American Showbiz: The Five-Year-Old Movie Mogul from the Theater

Wow, the author has started entertainment again, support, support, support!!!!! In fact, tonight was due to the lack of books. I remembered that the author said last year that there might be new articles. I thought that it was already the new year and I wondered if the author had broken his promise, and then I found out that there was. Super super super surprise!!!! I feel that there is nothing wrong with this article as a whole. The main thing is some details. There are some small problems when describing the items. For example, the cheap candy I saw in the first chapter (this candy appears very frequently in the later part. In the part of the story where the staff was given to the staff during the commercial, it can be simply used as sugar, but it would feel weird to describe it as cheap). After that, there are cheap perfumes or other cheap things. Although cheap is the author highlighting the poverty of that family and so on, using a certain word over and over again can make people feel monotonous. Describing the taste and feel of sugar, using pungent perfume or tobacco smell can also prove that it is of poor quality. I like the author's article very much. The author is awesome. Come on!!

After reading half of it, I decided to review it and share my current feelings. Die Jia: My parents are healthy and my family is happy. It is normal to have different opinions. I am not interested in writing about the entertainment industry. Personally, I prefer British and American dramas. I also like to watch musicals and have a little exposure to dramas and operas. Of course, I am only at the level of an audience. First of all, British actors are the author's comfort zone. Whether it is the characterization or the atmosphere of the scene, it gives me the feeling of reading British literary works in the 1980s and 1990s. Moreover, the author has obviously checked the information, and it does not give people an unreliable feeling of being a castle in the air. You can clearly feel that the author is telling a story rather than deliberately creating a sculpture. In terms of character creation, it has improved a lot compared to Lily's book. Secondly, the creation of the protagonist. So far, only part of the plot would be a little awkward if viewed through his adult soul, and the rest of the plot is controlled just fine. There is basically no golden finger. There are only memories from time travel and the ability to turn on small stoves in dreams. The rest depends on the protagonist's own efforts. At present, the protagonist's image is three-dimensional and full. He is smart but not showy, kind but not unrealistic. Everything is centered on himself, but the sun is the sun, and the warmth he exudes unconsciously is enough to illuminate others. I'll add what I think of later. At least now I think this book is worth starting to follow.

Quite good entertainment article! Even after watching only half of it, I immediately felt the urge to learn about the film industry. It was considered a "worthwhile trip" OvO The article has a full structure. There is no pure line description or statement, but equal emphasis on face description and side description. Appearance, action, and language description are used alternately. It is not only what the protagonist sees and hears, but also narration from multiple angles. The plot is more vivid in this way (maybe the pace is a bit slow?), And it is very attractive. (I really like the growth-oriented protagonist and look forward to Phoenix's growth path!) At the same time, the writing style is also a highlight, smooth and delicate, without any feeling of stiffness and stagnation. The description of details is my favorite part, such as the description and metaphor of Fini's green eyes, some focus processing in the description of the environment, and the professional vocabulary used in film and television... Keep writing and look forward to the author's continuous progress!

Except for the slow pace, everything else is fine. The protagonist is super charming. Peter Pan is a key node in the first plot. It is indeed a bit slow. The plot of the little girl is actually a bit sloppy and takes too much ink to describe. If not, it would be much faster to go directly to the rehearsal plot. The preview plot is very well written. The most shining point in the book is that the protagonist is particularly charming. Peter Pan is also very charming. It is completely free and authoritative 🤔. The preview is not over yet. , In fact, I was looking forward to everyone's reaction after the official performance. Just like the protagonist said, everyone looked at him and could only look at him. The heartthrob was coming. After that, there should be a scene with the captain. I am also looking forward to this. I think it will be very interesting. The collision of two contradictory souls is very dramatic. The captain and Peter Pan, I think it will be very interesting. People who yearn for freedom and the embodiment of freedom, they can be enemies. It is really interesting. I have never heard of this story before. Yes, I like it very much. After finishing Peter Pan, are you looking forward to what the next character will be? Now the protagonist only has one character, and there are so many chapters. There is no need to reduce the details of the performance. The pace is just a little faster. Don't deliberately increase it. It is an accident during the preparation process. Other readers may think it is a bit too detailed, but I think the rehearsal, the early stage, is accurate. Preparing for the audition and everything was okay, except for the little girl in the middle. The story was a bit delayed. Anyway, I think I can accept it. It's very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking. I like the protagonist. I also like the person who plays the protagonist. I also like his current role. His improvisation every time, I also think it is very personal. I think it's okay for drama fans. 🤔

Beautiful, recommended! It gets better later on, the plot progresses a bit slowly, but the writing is very delicate, the protagonist has a very charming personality, and it is a masterpiece of entertainment. I am also very confused about the one star deducted because there are traces of AI polishing in the first few chapters, which made me disgusted. I hate AI writing. In my opinion, AI writing is unfair to authors who insist on writing by their own hands. If there are too many AI articles and get good reviews, sooner or later the bad money will drive out the good money. But only the first few chapters have a strong AI flavor, and the writing in the later chapters is getting better and better, so I only deducted one star. In my opinion, there are currently no other poisonous points. Recommended viewing•̀֊•́✧

It's a bit sparse and the pace is slow, but it's okay. The protagonist is good. I hope to write about HP series, Home Alone 123, The Sixth Sense, Life of Pi and other works. I prefer the track of child actors. It's a rare book that I like, and I hope the author doesn't stop reading it. I had a book that I really liked before and ended it after the winter vacation. I like Phoenix very much, and I hope there will be a beautiful story.

It's very good. Those who like entertainment and relatively detailed descriptions will probably like this article. What attracts me more is that the protagonist is smart and knows how to plan for himself. In addition, the author is very good at foreshadowing, allowing people to be involved in the plot, and it is easy to believe in the plot, making people believe that the Peter Pan play is very attractive and will be very successful. In fact, I just watched Peter Pan before and didn't think it was particularly good, but the author's description made me really feel the charm of this story. In addition, this article is quite enjoyable. The protagonist is very powerful and absolutely the protagonist. The people I meet are good and bad, but the bad ones are offline quickly, and the good ones are really good. It's just that it's still a little short right now. I hope the author will continue writing and not be discouraged [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The writing is very good, there is not too much rhetoric, and the plot advances quickly without delay. The most eye-catching thing for me was that when filming the plot of "Peter Pan", the little girl's crisis finally did not need to be handled by a child - I was tired of seeing young protagonists who had resources but did not use them, and had to solve the problem by themselves. In this crisis, the protagonist is just an introduction. After discovering it, it is up to a few adults to solve it. The process is also briefly described, and more plots still surround the protagonist. It's just that the article is too small. When I saw that it only had more than a thousand pages, I didn't even want to click in. But now it's fine. I have to wait for updates.

It's very beautiful, the rhythm is smooth, and the characters are very vivid. It doesn't use a lot of adjectives to establish the characters, but uses words, deeds, and stories to establish the characters. Now that I have seen it, I have remembered that I fell in love with Percy, Hannah, Mrs. Li, and the self-disciplined, smart and lovely Philly.

The plot entry point is very good and the rhythm is appropriate. I really like this type of writing. The only drawback may be that there are too many analytical texts, which may fall into the controversy of AI writing. Perhaps writing more about the characters' own thoughts will make the impression better. Come on, author! It would be great to keep writing this book!!