Heavy Song Twenty-One

I really feel that the writing is quite good. I also like these settings. At first, I didn't understand why the protagonist believed so much in a person from another world. What if what he said may not be true? How could he be so convinced that his fellow villagers would not betray him? Later I found out that someone explained that it was because the protagonist was too insecure. After thinking about it, it was probably the author's creation and it was really realistic. A person in another world must not feel complete. No one is perfect. The protagonist is not the kind of person who has a particularly high quotient, just an ordinary college student. The reader also sees it from a God's perspective. I can only say that the author's creation is really good, because this is different from some protagonists who are relatively delicate or rely on their beauty, but are also very vicious. The other half relies on their charm. The other half relies on their appearance. The character of the protagonist is already very good, and the character has been completely established. He will not listen to the words of people from other worlds, and will not be countered. It is just because he is too insecure. Insecure people are insecure themselves and only want to gain security from others. Sometimes they forget their true feelings and completely follow the other person's rhythm. They are led by the other person's thoughts and even rely too much on the other person. If you go too far, the other person may even betray you. Because you are insecure, you will feel that it is your own fault. You will also become more and more sensitive and suspicious. You will be stimulated by various reasons from the outside world and become more and more afraid. Isn't this the right character? The protagonist's character is also that of a straight man, and his character will also change later. Because he won't always stop where he is. He won't continue to believe after discovering the truth. No one would believe it, right? Especially someone who has no sense of security. But his character is already much better than most insecure people. He won't choose to trust the other party after the other party betrays him. In my opinion, he is very strong and also relatively cool personally. He had nothing to do when he came to another world. Who can not panic when encountering so many perverts? He is already very calm. It is completely normal to feel insecure. The character is not OOC at all, and it does not say how imperfect or silly this character is. The protagonist is not stupid and sweet. From Chapter 1 to the latest chapter, everyone can see that he is not stupid and sweet. You can't use this sense of security to say that he is stupid [laughs] No one is forcing you to read it. If you feel uncomfortable, you can quit and read another book. The author is not forcing you. Sometimes the protagonist is really like the author who created him, and his personality is also very similar. I saw the author said that he refused writing guidance. This is quite right. There is no need to be angry. Why should you suffer? Some people will not still think at this time, "If you write a novel, you have to accept criticism and advice." But the author is not obligated to accept it. The author is a human being, not an AI who writes a book. You said that the author must accept criticism and advice when writing a novel. Then the author can also ask you not to read it if you don't like it. The author is not very bad. He is a completely normal person. I think a well-educated person should do this. If he doesn't want to read the book or the book doesn't make him feel good, he will just quit without directly criticizing or complaining. People who do this feel that they are right, right? When you see someone supporting you, you feel like someone finally understands you, right? I can tell you that no one understands it at all. If you don't like watching it, just don't watch it. Why don't you go to the toilet and eat something good during this time [laughing][laughing][laughing] The characters are like this. I can clearly say that no one is perfect. The novel must be the way you want it to be. This is not a cool novel. If you want to read a cool novel, go read it. Is there someone who is forcing you to stop reading it? Who is forcing you to stop reading it? After school starts, your parents finally put away their mobile phones? Have you vented your grievances in the novel? [Laughs] I don't understand who are criticizing the author for not writing well enough or saying that the protagonist is stupid. Oh my god, little sister, are you worthy? Your life is unsatisfactory, so you can slip into a book and be killed violently? Got killed instantly? Got his head cut off? Being quartered? Was it made into a specimen? Eyes cut? Stabbed to death? Brainless [laugh][laugh][laugh] First——feeling The description is quite good. The author's writing also has a lot of room for improvement. And I finally found a 1VN in Tomato. It's not easy. Author, you must keep writing. I will bear the wind and waves for you [laughs]💪💪💪 Second——Characters Every pervert has its own characteristics and won't be repeated. I really can't stand it anymore. I don't know how to praise it. I'm too short of words. My ideas are very novel. For the girls who are looking for ratings, I only have one thing to say to you: [If you want to see perverts, come here. There will be no less in the article] Really, they all have some crazy attributes, including the protagonist. I feel a little crazy, but only a little bit. It's not as obvious as other perverts. I hope someone can discuss this point of view with me🌚🌚🌚🫦🫵🫰 Once again - female characters Although there are not many, the only one I've seen so far is Bai Shiyue, but this cute girl is really good and good. I feel that she is very well-shaped. She has a bit of crazy attributes, but there is still a little kindness in her heart. It is simply "Although I am very bad and evil, I still have a trace of kindness left to give to the world." She is not a female character who is generally crazy in the traditional sense, but is only a little bit crazy. It feels like she should be quite crazy now? But I don't see it. Probably, I can only see one-sided. I hope someone can discuss it with me. My evaluation of her is that she is a black and white crazy person, but not a pervert [KISS][KISS][KISS] End——Overall Everyone, please don't let this person refuse water. Since the name is marked like this, no one will be polite to you [KISS][KISS][KISS] You must write when you wake up in the morning. You must write when you have lunch. You must write when you eat in the evening. You must write when you are exercising. You must write when you are entertaining. You must keep writing. [KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS] This is all I feel. Thank you for watching. See you at [Chigua][Chigua] for our second follow-up review.

This book is simply a treasure! The characters are three-dimensional and full, each male protagonist has a unique personality charm, and the sparks created by the collision are irresistible. The plot has ups and downs, the emotional lines are delicate and moving, the writing is very smooth, and it is a hearty read, and the settings of each race are so amazing! The author skillfully weaves a complex and fascinating story, and the relationships between the characters are intricate but not confusing at all. The emotional descriptions are delicate and nuanced, the sweetness is off the charts, and the writing style is the icing on the cake. This book is also one of my favorites recently! The male protagonists have very different but complementary personalities, and their interactions are super loving. The rhythm of the plot is also accurately grasped. I love it so much. I recommend reading ten chapters a day! [Shy]

Your writing is really touching. No no no no no! ! ! ! (Main bag, can you please continue writing, please ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა) This setting is really attractive, and the writing is also very good. I don't see any bad points. It's really very well written! ! Don't worry about the random bad words (*≧m≦*) They must be jealous of your talent! ! I really hope you continue to write, it's such an interesting setting. This theme and setting are really fresh, and more people will definitely like it. Come on, main package, don't give up! ! ! Main bag, main bag, we have your back ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა Lord, don't worry, be happy every day, don't worry about bad words₍ᐢ..ᐢ₎♡

My relationship with the teacher originated from Dada's last book. I accidentally discovered it and started to follow it, but in the end I was rejected😭. I personally think that the scale of Dada's last book was not very big. I really hope their story can continue ꒦ິ^꒦ິ. Then I followed Dada to this book, step by step until now, and the ratings are rising. The characters' images are three-dimensional and full, reflected in the description of appearance, movements, expressions, psychology and other details. Although there are many characters, Western fantasy elements, and various races (a lot of LG ~ [Adoration]), it does not make people feel chaotic or nonsensical. The descriptions of each person are in line with their own image and personality (every G is quite bt, which feels great! [Shy]); the plot design is also very novel and imaginative. , A fantasy setting in the West, multiple continents, with foreshadowing (I think, because it makes readers think~), the battle of wits and courage between Ono and the LGs (in progress~), sweet interaction (? Heavy fog); the title is also very good, attracting readers' interest in reading (because it makes me so excited~⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄) The big words are very good, the big words are very good, the big words are very good (important things are said three times!), I am waiting for the update every day~(๑ơ ₃ ơ)ﻌﻌﻌ♥ [Save a claw, there should be more to come in the future~] (This is my first time writing a long review, so I don't have enough brain, so don't mind if the description is not good) 2025.2.14🥰

It's nice to read. I've never seen a Shura field with so many people. And I think this novel is very novel (I've never seen it here). Oh, why does it get more exciting as you go to the back? But I like it very much [laughs] After reading the big article, I feel like I have become more discerning when reading other articles.

Let me ask you something if you are writing bad reviews. There is no such thing as driftwood. Comments must be written. The author writes very well. It seems chaotic but is actually well planned. The characters are very three-dimensional. The two sets of twins and the original sin group are very easy to identify. The dragons with dual personalities are also easy to remember. The same is true for the mermaids who are similar to the aborigines who traveled through time. Some of the remaining princes have some perverted physiques, and the quirks between each person are also very obvious, so don't give up [crying] We will always support you

So cool! So cool! It feels so good, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah! It's not good enough! (But it took more than a day of hard work to update the author.) ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑ Is really beautiful, I like it so much, Love Letter in a Dream (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) is so refreshing! Cool!

The plot and writing style of "I Like You" are also good. I can smell some ancient flavor in these plots, but it pricked me that the ending of this novel may be "be", which made me feel a bit regretful.

The big ideas are still as novel as ever! ! ! Fascinates me! ! I really liked the last book! ! ! The author can't update it, I'm heartbroken! ! But this book is still as stable as ever😍😍😍😍I absolutely love it! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] I just want to say: Jie Qing Shui Dada, I am your dog

It's super good-looking. To be honest, I usually read lvl novels. It wasn't until I read this book that I realized that lvl novels are also so good-looking. The author's writing is so good and the characters are perfect. The prince group and the prince group's crazy comments fascinate me. Huaiye is my favorite character [adoration] [adoration], only The shortcoming of one is that it is not enough to read. I hope DaDa can update more, but you must also pay attention to your health. Unfortunately, I am only a student and cannot follow DaDa every day. But I will pay attention to DaDa as soon as possible on weekends. Come on DaDa, I wish this book will get better and better.

The author's writing is really beautiful💋! ! ! ! Ahhhhhh! ! ! ! Highly recommended 🤤! ! ! ! Process 1 vs14/21? People 🤤 Ending I heard 1 vs prince group🫶🏻, prince group👑 (7 people), prince group (7 groups)🥺, seven deadly sins?🧐 (Unsure)

I've been reading a lot and don't know what to read, but I accidentally found this book from the square. First of all, this book ranks high in my mind in terms of the character of the protagonist, the plot, or the author's writing style. It is usually easy to write a book with two male protagonists in which the protagonist is male. But it is very feminine, but Huino is different. You can very clearly feel the masculine characteristics of the protagonist. Whether it is language, actions or emotions, it is very consistent with normal boys. In terms of plot, the world view is relatively large, because it involves princes from different races. The Prince and the Eight Deadly Sins that come out later, but what the author writes will not make people feel complicated. At most, the protagonist's name and territory can't be remembered clearly, but it does not affect the reading. The plot is laid out step by step. There is nothing outrageous or digging holes here and there. The content is a progress that is tied together. It is also relatively fast, and the transition from what happens in each scene to the next scene is very smooth. The emotional descriptions of some protagonists and princes may not be detailed, but the personal charm of the protagonist can be felt, and the protagonist's halo may be reflected in attracting the protagonist. The author's writing style is very clear, and he can clearly distinguish where to write in detail and where to write in broad strokes, so I feel very good about it. He does not overly promote the protagonist, nor does he describe too much about irrelevant things, so the plot can be very smooth, and the scenes and plot can be written very well. Maybe some readers don't like novels with multiple male protagonists, so the rating of this book is far lower than I expected, or maybe they don't dare to give it a high rating for fear of being blocked? But this novel is really worth reading. Because my reading time and books don't lie. Every reader may have different preferences. Maybe what I think is good may be bad to you, but how can a book be written according to one's own wishes? Then it is not the reader who is the author, but in my heart, if this book is at its current level, it can already be a story that I will keep on my bookshelf until the author completes it.

To be honest, I have read so many books on Tomato, and this is the only five-star review I have received. This book is absolutely amazing [admiration], it really pokes my cuteness, and it perfectly matches the xp [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] you want ~ it has everything [cool]. I highly recommend it. It's super good. It makes me, a person who has never read books, start to "read books" and count on one or two chapters every day [crying] [crying] However, I am still a little worried. Now that it has been changed to 1V21, will there be any plots that cannot be written and have been ignored [thinking] To put it bluntly, it is a bit unfounded. Now it is quite good and very refreshing! [Send heart][Send heart] Finally, I wish the author good health, all the best, all his wishes come true, and more updates every day! ! ! Another day to dream of releasing ten more chapters! ! Come on, author, you are great, I like your article very much. Be happy every day, don't be internally consumed, come on, come on, come on! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It's a very good-looking NP, but she was banned. She was said to be a harem girl (?). The harem that doesn't ban men only picked on our bl sister, right? It's such a pity. Madam, as long as you keep writing NP, I will always follow you [crying] [crying]

The beauty of this book cannot be described in words. I can only say that the boss's xp is my xp. As a person who only reads non-cp and np, it is really difficult to find books that suit my taste. This book is simply my gospel, my bright moon, my savior, and my god! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Jie Jie Jie, I watched 14 turn into 21 [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart], I highly recommend this wife, he really gets involved when he has something to do, and listens to the opinions of readers very much (many authors don't often read comments or follow their own ideas, and it's really uncomfortable not to listen to the opinions of readers) Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, I love the author so much, I have to follow her all the time

Except that there are a lot of characters and it's hard to remember, I really like this kind of heartthrob novel. The author will update it soon.

Nice! The author must be happy every day^_^! ! Pay attention to your body! Give it a five-star rating! *^_^*[Loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving ][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving] Let me show you 👀loving❤️

Dear author, I think the setting of this book is really interesting. I rarely see such interesting setting. I have been following it for a long time [crying] Huaiye is really a very cute baby. I really don't know why some people would slander him. Maybe it's because more and more people are reading the book, so some people are criticizing it. Writing a novel is really tiring. I've tried it before, but I didn't have the perseverance at all. Author, you are really great. The novel will only get better as you write it [I'm about to cry] Also, please really don't give up. Life in high school is really hard. I'm just waiting to read your novel every week during the holidays [crying] What would I do without you? Is there anyone who loves me so much and writes to me? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

It hasn't been updated yet. It's my first time to follow an article. I feel very good, but I'm not used to it. I read one or two chapters every day, which is not enough. The teacher is very good and this book is very good. However, the author of this article is not a writer specifically. I still hope you can rest more, but don't forget this article, because it is so good! ! I especially like Ji Huaiye! Of course everyone likes it~ But the character setting of Huaiye is really cool. I felt so happy when I saw it, but I couldn't bear to put it down. I'll wait until it's finished to watch it again. Well, let's do it this way. I'll definitely play it twice, three times, and four times after it's finished! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Learned]

It looks great. I just hope that the process of everyone falling in love with the protagonist can be more detailed and slower, and there are specific reasons. For example, the white-haired twins are because the protagonist treats them well and says they have good-looking eyes, which is a bit like a sense of redemption. They will have a slight affection for Huino, but if they like it, I hope that some specific things will happen again. The other 19 people also hope to have such a detailed and detailed process (this way there will be more text, and I can read it for a long time) In the end, I also hope that our Huaiye will become stronger and stronger and conquer them with our charisma. Finally, I would like to commend the author for his great imagination. The subject matter is very novel and I like it very much. I hope it will be a very long article and I will always support the author✌️

What is the concept of watching it for five hours all night long? Why is it not finished? Woohoo... It's really 21 Attacks in the Large Shura Field. Damn, it's so cool. And the water is still clean so far. It seems like the first kiss is still there (except for the corpse being kissed). The author has created all the characters very well, including each 1-to-0 relationship. They are all unique and unique. Some details are not so rigorous, but the emotional lines are the main ones and it is really beautiful! There is no conflict or sloppiness. The relationship between the 21 veteran attackers and the recipients is handled very well. Even though I have a bad memory, I can distinguish each role clearly. There are several thrilling and memorable scenes in the early stage that are as beautiful as fantasy movies. I love having all the beautiful images in my mind (the process of being tricked to the top of the castle is so exciting!). The description of many Western ceremonial costumes is very good. I look forward to continuing to create and finish it soon! Afterwards, the sinful land must be cleansed, and the three continents of the world will be unified! I really want to see the most mysterious spark between arrogance and acceptance🔥🔥🔥. Come on, take good care of yourself and your baby, and take good care of yourself~

Don't stop updating. I wait for updates every day. Although I always like to find mistakes in some books, this book is so beautiful. There is nothing to fault at all. Don't leave. The author is [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying], abominable review [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh]

It's very well written and the plot is very compact. It's my only top one on Tomato. It's a pity that I can't see the ending. I fought with you to review it [crying]

He is a heartthrob that I like very much. Ji Huaiye feels like a big sunshine dog. He is not too weak. When faced with the yandere and crazy behavior of the seven princes, he attacks everyone equally when he can. He is the kind of person who particularly knocks my XP o(*////▽////*) And each character is very unique. The twins, the angel of killing, and the companions who are suspected of being the same time traveler also seem to be the original body fused with some of the traveler's memories... And other new characters are waiting to be announced •͈ᴗ•͈ ♡

The writing is great, Huaiye is well portrayed, and the attack team is also good. After all, the living environment is different. Their characters will definitely be more or less paranoid, bad, indifferent, etc., But they will definitely change slowly because of Huaiye. The writing is very good. There are so many characters, but they all have their own merits, and their appearances are also handled very well. It is really great. However, if you are tired from the negative comments, you should take a good rest. I hope you will be happy every day₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

Zundu's super invincible explosion looks great! There are many Shura fields, now it should be 1v21, prince group, prince group, sin group, xp are all available, there are various characters, it has all the characters you want! Why should the latecomer come first? Because he fought and robbed the latter, so the crime team gave me a big score! [Shy]

Although there are some shortcomings in some places, it is still highly recommended. I saw in the comment area that some readers were scolding their mothers. Many of the male protagonists were very sad on Tomato. It's great that the reviewer can continue to write for us. The four stars are due to low scores.

I really, really like it. This theme is really novel. I especially like Shura Field. Other books are all about 1v five or 1v four. I really like this 1v21, and the settings of each character are different. I also particularly like the ones with ears or wings on their bodies. Really really like it! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love] I sincerely hope the author can update it [Love] Come on! This time I will be in charge of the little heartbreaking things in the comment area [Chigua] [Chigua]

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