A Bystander's Guide to Surviving the Instance

It's okay, but the heroine's edge feels suppressed. Regarding the crisis, the heroine seems a bit impatient and has an evasive attitude towards the current situation. Regarding her teammates, the heroine is completely outclassed, which makes her seem a bit lacking in personality charm. Let's see how the author arranges the growth of the protagonist. It should be easy to keep the plot and characters stable and grow steadily without falling apart.

Good looking. I think the dungeon ideas are arranged too densely, but there are no other problems. Waiting for update

It looks good. The heroine is very calm and non-toxic. I hope her performance will be stable.

There's nothing shocking about it. The heroine and Su Yao are a bit at odds with each other. Maybe it's because it's too short at the moment. Chu Li's characterization is not very good. It feels like it should be a short story, but I wish the copy was longer. The copy arrangement is a bit too compact

Why do you feel like Lily? Fang Xiu turns out to be a girl!

Fang Xiu said that for the heroine to choose, he should return to the world outside the original novel, then let the heroine enter the game, and then let the heroine choose which world to stay in. The second brush should be interesting

The content is novel, the plot is rich, and the protagonist is very powerful. I couldn't stop reading the whole story. I won't say much, I recommend it.

Not bad, very imaginative

It looks good, I hope I won't be fooled 🥺🥺

I like it, but the plot is a bit unclear. It would be great if the clouds could be cleared away to see the blue sky. Don't let the plot collapse. I love so much