Zichuan*********

There are no obvious mistakes, and there are no poisonous points. At present, many authors of Tomato have been criticized. Come on, author. It is rare to read Zichuan fan, so you have to work hard. The second season of Zichuan seems to be released this year. You have to grasp the author's incredible wealth [laughing evilly]. After Zichuan is done, and then bring in Super God, this world view must be more than three million words [Thinking] [Laughing evilly] [Laughing evilly] [Laughing evilly]

The writing is quite good, but Zichuan's text is sparse, and the quality here seems to be good, the plot is reasonable, but the pace is fast, but considering Zichuan's original rhythm, it is very fast. As for emotions, it can be more highlighted in two single chapters, and it can be overdone, which can not only make water characters more vivid, but also make the relationship between the characters more vivid.

I finally took Zichuan to play, and I received a five-star review to show my encouragement. [Cry]

Super God found it and Zichuan came in. The writing is good, but there are not enough chapters to read. Zichuan doesn't seem to be very popular, and no one writes about it.

I like the character of the protagonist very much. He is tolerant and restrained, ruthless and decisive, good at using, cunning and sinister. I highly recommend [like][like][like][like][like]

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There are very few people who write about Zichuan. So far, you are the only one who can write well. Come on.

Author, I read this book because I have read the original work and the anime, and I like Zichuan's book, so I came to read the fanfic. Your book is really good, and I gave you four stars, so I would like to give you some suggestions. I hope that the male protagonist can be more honest with Kadan, Liu Fengshuang and other female protagonists, and not be mixed with the intention of taking advantage, and then the emperor I feel that the poisonous point about Mrs. Lin is really unnecessary, because I like Zichuan's book very much. Every character in it is very good. Wouldn't it be nice to give Lin Xiujia a break? Why do you just say give it to that poisonous point? I really don't want to see Lin Xiujia's name appear in the chapter again. For real fans of Zichuan's books, this point is really too uncomfortable.

I'm a fan of Zichuan's old books. I liked Zichuan in junior high school and also liked Super God Academy. Moreover, this book is an interesting combination of Zichuan in the early period and Super God in the later period (although Super God has not yet appeared). And I read that this book has only been out for a month, and it has a popularity of about 20,000 people, and the rating is above 8 points. It still has great potential. [Learned it] [Learned it] [Learned it]

The author's writing style is very good. There is a big difference in personality and philosophy between myself and the protagonist, and I couldn't stand to read it at the end. But if you like villains, you can read it, it's a very good villain novel. The protagonist is only suitable to be a hero, not a ruler. I really like Cardin, but it's a pity that there are basically no scenes later on, and it's almost starting to change from the harem to the stallion and Teddy Man. I love harems, but now I really can't stand stallions and teddies. I've seen too much and I'm tired of it.

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Hao Kan [Sneaky Smile] Crossing Purple River, the protagonist is decisive and calm in killing, the plot is ups and downs without any irritation, there is a super god in the later stage, the author updates it steadily three times a day, it is a good book with potential

I've finished reading it all, but why haven't I seen anything about the Super Seminary?

There is a fan fiction in Tomato with so many chapters. The content is very good. I hope the author can stick to it. Come on. The protagonist has brains, means, and strategies. I hope the author can continue writing, because there are too few novels like Tomato, basically none. Please read it and cherish it.

Quite interesting. But can we not let the protagonist be completely crushed like this? Is it possible to cultivate a villain? Let them divide the world. The protagonist fights. Demon clan, Shi Chuanxiu fights another one. This way the combat power will not collapse. This allows room for maneuver later. Suppress the protagonist's combat power.

It's okay, but at the moment, the protagonist's personal combat power is not high. It's easy to suffer losses if you rely only on the prophet. For example, in the case of separatist rule in the Far East, if you were stronger, there would be no need to be humble. I hope the protagonist's personal strength will increase to the top five in Zichuan [face covering] [face covering]

In fact, just writing about Zichuan should be considered complete. I added a little content about the Super Seminary. Personally, it seems a bit fragmented. If the later stage is dominated by the Super Seminary, Zichuan's foreshadowing is a bit too long, and the latter part of the Super Seminary is nothing more than the same old routine. In fact, I personally feel that just writing about Zichuan's world view will be good. The following are my personal evaluations

It's not bad. The plot is very good. Super God plots are basically 🕳️. I hope you don't get caught up in them. I have watched so many Super Gods. Only one of them (God's Order) is more interesting. The others really don't feel that good.

It's really hard to find a Zichuan fanfic. What I have written so far is to my liking. Just make it faster. The low score is caused by too few words. The more points you add, the higher the score will be.

Generally speaking, Zichuan + Chaoshen is okay. But in the middle, the author doesn't know if he has lost his mind and gone crazy. He wants to kill the woman who is devoted to him because he is afraid that her family will become more powerful.

There are very few people who write about Zichuan, but they are good.

Good 👌! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! My impression after watching it is that each piece is of high quality and glossy. The pictures are from Ocean Park. Everyone in the Tang family said that he pushed the pain and went home to the palace. The lock heart and the premonition were the winners of the Earth Award. They were hungry for too long. I said I can talk about people's nostalgia? Proud and proud, Haagen-Dazs mooncake procedures are not angry every day

I have read this Zichuan book on the 123 website before. I only saw the battle between Xiu and Liu Fengshuang, and I didn't see much of it later. However, your adaptation still impressed me. I hope you will continue to update it and write better chapters.

There are really not many books by Zichuan. The others are relatively short. This one is really good to read.

When did you start Super Seminary? I came here to write about super gods. How many pictures do you have to write before you can write about super gods?

Not bad. After all, there are relatively few people writing about Zichuan. I personally think it's worth reading. Come on, author.

This is really the best Zichuan spin-off book I have ever read. I hope I can keep writing without eunuchs.

After such a long time, I finally found another good book, but unfortunately there are too few [crying]

So far, there are no flaws, but there are some female protagonists who can be accepted but he doesn't, which makes me uncomfortable. Overall, it's not bad. I would like to encourage you with four stars [smile]