[BA] [Some original settings] [Not selfcest]
“Welcome! I'm the manager of Angel 24 Convenience Store. How can I help you?”
The white-haired girl looks up at the customer entering the store.
“My job? As you can see, I look after the store and help anyone who needs it.”
“I'm not bored. I have lots of friends, too... Oh, those employees over there are some of them.”
“The future? Hmm, ordinary days and unexpected adventures?”
No one knows that in another, empty city, a prison has been built by a fool all alone. No one knows my name. Only the light and the tower endure through the ages.
Hello, passengers. Our next stop is Kivotos. Please take your belongings with you. Thank you for choosing our train service.
Hello, passengers. This train starts at Kivotos and is bound for &@:*φ#ε. Please stand clear and hold on. Thank you for choosing our train service.
[You can read this as a school-life story. The troublemakers and members of the Decagrammaton Society generally won't bother students. It includes some Honkai: Star Rail elements, but Blue Archive is the main focus.]
[This is my first time writing, and I'm still unfamiliar with writing techniques, pacing, and so on. I'll do my best to avoid loose ends and keep the plot coherent. Feedback is welcome.]
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An obvious story of left- and right-brain battles. The biggest shortcoming is that there is too little plot about the professor. This is a story about the problem:
Do you believe the Garden of Eden existed?
Those who believe stay, those who don't believe choose to leave.
"I have the answer, but I won't tell it." This answer is a disguised escape. If you really believed in beauty and the Garden of Eden, you would not leave an ambiguous answer and then run away in a hurry... Or even a little embarrassed.
From beginning to end, Lezi people resisted real communication with teachers and did not want to truly contact those students. Therefore, it is inevitable that the Lezi people will not have a role - I think there is no need to show the negativity, depression and loneliness that belong to a person's heart in this Garden of Eden.
I don't believe in love, sincerity, emotion, or so-called redemption. The so-called fun is just a mask to cover oneself. Is there really a smiling face behind the mask?
Of course, if these negative things are not felt by readers, then I will be very, very happy. I think this should be a story about he. Tears and sorrow are all paving the way for a better life.
Rather than being illuminated by the warm light, the sadness shrinks and hides in the darkness.
Do you believe there really is a wonderful Garden of Eden?
I don't believe it.
It's a good book. I love reading it.
The content is rich and the mission image is highlighted.
The storyline captures the reader's interest.
Mainly moved by friendship, growth and courage
The content style is unique and humorous.
After reading it, I feel that the content is acceptable. This novel is also the second novel I have read.
The very good Weilan article made me read it quickly
It's a very good book, but the author could make the paragraphs shorter. Now it makes me feel like I've read "Made in Heaven".
An obvious story of left- and right-brain battles. The biggest shortcoming is that there is too little plot about the professor. This is a story about the problem: Do you believe the Garden of Eden existed? Those who believe stay, those who don't believe choose to leave. "I have the answer, but I won't tell it." This answer is a disguised escape. If you really believed in beauty and the Garden of Eden, you would not leave an ambiguous answer and then run away in a hurry... Or even a little embarrassed. From beginning to end, Lezi people resisted real communication with teachers and did not want to truly contact those students. Therefore, it is inevitable that the Lezi people will not have a role - I think there is no need to show the negativity, depression and loneliness that belong to a person's heart in this Garden of Eden. I don't believe in love, sincerity, emotion, or so-called redemption. The so-called fun is just a mask to cover oneself. Is there really a smiling face behind the mask? Of course, if these negative things are not felt by readers, then I will be very, very happy. I think this should be a story about he. Tears and sorrow are all paving the way for a better life. Rather than being illuminated by the warm light, the sadness shrinks and hides in the darkness. Do you believe there really is a wonderful Garden of Eden? I don't believe it.
It's a good book. I love reading it.
The content is rich and the mission image is highlighted. The storyline captures the reader's interest. Mainly moved by friendship, growth and courage The content style is unique and humorous. After reading it, I feel that the content is acceptable. This novel is also the second novel I have read.
The very good Weilan article made me read it quickly
It's a very good book, but the author could make the paragraphs shorter. Now it makes me feel like I've read "Made in Heaven".