I'm so Proud of You for Saying This Is a World of Cultivating Immortals.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, the memory of the bookworm has a place for you. Even in the long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

It's quite good. I've seen a lot of themes where the protagonist is pretending to be a behind-the-scenes character. Other books would be a bit awkward if they were very concerned about the true identity of the protagonist, but the author's treatment is indeed very good. There is a guardian beast. It's equivalent to layering the truth. The protagonist > the people around the protagonist > the NPCs in the protagonist's city > the NPCs in the spiritual network. This is really good. The overall story is also good, and the pace of the story is also very fast. The author needs to work hard [like]

Looks good! I finished it in a day and a half, but it's just a little short ~ Hehe~ [Shy] I hope that the protagonist can get more equipment from Master Tongtian, or open a vest to complement his background or something. I feel that Master Tongtian's identity and background are so crude. Can some of the lovely disciples of Jiejiao appear? For example, Guiling, Duobao, Zhao Gongming and so on [love]

Very pretty. I don't know yet if there will be a female protagonist, and Phoenix doesn't have much of a role, which is pretty good. If someone who is in love with the leader of Tongtian doesn't pop up later, I'll pursue him. It's not a discriminatory emotional drama. I can't imagine who Tongtian Cult Master would like.

I've read about a hundred chapters so far, and I feel pretty good about it. The reason why I'm commenting here without continuing to read is because it points out that after the protagonist realizes that cultivation is real, he feels that he is too careful in pretending to be real. If he doesn't pretend as much as before, he might not be able to stand it anymore. There is also a bit too much written about the protagonist's daily workplace. Personally, I prefer to see him pretending, rather than hanging around in the workplace. Although there is a slap in the face later, it is not enough to pretend. At present, it seems that there is no ambiguity, no heroine, and no harem. I have to say that some parts are pretty good, so I won't spoil it here, but it deserves 4 stars.

Author, your writing is good, but I am going to leave because you have written too little. But before I leave, I will give you five stars. I hope I can see you on the homepage next time and have more words next time.

Absolute five-star praise, this book is rare in the world. I want you to bear my pain, and I will show you that your scalp is numb and you are incontinent. [Sinister smile]

When you update, the subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the praises from micro-lai start to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are ten o'clock, the great Confucian's debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented outside the body. When you are twenty years old, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave dazzling traces. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the boring problems come from insufficient updates. [Exploration][exploration]

I really like it. I hope it's free of cp. I just like to see the male protagonist feeling lonely and seeking defeat.

There is content, but I can't understand it even if I don't have any academic qualifications. It's very cool in the first and second half of the show, but I don't handle it very well in the first and second half when I reveal that I'm easily persuaded to quit. The workplace part is a bit boring, after all, it's a fairy tale. The later posts are very literary, but if you read too much, you may get confused by the words. The main plot is well laid out, the progress is good, and the character creation is average.

The author really likes the plot of The Dragon King. He keeps getting beaten up and pretending to be cool, and everyone comes to eat. I can't suffer alone [smile]

How to say it? The plot of the article is okay, but I think the appearance of the Phoenix is actually unnecessary. Even though he is neither good nor evil in the article, he is not of much use to the protagonist. I even think Bai Hu is more likable than his character, and the Phoenix is not even the same as the protagonist. , He only helps occasionally, even not because of the protagonist. His heart is still thinking about revenge, but he and the protagonist have vented their anger, and he will share some resources with the protagonist. This is actually very unfair to me. I feel that he has not contributed much, and then he shares the resources. When you create a character, you can't just create a flat character, and his role is not very small. I don't know if he is blindly disliked and obsessed with revenge. I don't know if it advances the plot. Anyway, it doesn't leave a very good impression on readers. Moreover, as the protagonist is a human race, the instructor had never thought about the demon race. Moreover, the human race and the demon race were still at war at this time. The protagonist preaches and teaches. Failure to guard against demons would easily attract public opinion, so the author created an atmosphere. Most of the things he created before were conflicts between human race and human race. This time it has directly become a cross-border. The demon clan and the ghost cultivator are both positive and negative, that is, he can be neutral, or he can be partial to demons and people. But the demons are directly opposed to the humans. So what is the author's intention in creating this plot? Anyway, I don't know. I just feel that this section makes me feel a little panicked. I hope it can be improved. (It's just a personal opinion. If it interferes with your thinking and affects your mood, it's my fault. But if you chase me and scold me, it's your fault [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]) That's it, so-so

It's quite interesting. It should be regarded as a brain-filling article. There is a gap in information between the world before traveling and the world after traveling, so he develops a new path and gains merits. Moreover, some of his speeches happen to be combined with his own real experience. Although it is pretentious, it does not feel annoying, and it also feels like a group portrait. The rules of the spiritual world are just right to separate the protagonist from the truth. It feels quite reasonable.

The plot is pretty good, and the characters are also okay. But there is one point, this article is pleasant but not very satisfying, because I think describing the reality in society is a good sublimation, but as an online article, it should be the best to just hit the point.

This book is great! Although he is also a mover, it is enough that the things he is moving are real. Although the protagonist looks confused, that's what makes it interesting! I highly recommend this book to book friends, because in terms of happiness, this book ranks among the top ten on Tomato.

After watching the plot of the interview, I have a hunch that this will definitely be a climax, but it still depends on the author's writing skills. Come on, author, I support you. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It looks really good. Except for the skipped first half of modern times, the others are simply unbeatable and beautiful [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] The modern era in front of me is actually logical in my opinion, but it's just not very enjoyable. It's not as serious as others say. As the saying goes, thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi. Later, those who bullied the protagonist learned a lesson, which was good. It's so good to watch, so cool, I watched it in one sitting. I almost missed this incomparably beautiful novel after reading other people's comments, which is such a shame.

This book is undoubtedly a masterpiece worth savoring. The author presents readers with a rich and colorful story world with delicate writing and profound insight. 1. Plot design The plot is cleverly designed, with ups and downs, making people want to put it down. The author cleverly sets up multiple suspense and reversals to keep readers highly interested throughout the reading process. Each chapter is closely connected and drives the story forward. 2. Character image The characters are full-bodied and distinctive. The protagonist has a distinct personality and rich experiences, which makes people empathize with him. The supporting characters also have their own merits, and their actions and choices are in line with their own character settings, adding more color to the story. 3. Language style The language style is unique, poetic yet simple. The author uses a large number of vivid metaphors and vivid descriptions to make the text seem like a picture, allowing readers to experience the scenes and atmosphere in the story personally. 4. Theme ideas The theme is profound and thought-provoking. This book is not only a story, but also an in-depth discussion of important topics in life such as human nature, love, and friendship. Through the protagonist's experience and growth, readers can draw strength and wisdom from it. 5. Overall evaluation Overall, this is a good book worth reading again and again. It not only excels in plot design, characters, language style, etc., But also has profound connotations in theme and thought.

I don't recommend writing career lines, I think it looks good

Enlightenment is written very cutely, and the group portraits are very cute. Unfortunately, the protagonist is slightly less capable and can only enlighten others online, and does not participate in front-line battles most of the time. However, Enlightenment and Discussing the Way are very cute, and such a genius creation. It becomes popular from time to time, and the sublimation is not abrupt. The finale and the parent-shaking part are very cute. Human nature, human nature... I like to read people so much. The people who write about them are good people, and they are enlightened and cute. I like it... Genius,,, although I am an immortal, I write about people, so cute, so good Cute,,, people are always there,,, alas, I like it so much,,, maybe the protagonist is not invincible and omnipotent in the later stage for this reason, until the end, he is still the person who is afraid of failure,,, humanity is shining (wiping tears) I like this story so much

It's been so long that I don't remember what this book is about, but since I've read it all, it must be good. Because I didn't have time to evaluate it before, when I was flipping through it, I suddenly realized that I had already read this book. Then I thought about it, and I guess I didn't have time to evaluate it before. My patience is actually not very high. Who would wrong themselves on the Internet? But after reading it, it means it is good-looking. Then this book should be non-CP. People who like single female protagonists and single male protagonists can read this book, because I am super interested in love lines. I hope the protagonist is a lone wolf. Even if he is not a lone wolf, I hope there is no love. I deleted this book because I was reluctant to do so. This book is definitely a book that can be read if you are not a book junkie. Even if you are not a book junkie, you can add it to your bookshelf and wait for the next time you read it. I don't remember the content, but I believe in myself, five stars, five stars.

Very nice, I like this book very much. The author integrates those noble principles into the novel and into the plot without any sense of violation. I feel that the lack of readers at the beginning may be due to the classical Chinese text in the book. A small part of it is indeed obscure and difficult to understand, but it is much better later on, with explanations and experiences in vernacular. There are many characters in the book, and I feel it is too complicated. Sometimes I can't remember who is who. I think the author can go to the starting point and develop it, because the writing is really interesting. If it is changed into a longer novel, the supporting characters can be more three-dimensional. For me, what I like most is the Confucianism, Legalism, and Mohism quoted by the author, which are very insightful. Secondly, the development of the plot took me three days to finish it. I don't know if it's because the author has changed it, but there are a few parts that I can't understand. I feel like some parts have been deleted and it's not very coherent. Come on, author, I'm sure your book will be a great success. Will you consider a sequel in the future?

Sigh... I should have known that the ending of a novel with this direction would definitely not be a happy ending, but it would still be quite touching. Although it is a novel about cultivating immortals, I only saw humans in the whole novel. Human beings, this is the kind of life they are. 🥲

The content is very good It's a pity that I'm not confident enough. The reference in the first few chapters obviously ruins the overall feeling of the book. Otherwise, this book can be regarded as a half-technical and half-immortal cultivator. After seeing the latest 200 chapters, I can see that the genre is showing some signs, and the character settings are quite distinct. However, the plot of the protagonist who is cultivating immortality is too bland, and the transformation is too blunt. Let's see how the plot ends with the demons breaking the seal.

This novel is really beautiful! The storyline is fascinating, the characters have distinct personalities, and the writing is beautiful and smooth, making it immersive. I highly recommend you read this book, I think you will like it!

Five-star praise, absolutely five-star praise. If you don't give five-star praise after reading this, you will be like this. The more harm you do, the more harm you do. I can't be poisoned alone [I understand]

The novel has a good plot, smooth logic, and reasonable ideas. It is a rare novel in Tomato. I want to see a side story that connects with Yuan Honghuang. Whether they are peers or each other's past and present lives, it feels very interesting.

It has flaws, but it's better than other pretentious novels

Is the rating a bit low? I've read more than a hundred chapters, and my impression is still excellent. Everything is reasonable and the foreshadowing is well written. The pig's feet are not too silly or too sweet. I'm looking forward to the following chapters and will review them later.

It is very simple but comfortable to watch, but you can still see the flaws. For example, every time the protagonist posts a post, some people will jump out to object, and then someone will gain enlightenment after posting again. The plot is too repetitive. However, as a debut novel by a new author, it is fully qualified. I would like to give you five stars for encouragement.