This is a card-based world. Some are born kings, some draw cards and become gods, some combine cards and become saints, and some create cards to rule their corner of the world. After Lin Yun injects himself with a mutagen, he awakens the [Unknown] talent. From the start, he gets just five low-level white cards. How can someone with such terrible luck survive in a high-martial world?
Later, he discovers that his [Unknown] talent can grant him new cards at random, so he renames it [Lucky One] and keeps triggering the talent to get more cards!
“Why do you have a Backpack card?”
“Why do you have a [Flight] card?”
“Why did you collect all twelve cards in the Sword Moves series so quickly?”
“You're the first person to complete the all-purple-card achievement?”
“What? You can trigger the Rainbow Glow card too???”
Lin Yun's legendary life begins.
The writing was okay, but I felt it was too detailed, and the protagonist group felt like they had become a group of passers-by. Some settings and competitions can be briefly summarized, and there is no need to write them in detail. Although I know that you, the author, want to express all the settings, it is a bit dazzling and scattered for readers. I took a look at the comment section, and most of your readers have the same feeling as me. It's not that your writing is not good, your writing is actually very good. I like the protagonist group very much, but there are too many details interspersed in it, and the priorities are not very clear, but overall it is still very good, come on
Overall it's pretty good, the flaws don't hide the good points, the protagonist doesn't engage in ambiguity and grows up slowly with his teammates. The protagonist's talent is growth-oriented, not invincible, but it's not too frustrating either. It describes the process of the Tianjiao Competition, and introduces the players' card information and so on. It is too detailed. It can be covered in a few paragraphs, but it turns out that it has written many chapters in detail. The protagonist is an audience member, and he didn't even get a lucky audience award. He is just a passerby. It's not that you can't write about people and things that have nothing to do with the protagonist, but you shouldn't go into too much detail. I like reading audiobooks when reading other novels, but it's not easy to read this book because I often have to manually turn pages and skip paragraphs and chapters. There are a lot of irrelevant plots. I can insist on following the article because I like the talents of the protagonist and grow together with my teammates and become stronger🍉
It feels like a pretty good group portrait article, and there is no inexplicable plot. Also, some people say that it is watery, which can only mean that there are not enough updates. If there are ten updates a day, is it still water? No, this is careful and perfect.
The writing is okay and you can read it. It's all about various combat powers. The data here are relatively high. I haven't studied them in detail, but you can still read them. Then there are some minor mistakes. Some sections are quite long. Come on, good luck.
I personally like it very much. It's not that poisonous and very smooth. If you like cards, you can check it out. It's very good.
This book is very interesting!
Okay, in the early stage, I'm more of a support player, slow to warm up, and semi-invincible. After all, the richest person in the team is not very rich, so that's normal. You can take a look, raising books may be the best choice, but I don't know if the author will suddenly lose contact, and the next time we meet will be a new book😏
Not bad, looks a bit relaxed
It looks good, and the humorous comments in the card introduction are also a highlight. The pacing is well controlled and the text focuses on group portraits.