I, Naruto, Am the Sacred Lord’s Jinchuriki!

(Up and down) Excellent++/8.5 Points, mark,,,,,, The sense of substitution is good, the plug-ins are excellent, the setting is good, the writing is good, the rhythm is excellent, the imagination is good, the characters are good, the main plot is good, and the logic is excellent. 12 Extra points: none Personal feelings: A very standard Naruto story, the biggest feature of which is that the Holy Lord makes a plug-in. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) First impression: sense of substitution, plug-ins, settings (2) Overall experience: writing style, rhythm, and imagination (3) Detailed description: character, main line, logic (4) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (5) Evaluation: ① Excellent (+4), ② Excellent (+2), ③ Good (+1), ④ Average (0), ⑤ Unknown (0), ⑤ Poor (-1), ⑥ Extremely poor (-3). Centered on "lower than average/four stars good/7 points", the evaluation criteria are based on the first nine items, and additional points can be deducted for other items. Every +2 evaluation will increase the score by one level, every -1 for middle or lower will decrease the score by one level, and every -2 will decrease the score by one level. 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent): (24) Five-star quality++/10 points+. (2) Superior (recognized by everyone as a good book, the number of updates exceeds 1,000): (18) five-star excellent +/9.5 Points, (20) five-star excellent/9.5 Points+, (22) five-star excellent +/10 points. (3) Shang Xia (good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not meet taste): (12) Five-star excellent++/8.5 Points, (14) Five-star excellent-/8.5 Points+, (16) Five-star excellent/9 points. (4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, without special features): (4) Five-star good++/7.5 Points, (6) Five-star excellent-/7.5 Points+, (8) Five-star excellent/8.0 Points, (10) Five-star excellent+/8.0 Points+. (5) Middle to lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems): (-5) Three-star poor++/5 points, (-4) Three-star average-/5 points+, (-3) Three-star average/6 points, (-2) Four-star average+/6 points, (-1) Four-star good-/6 points+, (0) Four-star good/7 points, (+2) Four-star good+/7 points+. (6) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits): (-13) One star is extremely poor +/1 point, (-11) ② One star is poor -/2 points, (-9) Three stars are poor/3 points, (-7) Three stars are poor +/4 points. (7) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views) , the content is harmful, seriously affects the reading experience, and makes people physically uncomfortable): (-15) Two-star extreme bad +/-1 point, (-17) Two-star extreme bad/-3 points, (-19) Two-star extremely bad -/-6 points, (-21) Two-star disaster++/-7 points, (-23) Two-star disaster +/-8 points, (-25) Two-star disaster/-9 points, (-27) Two-star disaster -/-10 points. (8) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expected, personal experience): Unknown three stars/x points. (9) Inferior (a novel that is unattractive to read, no evaluation): 2 stars unknown/0 points.

I'll give five stars first. I'll give five stars to Naruto fanfics as long as they don't break the original CP. But the author still hasn't watched Naruto. Itachi himself is a poor man with no normal education who is trapped by brainless politics. For Sasuke, he gave up his tribe, his parents, and himself, and spent his whole life just to pave the way for Sasuke. This gives people a very extreme performance. It can only be said that Itachi, who has no normal education, is just a sword, and the real sword wielder is Danzo who has always been greedy for the Sharingan. Itachi's own animal behavior is just a pitiable and pitiful person born of this deformed worldview. Unlike the brave man in a certain two-character game, Obito has never been cleansed, and Obito has never denied the wrong things he did. Obito said in Ninja War plot that he knew that Lin died of her own free will. He is not a love brain, but just another poor person driven crazy by the "abnormal factory" of the ninja world. What Obito wants to create is a world where normal people like Lin can live. As Obito said, this ninja world is a hell. Obito himself was right: it was not him who was wrong, but the world. Obito himself is a deformity produced by the deformity factory of the ninja world. Obito's behavior of destroying the world was also forced out by this hellish world. Anyone who has watched Naruto knows how deformed the ninja world is: A daimyo with no real strength is sitting on top of his wealth. Ninjas with extraordinary strength are not productive, but are easily manipulated by the daimyo. Ninja, an illegal profession with a mercenary nature, was considered by Jiraiya to bring peace to the world. A wealthy businessman can influence the life and death of a small country. Akatsuki was founded by Yahiko who had a desire for world peace, but was defeated by conspiracy politics. The civilians in the small village were in dire straits and life was worse than death, while the big village looked down upon human life. Even a decent character like Tsunade could shamelessly say to Nagato something very funny like: Big countries also suffer from the pain of big countries. The battlefield was chosen in a small country. The ninjas went forward to fight, while the daimyo sat back and enjoyed the results. In the end, the only injured were the dead ninjas, civilians and the small country. Sansho Hanzo, who wanted to protect the village, turned out to be a scheming villain, and the superior Hokage and Konoha high-level officials were just despicable villains who were afraid of death and for power. Children who are still in elementary and junior high school in the normal world are already cannon fodder on the battlefield in the ninja world, living materials in the laboratory, and containers used to seal tailed beasts. The jinchuriki is obviously a hero who seals the tailed beasts and adds trump cards to the village, but in reality he is the most despised being by the villagers he protects. With just one shadow's order, a lot of innocent people can die without their bodies intact. For the sake of so-called interests, villages that were hostile to each other a second ago can immediately unite to destroy a small country. The idealistic Hashirama was able to kill his brothers, companions, and relatives for the sake of the so-called village in the end. The realist Madara, who has been chasing peace all his life, turned out to be just a ridiculous plan under the family ethics drama of an alien. The ninja world itself is deformed. Deformed factories producing deformed products are themselves deformities within deformities. Of course, it is definitely wrong for Obito to want to destroy the whole world, but Obito is right. This ninja world is not beautiful. In Naruto, tragedy is the mainstream. True beauty indeed only exists in fantasy. Obito's idea of ​​destroying the ninja world itself was created by this ninja world. To put it bluntly, Obito itself is just a sword, a deformed and twisted knife produced by the deformed factory of the ninja world. Obito's starting point is correct, because Naruto's ninja world is indeed a hell. But in the end, there was no need for Obito to deny his wrongdoings. Obito knew what he had done from beginning to end. Neither the author nor the readers exonerate Obito. The author should go and see more of Naruto. Naruto doesn't have much passion. He is more of a tragedy one after another and a poor person under the tragedy.

It's not bad. It's at the food and grass level. It's already very rare. There are many books on Tomato that you need to lose your mind to read. This one is already considered intelligent.

It looks great so far. Not the Holy Mother, but my favorite is the single female lead. Ah, she has a single-minded relationship. I really like it.

So far, this is the best Naruto fanfic I've ever seen that combines Jackie Chan's Adventures with Naruto.

Ok ok ok

Except that it's a bit short now, everything else is pretty good. Quick update, come on!