Turned into a Little Girl, I Was Spirited Away by My Childhood Friend

It's a bit unbelievable. Is this the quality of a first-time book writer? For those who don't know, I thought it was a new account opened by some big boss. The quality of this content is indeed very high. At least it is one of the few treasures on this platform. I also like the characters of the two protagonists very much. The protagonist is weak. But my wife, the heroine is safe and reliable, ah~ they are simply the perfect couple in my ideal. Although there is not a lot of content, but if I continue writing at the current pace, I can still look forward to it (of course, the premise is that the author does not attack), come on, come on, you can look forward to the future [Blow kiss]

This is the first time for a young author to write a book, so please forgive me if the writing is not good. I hope you won't get too entangled or make too drastic remarks. After all, novels are not reality. (By the way, it would be great if there was such a system in reality!) However, I still hope readers will point it out if there are any problems, and I hope everyone will like my first book. Two girls are the best at sticking up! This book mainly tells the story of Xu Miao who became a lolita and the royal sister Ren Mengyao, but there are also many sweet little stories of the supporting characters. (This part will be written in the form of an extra after the end of the main text.) I beg all readers here to comment and write book reviews. A free gift will also make a young author happy. Thank you so much to all the readers who read this!

It is strongly recommended that the author avoid a poisonous point. The system of this kind of novel either has no gender and is represented by "it". If the system wants to have a gender, it can only be female. The appearance of a male system in a novel with two female protagonists is very, very jarring. I hope the author will pay attention. I think in Chapter 1 and Chapter 2, the protagonist calls the system "brother". This can be regarded as the protagonist's mantra to express his emotions. It does not mean that the system has a gender. However, without the author's explanation, the reader cannot be sure whether the system has a gender, so even if the reader knows that this "brother" may only express emotions, there will still be some resentment. You can indicate whether the system has a gender in the text, use "it" or "she" to refer to the word "system" from time to time, describe the sound characteristics of the system, etc. I currently give it four stars. If there are any problems or highlights in the future, I will comment further. Or maybe I haven't seen the section indicating whether the system has a gender. More on that later. Currently, the system seems to be a female system, so I changed it to five stars.

It's pretty, very sweet, and can be stuffed with a knife in moderation. . .

Personally I think it's pretty good

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It's a pity that such a good-looking article is not of a type that many people like to read.

So lucky, you appear in my world like a gift☆ᐢ⸝⸝>ᴗ<⸝⸝ᐢ☆

It's beautiful, I love reading it, the author is great 😘

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