poisonous.

Author, the novel you wrote is indeed very strong, but is it possible to update it faster? Some brothers, just read, comment, and add to the bookshelf!

There are some pitfalls, but it's still worth watching if you don't pay so much attention to detail. Overall, the author's world background and settings are quite reasonable, and it can be seen that the author is writing seriously. However, I personally feel that the characters are not three-dimensional enough. At present, with my level of appreciation, I can only feel that the protagonist's personality characteristics are relatively distinct, but the protagonist's personality characteristics are still not very obvious. The other supporting characters do not have events or plots that can have a profound impact on people. It is recommended here that the author can set the character image and personality in the outline and then substitute the character image to make the character come alive. Of course, I don't have very good taste. The above only represents my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. I believe the author can write better. Finally, I wish the author a Happy New Year! 💕

The transformation process of mythical beasts Kindergarten: Why? Elementary school student: Why? Junior high school student: What do you know? High school student: You are nothing College students: give me some money, give me some money After graduation: Leave me alone After falling in love: I want you to take care of me After giving birth: you take care of it When visiting the grave: bless me 🤦

Happy New Year! This is my first review of the new year. After reading more than 60 chapters in one go, my evaluation is: it's okay. 1. To be honest, I don't like fantasy. When I look at fantasy themes, I think it's either secret realms or daily life or competitions. It's not that I dislike secret realms. The key is secret realms every day. Today I'll be in the wild, tomorrow I'll be wild, and the day after tomorrow I'll be wild again, and the day after tomorrow I'll be in the wild again, so why should I watch this fantasy? I watched the animal world directly. After reading this book, the control was okay, and the plot was quite interesting. There are just some issues with the character. You are like Liu Su, you either save her or you don't save her, you either save the beauty at the critical moment to give readers a sense of pleasure or you kill her with a knife, saving half of her means, and leaving the poisonous people behind. Fortunately, it finally went offline. As for Jin Yiwei's identity, I can accept it. Just don't ridicule and jealously backstab him every day. It's only over 60 chapters and I can't see much of it. These poisons are acceptable if you include the Novice Village.

I hope the protagonist will try not to participate in the power struggle. If you have a system, you will still be the king of merit. In the end, you will not be able to live forever. Now it is skills. Later, the system upgrade will break away from the current world and soar. When the skin skill is turned on, it will be even more awesome.

Okay, first of all, there is no female protagonist at the beginning, but I still don't have it after reading it. Although this is special, it is not objectionable. Another thing is that as a veteran player of King, I am very happy to see this. In fact, I wanted to write a high-level martial arts novel about King before, but I couldn't bear it after writing a few chapters. Reading the author's novel has fulfilled my dream. I must give it five stars.

It's okay, there's nothing too bad about it, the protagonist's plot is a bit strong 🤦, and the ending is a bit unexpected, but it's still reasonable. It's readable, the writing is enjoyable, and it doesn't have any lag in fighting power. There are some minor flaws, but they don't affect reading. When you encounter the content of the equipment panel, you can read it directly, or listen to the book 😂. . . Hahaha, that's miserable.

Yes, it's just that the plug-ins are not working well. I need an opportunity to show everyone that I am different. Now the protagonist's power is regarded as evil by the outside world, but this also makes the natives lose their awe.

The details are so-so. There's not much to say about the combat power, but killing evil people is really fun. That's what I want to see! Fighting without any psychological burden!!! Punishing evil and promoting good is beautiful.