Genshin Impact: Card Pool Character, Gun Master Carries the Heroic Spirit Sword on His Back

This book is hard to read. There are many poisonous points, especially the character of the protagonist. Let me start with the character design of the protagonist. In the early stage, the protagonist lost his memory and traveled to the period of the Demon God War. He said, "Why is the class differentiation so serious in this era?" Make sure you are not a three-year-old kindergarten student, and then forcefully establish an order to restrain those demons. Fanes has told you before that some demons have bad tempers, and if you forcefully restrain them, you are not afraid of forcing them to kill a bunch of people. After all, demons have this ability (it is said in this work that they can only be known if they violate the order). Are you thinking about mortals? Isn't this equivalent to harming a mortal, and it doesn't reflect his paranoid character? This is pure stupidity. Let's talk about the protagonist's paranoia, but you want to reflect his paranoia in the treatment of guilty people. Your protagonist said that guilty people must die, and those who have no choice but to bear guilt must die. So doesn't this contradict the protagonist in the introduction? The protagonist in the introduction talks about being considerate by mortals, but the protagonist in the main film does not show this. After all, you have said that those who are guilty must die, so how can you show that you are considerate by mortals? After all, some people have no choice but to feel guilty. After talking about the characterization of the protagonist, let's talk about other settings. Can the author use less vulgar language because it is too dramatic? Then in the setting of the book, you have a big problem. Bringing the Beng Tie character in, your combat power is directly destroyed. Moreover, bringing the Bent Tie character in, I feel that the author is not able to grasp their original character design, and the character design may collapse later. To sum it up, there are too many flaws and too many poison points. My suggestion is to just go back and remake it.

Looks good, okay.

I always forget to review.

The fighting strength collapsed and Feixiao came out.

Not bad, just use it to kill time