Practical Teaching, We Still Don't Know the Future Played by the Evening Wind

I don't really like to write book reviews, but if the author is a newcomer, I can only reluctantly say it. First of all, this novel is generally very good, and it is more daily life. The protagonist and supporting characters have very distinct personalities. After reading it, I feel relatively happy. The disadvantage is that there are some logical problems in some places. It is not very coherent. Another feature of this book is that the author does not use traditional person narration, such as who said who and who, but uses the narrative method of Japanese light novels. If you have read less light novels, it may be a bit confusing and you can't tell who said what. It has great potential. I wish the author will be recommended soon.

I just want to see this kind of warm daily life. I have read too many dark stories about practical teaching and pretentiousness. The beauty of campus in classic Japanese comics is rare. It makes me feel that they are students, a group of young people, and they also have beautiful daily lives in this campus where conspiracy is rampant.

Come on, author, I feel like this book has great potential. The daily writing is quite good. I wonder if the quality can be maintained if it really gets into the main story. I have a small problem at the moment, that is, the writing occasionally jumps a bit, and there are some minor problems with logic. For example, when Fei Bo gives bread to the male protagonist, I think it would be best to write down the specific process earlier. But these are minor issues. Looking forward to the author's follow-up

First of all, this novel has basically no poisonous points in terms of logic and plot. If there are, there are probably two points. One point is the so-called masochism in the comment area where the protagonist is constantly beaten by Suzune, but I feel that this is not a big problem at all. On the contrary, it is close to the original work. Suzune's character design is very reasonable, and the protagonist is not invincible, which is ahead of many other fan fictions. Secondly, in terms of reading, it may be because I don't like the symbol in the dialog box, so sometimes I don't know who said this sentence. Overall, I love watching it. Although the score at this time is low, I will definitely get an 8 in the future. I agree with it very much. I don't think it's okay to question anything. No one is born a writer. Only the thorny road has challenges. Keep writing hard. I am very optimistic about you. The heroine can have ringtones. I see the interaction between the two now and I honestly like it. The writing is too detailed. I'll ignore some things and it will feel like reading a running account.

Although it's not a cool article, there's no need to be beaten all the time.

There may be some minor flaws in the front, but the plot in the back becomes more and more interesting, similar to that of Ri Qingxiang, which pursues reasonableness and authenticity. The collision of emotions and the feeling of youth make Tomato particularly eye-catching in the full of refreshing articles.

Rookie Ma, five stars, if you want to watch it, have lower expectations. Also, if you don't like Juebei, don't read it, and if you don't like Class D, don't read it. The author is still making progress, but because it's D, I don't know if the book can be completed to our satisfaction.

It is a very good fanfic. The plot and characters are well integrated with the original background. It is very close to the style of Japanese light novels. Not only can I find the feeling of pursuing practical teaching in it, but it is also very fun. Come on, author [Love]

Leave a comment, it looks ok so far

@Second Yuan Ito Makoto Is it multiple female protagonists or single female protagonist?

Overall, it's okay, but the plot has been too slow recently, and violence is something that can be used or not. I've been told that I can't beat it, so I'll suffer a loss. The update is too slow, which makes the viewing experience poor, and the deflated part is too uncomfortable.

It seems like a very relaxing novel with no purpose, and then it is about relaxing campus life and quarreling with classmates, especially the interaction with Ling Yin. What should I say? She is very responsive and doesn't feel left out.

On the whole, the shortcomings do not overshadow the good points, they are more everyday. The heroines are Ichinose and Chihiro Shiranami, and Sakura is included. I feel that Kushida Kushida and Horikita should also be the heroines. I always praise the books with Kushida Kushida and Horikita. ⌯Oᴗo⌯ By the way, are there any other books with Kikyou Kushida as the heroine?

Looks good! Come on, author! There are too few practical fans who can finish the Tomato book normally (either discontinued or blocked). I hope this book can be finished normally, keep up the good work!

It's good-looking, I love reading it, it's a really relaxing campus life. I rarely see anyone write about Horikita Suzune. The campus life written by the author is very enjoyable to read. Please give me more. Thank you.

Huan Kan, I feel very good about this book, the author should not run away [Thinking]

Haokan loves watching it. Except for the fact that Tianyu is a little disabled, (I deleted it as a body plug-in that can become talents from scratch), it will be much better.

There are some problems, and the writing is good. Overall, you can read it.

After reading a little bit, overall there is no problem. The protagonist was beaten because of his own fault. Juibei's violent character can be considered cute.

So what is a plug-in? Who is the strongest?

It's obviously a very good book. It's plain but interesting. It's suitable for reading in your spare time. I just don't know why the rating is low, so I can only hope that the author will stop dtr us and become a salty fish king [already planted][already planted]

Good luck to the author, it's very interesting.

Wow, oh, oh, oh

Give me a good sticker (.-`ω´-)

Like 👍, it looks good, I prefer daily writing

It's very funny, I hope I can continue writing it

Good luck! Great potential! Come on, author [shy]

Among practical teaching fanfics, it's quite good. I also like this kind of daily life.

Based on my experience of 6000+ hours, this book is considered above average and very good.

I really like this kind of Fushiheiji protagonist template, it's not too out of line, it's very comfortable to watch, but the update is discontinued...