King: Start with an Iron Sword, I Will Kill All the Evildoers

I have read the latest chapter, and I can see that the protagonist is not a good person, and he is very murderous. Of course, there is no problem in killing evil people, but he just didn't do any real evil or really good things, so he can't be considered a good person. From the last sentence of the introduction, which is to kill everyone with 1 sin point, it can be seen that the author actually treats people as wild monsters, so the protagonist is neither a villain nor a good guy. This can also be reflected in the text. Many practical issues are ignored in the setting of sin value. First, the book is set in the ancient times. Everyone knows the situation in feudal society. The adults eat the villains, and the villains eat each other. In this case, some evils are no longer the evils of simple people, but the evils of the times. Secondly, what is the system's judgment of evil? If you really kill innocent people, but spend your whole life doing good deeds to make up for it, what is his sin value? The world is not black and white, so how should the system judge a person's black and white value? Thirdly, does killing all the people with sin values count as a good deed? No, Dad told us that the yin and yang of the world are orderly and indispensable, so when the protagonist is simply gaining sin points, he is actually destroying the world and doing evil. So the setting is actually not complete. It does make you invincible quickly after writing it, and it's really fun to read. It's okay for a novice's first book, but in this case the book can't exceed two hundred chapters. So I have suggestions. The sin value will only increase and not decrease. This is actually impossible, because no matter how evil you do, you will accidentally do good things. Even if it is insignificant, it will definitely be -1 sin value. Therefore, you can find a condition to upgrade the system. When the sin value is flashing, it means that the person will do something to change the sin value. Whether it is good or bad, it will change accordingly. One. For example, there are 50 points on Wang Er's head. When he is about to kill Zhang San, 50 points will flash. If the kill is successful, 50 points will be added. If the kill fails, no points will be added. At this time, if the protagonist saves Zhang San in advance and Zhang San is not killed by Wang Er, then the protagonist will get the 50 points that Wang Er did not get. If the protagonist does not save Zhang San directly, but kills Wang Er directly, resulting in indirectly saving Zhang San, then the protagonist will get Wang Er's original 50 points and the 50 points that will be obtained. Two. For example, Mazi has 30 points and is flashing at this time, but what he is going to do is a good thing. He goes to save the puppy. If he succeeds, the guilt value is -1. Now it is 29 points. If the protagonist kills Mazi before and the puppy falls to death, then the protagonist can only get 30-1 = 29 points. Here comes the key point. What is the value obtained after rescuing Zhang San and the puppy? You can start a new setting, "merit value". Merit value can reduce the evil value on NPCs (can be set with a proportion), and can also be accumulated on good NPCs. The protagonist can see who is a meritorious person. At the same time, the protagonist can also obtain merit points. This is a new system. You can set the new value by yourself. My suggestion is that it can be used to increase rare attributes and attributes that are rare among kings, such as increasing luck, reducing breakthrough bottlenecks, reducing negative effects, increasing real shields, increasing world affinity, increasing perception, and used to purchase items, etc. It is strongly recommended that the extraordinary skills of resurrection armor, returning to the city, and mini-map teleportation can only be redeemed (or drawn) with merit points. The world is too small, and it is natural to have system invincibility, so if you keep fighting all the way, this book will end soon, even if you keep opening new pictures. For another example, the protagonist in the book kills all the evil people in a small place, but 30% of the stolen money is given to the Eighth Prince, 10% to the black men, and 60% is distributed to the people in batches. Therefore, merit points are very important. By establishing a new order in Jianghu, you can obtain merits to the greatest extent. The protagonist can become stronger from different angles. After completing the progress of Jianghu, you can enter the fairy world, and then enter the cosmic scale, or open the multiverse, break the dimension and enter the fan world to create your own world, etc. The potential is not bad, at least higher than it is now. Then there is a small point. The protagonist's humanity is too little now. In fact, most of it is divinity. When saving the young lady, it can be seen that the protagonist's humanity has always been there, but after that, he is just killing. If this continues, there will definitely be disaster. Let's not talk about thunder calamity. How to overcome the inner demons? Purification can only delay it for a few seconds. Moreover, don't forget that Sun Bin's first skill explosion damage and Zhuge Liang's Yamato suppression effect cannot be eliminated. This shows that there are still many mechanisms that cannot be eliminated (and switching positions cannot be eliminated). Another setting comes to mind. The sin points earned can unlock karma, increase damage, etc., And the merit points earned can be used to protect the body, improve various survivability, etc. It can be used as a passive or active addition. The above suggestions are all written. I think they are still useful. It depends on whether the author will adopt them. Of course, I will accept any decision, as long as it is not too poisonous.

Author, the novel you wrote is indeed very strong, but is it possible to update it faster? Some brothers, just read, comment, and add to the bookshelf!

There are some pitfalls, but it's still worth watching if you don't pay so much attention to detail. Overall, the author's world background and settings are quite reasonable, and it can be seen that the author is writing seriously. However, I personally feel that the characters are not three-dimensional enough. At present, with my level of appreciation, I can only feel that the protagonist's personality characteristics are relatively distinct, but the protagonist's personality characteristics are still not very obvious. The other supporting characters do not have events or plots that can have a profound impact on people. It is recommended here that the author can set the character image and personality in the outline and then substitute the character image to make the character come alive. Of course, I don't have very good taste. The above only represents my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. I believe the author can write better. Finally, I wish the author a Happy New Year! [Sending Hearts]

Happy New Year! This is my first review of the new year. After reading more than 60 chapters in one go, my evaluation is: it's okay. 1. To be honest, I don't like fantasy. When I look at fantasy themes, I think it's either secret realms or daily life or competitions. It's not that I dislike secret realms. The key is secret realms every day. Today I'll be in the wild, tomorrow I'll be wild, and the day after tomorrow I'll be wild again, and the day after tomorrow I'll be in the wild again, so why should I watch this fantasy? I watched the animal world directly. After reading this book, the control was okay, and the plot was quite interesting. There are just some issues with the character. You are like Liu Su, you either save her or you don't save her, you either save the beauty at the critical moment to give readers a sense of pleasure or you kill her with a knife, saving half of her means, and leaving the poisonous people behind. Fortunately, it finally went offline. As for Jin Yiwei's identity, I can accept it. Just don't ridicule and jealously backstab him every day. It's only over 60 chapters and I can't see much of it. These poisons are acceptable if you include the Novice Village.

The transformation process of mythical beasts Kindergarten: Why? Elementary school student: Why? Junior high school student: What do you know? High school student: You are nothing College students: give me some money, give me some money After graduation: Leave me alone After falling in love: I want you to take care of me After giving birth: you take care of it When visiting the grave: bless me [cover face]

I hope the protagonist will try not to participate in the power struggle. If you have a system, you will still be the king of merit. In the end, you will not be able to live forever. Now it is skills. Later, the system upgrade will break away from the current world and soar. When the skin skill is turned on, it will be even more awesome.

Okay, first of all, there is no female protagonist at the beginning, but I still don't have it after reading it. Although this is special, it is not objectionable. Another thing is that as a veteran player of King, I am very happy to see this. In fact, I wanted to write a high-level martial arts novel about King before, but I couldn't bear it after writing a few chapters. Reading the author's novel has fulfilled my dream. I must give it five stars.

Yes, it's just that the plug-ins are not working well. I need an opportunity to show everyone that I am different. Now the protagonist's power is regarded as evil by the outside world, but this also makes the natives lose their awe.

The details are so-so. There's not much to say about the combat power, but killing evil people is really fun. That's what I want to see! Fighting without any psychological burden! ! ! Punishing evil and promoting good is beautiful.

It's okay, there's nothing too bad about it, the protagonist's plot is a bit strong [face covering], and the ending is a bit unexpected, but it's still reasonable. It's readable, the writing is enjoyable, and it doesn't have any lag in fighting power. There are some minor flaws, but they don't affect reading. When you encounter the content of the equipment panel, you can read it directly, or listen to the book [laughing and crying]. . . Hahaha, that's miserable.

It's cool, crisp, clear-minded, and doesn't overwhelm you. The lottery gives you really good stuff, and the protagonist doesn't feel bad at all. It's the most enjoyable novel I've read in a while. The last one was 749 Game, but the name was a bit awkward, so I almost missed it.

It looks relatively bland, has no major flaws, and isn't particularly outstanding, but it's still worth watching. It's not the world in King of Glory, it's some skills and equipment related to things in King of Glory

You can read the King's Skills. The author's writing is okay. I've read Chapter 47. So why do you want to join the Jin Yiwei? Personal tastes vary, don't tell me if you don't like it

This book integrates the skills of the king into this world very well, and the author also writes very well. If you want to see this kind of game integrated into the different world, this is the book, but it may be a bit difficult to understand for people who have not played the king.

It's pretty good in other aspects, but there's a blocking point ahead, and that's Xue Pan's uncle Ma Chang. It was always said later that his family background was very impressive, but there was no explanation for the fact that his sister could marry into a small rural place and was killed by the protagonist.

Dip the beans! Cool! ! This book is the best in the combat literature, but the combat scenes are a bit straightforward, and there is still a lot of room for improvement. Come on! !

Very good book. Has great potential. Quantity is also ok. There are very few poisonous points, and the writing is also good. Veteran writing. Very enjoyable and worth watching. I wanted to give it 4.5 Stars. Because there is no four point five rating. The half-star deduction is because the author's parameters and skills are too complicated.

Very good, very good. You combine the skills of King of Glory with fantasy, which is very nice and decisive. There is no Long Aotian-style mockery and slap in the face, and it does not affect the viewing if you have not played the game. It is good to watch. If you like it, write more. Five updates a day is the best [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

I personally want to post a book review, so I will briefly comment. The writing is good and is considered to be top-notch. The plot is also acceptable, so I would consider you to be above-average. The protagonist's growth rate is excellent, the hook is relatively large, and the combat power is not overwhelming. The overall score is 9.3 Out of 10, which is a perfect score if rounded up.

Is it because the system has digitized the entire world, or is this world itself a game world? It is normal for the protagonist to have health, but how to calculate the health of other people? For example, if the protagonist's skills have 500 damage and the enemy has 1000 health, and the protagonist cuts the opponent's neck or penetrates the heart with a sword, will the opponent be dead or have 500 health left?

The plot is quite smooth, but the protagonist has acquired too many skills, many of which are unused, and basically only appears once.

A good book, fast-paced and not draggy. There are almost no clutter. Although it may be a little awkward in some places, I don't think it's a big deal. It's still refreshing. Moreover, the author really listened to his advice and changed it for me.

[Eating Melon] The king's skills, equipment, and mix will soon make him invincible.

I've finished reading. There is no heroine. In the martial arts world, you get merit points by killing evil people. The merit points open the box and give you the equipment and skills of the King of Glory. The skill cooldown can reach 99%. I have never seen this type of thing before. It's not bad. System space: storage of items Crime Detection: Can see a person's crime value and gain merit points by killing them. Health bar detection: able to see the target's health bar Martial arts realm: Acquired, Innate, Nei Gang, Wai Gang, Ning Shen, Tian Yuan, Three Flowers Gathering on Top, Five Qi Chao Yuan, Martial Immortal!

It looks great, and it's a blast to fight! ! As for the protagonist being too European, I don't think it's a problem. I also don't think it matters about Liu Su in the early stage. Since I can't keep a secret, I just become a tool that brings opportunities to the protagonist. I hope to continue to maintain this unique beauty of values ​​and mechanisms. The indigenous primitive people in the gauze practice world

Recommended by Shuangwen, no slap in the face, just kill them all

It's well written and has some flaws, but it's okay to read to kill time. To put it simply, it's not that good or that bad.

It feels so good to watch it in one go [laughing evilly][angry][angry][angry]

It's a short article that you can read if you are in a book shortage. The new author is pretty good.

Yes, there is no messy plot, and the protagonist's IQ is normal.