Huanzhu*******

The writing is so messy, many things are without beginning and end, and it is very sloppy. The concept of the story is good, but the writing is too messy. I hope the author can improve it a lot. It is a bit unreadable. There are no names for each chapter. And if it is said that Yongqi and Xiao Yanzi met through a martial arts competition, they can be more detailed. Many things are without beginning and end, which makes people have no desire to read. This is just my personal opinion