After Being Trapped in the Snake Yard, Weasley Became the Dark Lord

It's nice, but too little. In basically all fan fiction in the past, Ron was a supporting character used to set off the protagonist, and many novels focused on describing his shortcomings. But in this book, although it seems that the author gave Ron the golden finger as a prophet, I think it actually gave him the perseverance to persist in learning. Ron has shortcomings in the original work. He is usually timid, vain, and jealous... But he never lacks the courage to sacrifice for others. Just imagine, there are 7 children in the family, but I live like an invisible person. Which child would not have the above shortcomings? Even Harry, the protagonist of the original work, isn't he vain? Even when Ron was elected prefect, he also had a stiff face, did Hermione even notice it? It's just that Ron in the original book couldn't keep studying, couldn't be a good character, and didn't have more shining points for people to ignore his shortcomings. But for a person who can drop out of school to accompany his friends through life and death and live in exile in an environment where adults in the wizarding world shrink back, even if he shrinks midway, even if he is not as smart as Hermione, I feel that I can't ask for more. In this novel, after the author gave him the power of prophecy, Ron bravely took a step forward in order to change the fate of his family. He is still looking forward to the future story. I hope the author doesn't want to create a harem or make Ron a brainless strongman. Although it can be read, generally speaking, Harry fandom is all about the surprise of seeing magic for the first time as a child. With a harem or a brainless strongman, there will be some sensory drama. After all, no one can fool themselves. The female characters in the story fall in love with someone at the same time... It always feels like YY, rather than a new adventure triggered by the change of the protagonist.

The book has potential, but I hope the part where Luna changes clothes can be changed. Although I understand the restlessness of adolescent boys, it is still too obscene and makes me feel psychologically uncomfortable.

Although not many people have read it, it is really well written. 1. This article is based on Ms. Rowling's original text. The characters are unbiased and very comfortable to read. This is very valuable in HP. Many authors have derogated Dumbledore, Harry, especially Ron, and praised the Dursleys, the people of the Snake House, and especially Snape. This is very unfriendly to fans of Harry, the principal, Ron, etc. Who have read the original work and are relatively neutral. They also refuse to discuss and draw a line. 2. I have read about 40 chapters, and I have hardly seen any bad jokes. This is very rare in the entire online literature circle. In my personal opinion, except for Hannah Abbott's "Iron Hat King" meme, other memes in the HP circle are relatively bad, especially the "Hermione and her two useless men" meme. After watching Red Temperature once, I even wonder if these people have never seen the original movie and started talking nonsense after reading a few fan novels. 3. The protagonist has a spirit of kindness, friendliness, and self-sacrifice, which is extremely valuable. Blind compromise and weakness are certainly not in line with the simple values ​​of the people, but killing innocent people indiscriminately, being insensitive and showing no compassion is worse than a pig or a dog. As Principal Dumbledore said, "Love is the greatest magic." Love is Harry Potter's greatest quality and the core spirit of this set of books.

The author allowed me to see a different Ron, or let me understand a side of Ron that I didn't know about. The delicate psychological description fully expresses Ron's complex mental state, allowing me to better understand what this character is thinking. I really like the author's writing style. I clearly feel that it is different and unique. I hope the author can stick to it. ~(^з^)-☆❤ I resonated emotionally with the main character. I was Ron when I was reading it, so I felt the same way. There were many times when I cried while reading it😭. I almost cried while reading it. I really feel heartbroken and aggrieved for this character (ⅈ▱ⅈ), especially in his interactions with the Weasley family. The author expresses very fully the complex psychological state of being in the family, the sadness of neglect, and the longing for attention and closeness to family members. It didn't make me feel pretentious or anything like that, just, well, it will happen naturally and make people feel that it is indeed the case. There will be such emotions or thoughts in it, which can make people understand him. Then there's the growth of this character. After all, he was still a child who was frightened and panicked at the beginning, and then gradually took the initiative to find solutions to problems. The author's transition was very natural, and his growth was also great. He was almost completely different from Ron in the original book. He began to become knowledgeable, brave and resourceful, but in essence they have many similarities, such as the desire to be cared for by their family, and in some cases He was more reckless and rushed like an angry lion, which made me feel that this character is very, very multi-faceted. It did not make me feel that this character had completely changed, or that he was not like Ron in the original book at all. It made me feel that Ron is Ron, but I just didn't know him well enough and didn't see other sides of him. I am very grateful to the author for letting me see that. I think this character is so... It touches me. And then there is the praise for the author😘😘: The author is really great, you must stick to it, I will always support you. This is my first time to write such a long book review, and I feel that this book is worth writing. It is the one that makes me most empathetic. Never give up😘😘❤❤, and the author is really super hard-working, the update speed is super super super, 5 updates a day is simply a role model for us. 😘~(＾◇^)/You must persist, I love the author so much (＾＿－)≡(˘ ³˘)❤ Author, I'm going to starve to death. Come back quickly. I don't ask for more from you. You can just write me a note asking for leave. At least it gives me something to look forward to. [Cry] [Cry]

Very very very very beautiful! I love so much! First of all, the setting is very novel! This is the first time I have read a HP fanfic with Ron as the protagonist and about Ron's awakening. And even when he awakens, it is very consistent with Ron's original character. You can see Ron's gradual growth. The author's control of Ron is really good! Let the protagonist (?) Who has been ignored for a long time also have his own shining point! I like it very much! It's a pity that it's still being serialized and I'm very anxious to read it!

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I don't have much to say about this book. In one word, it's a t0 work. It's of such high quality. When I read it, I clearly felt that the author really worked hard to complete this work. Everyone's image is really very real, giving me the feeling they should have. Ron really surprised me. Just like other book friends, I was completely immersed in his emotions. However, I have read some bad reviews from book friends. What should I say? It's hard for me to make some comments, but I really think this is a relatively high-quality book. I feel that if this book is repaired, it will definitely become a god. Even with just a little repair, it will reach its peak. Here, because this is my first time to post a relatively long book review, I really can't express myself well. Other book friends all think this book is of high quality and praise each other as being better and longer than the other. In order to compete for the position in the author's heart, I can only post it. And the author, because your book is really of high quality, but there are too few chapters, most of us will choose to keep it. Don't run away, everyone likes a well-completed book. You only have 100 chapters, and you can have more than 100 updates, so you can have fun secretly. This is really very good. I am an old book friend, believe me, I'm right. I'm just nagging here. If you really want to choose a book, please read the second paragraph. Don't read the rest. Then read other book friends' comments. Thank you.

A very novel angle, the first time I see this type of Ron. Instead of becoming a transparent, brave and typical Gryffindor Ron like other stories, he became like the other Weasley brothers. Instead, he is a young man with love in his heart, rich emotions, sensitive and low self-esteem, and at the same time, he is also a growing Slytherin, lifelike. If he didn't have a golden finger, or if he was more arrogant and elegant, or if his temperament was more sensitive and gloomy, it would inevitably remind me of Regulus Black who silently fought with his own life in the original work. He would still be impulsive and do wrong things, but at critical moments, such a "mortal" would still fight to the death to do what he thinks is right. Compared with Harry Potter and Sirius, they are indeed not as dazzling, but they are also flesh and blood and have truly lived.

They say that we have to write a different Ron, and there are already dozens of them. Starting with these two, we should change his character. Otherwise, I won't be very motivated to continue reading, and he will still be too childish like before. (These two are really about changing his character from here. I feel it is very good, and let Ron really change from Gryffindor to Slantlin.

Among all the HP fanfics I have read, you are the only one who depicts Ron Weasley with great care. Other books with Ron as the protagonist are not as detailed as you. In fact, you have lost a lot, because the character of Ron is inherently unlikable. When I read movies and novels, I always have ill intentions towards the character of Ron. Even in other fanfics, I thought about suggesting that the author just write him off, because his shortcomings are really unbearable for me. At least that's what I think. But after seeing your description, this Ron is not so hateful. It can be seen from your words that you are fighting for Ron, at least I think so. I think you succeeded! Give me five stars, come on!

It's really good-looking, and it's in the top five of the Harry series in my opinion. But it's not enough to watch. I finished reading it in a while😱😱. The author should not abandon the book. I will always keep an eye on you👀👀

Thrilling! The troll episode left me so nervous that I couldn't breathe. The scene where Harry died headless was quite horrific, and it was hard to imagine that the three of them were just gone. Apart from this, it also reminds people that the troll crisis was all thanks to Ron! Influenced by the original novel's story of surviving the trolls with almost no injuries, and the ease of trolls in the Legacy game, I despised trolls. However, the mood created by the author, and the scene of the death of eleven-year-old Ron and his friends, redefined trolls for me. 🕯️Oh, be careful not to die accidentally. All in all, this is a book that I can't wait to read and review, and I highly recommend it!

One thing that impressed me about this novel was the portrayal of the character of Slytherin. Some works tend to overemphasize their maturity and complexity when depicting Slytherin students, making the characters feel more like adults than 11-year-old children. The author balances this deftly. Although there are indeed elements of struggle, unity, and interest entanglements within Slytherin, these descriptions do not appear to be exaggerated or divorced from reality, but are shown through a child's perspective, making people feel friendly and credible. I also really like Ron's character. He is brave, witty, occasionally has some little calculations, and is also a bit stubborn. The story of sorting a child who originally belonged to a Gryffindor family into Slytherin was very well written. Make him appear more three-dimensional and real. Especially when facing his friends, his selflessness and willingness to stand up for them show the qualities of an outstanding young man. It was this natural kindness and integrity that earned him the trust and support of his friends. As the book shows, when you stand up for what is right, people will naturally be attracted to you and choose to stand with you. The portrayal of Snape is also very good. He is not like the vicious tongue that is only a few stereotypes in many fans. He has hidden concern (in fact, it is impossible to see it according to the way some works are written), and respect for Deng. He is a rich person. Overall, the characterization and plot design are very natural. The author did not deliberately exaggerate or exaggerate any plot, but showed the growth and interaction of the characters through delicate writing, which is indeed good. I hope you won't stop updating and continue writing.

One of the best Harry Potter books I have ever read. Ron is written with flesh and blood, has growth, and the supporting characters are well portrayed. There are also shortcomings. For example, if you want to change the future, Ron needs to work harder. There are no plug-ins for the main character in this book, but you can occasionally see a memory. In your spare time, you can practice spell transformation and combat skills. You can consolidate the second-grade textbooks in your spare time and study the third-grade books in advance. Time is not waiting for Ron!

This is the first time I read a fan novel with Ron as the male protagonist. There is no system and no time traveler, but the story is still very exciting. After reading so many fan novels, I feel that Ron deserves a better ending.

I really like this book. Ron is a little reckless, but he starts to study continuously for his friends and family, integrates into a new college, and becomes the most special Weasley. But he is still the most innocent and passionate Ron. His timidity is his charm. I am looking forward to the following plot, and the author strongly requests not to keep updating it! ! ! This is the first time I'm chasing a book [crying] [crying] [crying] Don't give up! ! !

Thanks to the Pandora family, otherwise Ron Kind would have gone crazy. I was really touched when I read Pandora's reply to Ron [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's good-looking, the subject matter is very novel, and there are few Ron from Slytherin [shy][shy][currently in development]

It's cool, but many Harry fanfics only treat Ron as a stupid and angry supporting character. But this book really brings out the shining points of Ron. The emotions are very delicate, and the inferiority and jealousy in the family are too real [crying]

Not bad, I want to see it finished

In this article, Ron's psychological process from being reckless to knowing how to analyze the pros and cons is described very delicately. Originally, before reading this book, I didn't hesitate to have a good impression of Rowan, because in the original book, I thought he was quite jealous and a bit mean. But when I read this book, I thought that there are so many children in the Weasley family. Like other children of the same age, he still has to use second-hand things. I feel that these characters are nothing. After all, there are sometimes flaws in the original Harry Potter books. Sister, the description of Ron in it is not without process. You can directly understand how to analyze the pros and cons, but understand it step by step and analyze the process of growth. And I think there is no OOC in it, which is really rare. Then let me talk about Si Jiao in it. I really like the character of Si Jiao in it. He is not as harsh and mean as described in other books, nor is he so gentle. He is more like a description of a serious teacher. Si Tui was moved. And the writing here is very novel. It gives Ron a golden finger, but the Sorting Hat in it makes me feel that this skill is not a prophet. According to the development of this plot, I think Ron should grow up step by step. I hope he will not start a harem or be brainless (the most sincere wish) There is also the description of Ron. Ron is neither always reckless nor always shrewd, but I think the description of his family is very good. After all, Ron is a somewhat transparent character of Weasley. Ron neither forgives them all at once, nor does he never forgive them. Well, and Ron's conflicting psychology, I think the description is very vivid. In short, if this book doesn't collapse later, I think he can become a head character in my HP novel. Come on In addition, the description of this article is really delicate. I cried while reading it. I thought it was because my ability to empathize was too strong. As a result, every time I saw Ron being wronged or being treated in any way, I would cry for three seconds. I really felt wronged for him (｀Δ´)! , This review will probably be revised after I finish the book, but so far I think it's good to read ^ω^

It looks pretty good so far, keep it up!

Ron from Snake Yard, oh my god! This is my first time seeing you, and the writing is also very good.

This is a fascinating and well-thought-out article. Although some of the plots in the middle are indeed outrageous, the real characters and emotions are truly written with flesh and blood. We always like to see the protagonist continue to be strong, but there will always be contradictions and setbacks in the growth process. It is not that setbacks make people progress, but it is a continuation of the protagonist's original character. His character will indeed develop like this. No OOC, the author is great, let us see a flesh and blood Ron

If the follow-up author and teacher can maintain the current level and play smoothly to the ending... Then I declare that this will be one of the T1 works in my HP fan reading career... The writing is very good... The author skillfully manipulates both sides of the advantages and disadvantages, and the dots, lines and surfaces are as smooth as a smooth reading experience...

I really like the writing. Come on, come on.

This is a good book. If you don't read it, you will be at a loss.

They are all good, but one star is missing because the update is too slow. Author, why can't you make one million a day? [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

A refreshing fanfic, good [like]

It's super good-looking. I didn't understand it at first. I thought it was the Riddler. But then I got into it and I could really understand Ron's feelings. Alas. Must be recommended with five stars⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️